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in the poem Steven has used anaphora for the phrases "hate he said X3" and "I mourn X3"it also uses repetition on both of them as well. in his voice through the video it would go from a quiet volume to a very loud yell his pace was fast, he rhymed a lot and he used a rhetorical question in the phrase "a day, is that too much to ask." . during the poem Mr Oliver used rhyming patterns from the first two anaphora phrases he did this to influence this on how mad he was by the other person who didn't care about the aboriginal holidays.

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How has Steven Oliver used vocal qualities (volume, pitch, pace, pauses, emphasis) to engage audiences?

Do any language features stand out? (eg. rhyme, repetition, alliteration, metaphor, simile, inclusive language, rhetorical question)

How is the poem structured? (eg. stanzas, rhyming patterns) Does this (or do these) change/ influence the meaning of the poem?

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1) To engage the audiences Steven Oliver used emphasis ,pitch and pause.

2) Steven Oliver poem " Hate He Said " uses variety of language features like repetition, alliteration, rhetorical question and inclusive language to put a impact on audience.

3) The poem is structured in stanzas because to highlight the mistreatment of the Aboriginals.

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Oliver used vocal qualities such as pace, pausing, emphasis and volume to engage the audience to listen to the poem and get his message out and his rhyming made the poem flow. there was repetition in many areas including at the beginning where he said 'Hate he said, . Hate he said,  …' to emphasise the hatred of 'he'. Oliver made it so he stayed on topic while rhyming so it made sense and so the audience gets hooked in by the rhythm.

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'Hate He Said' invites the audience to see an argument in two different perspectives. it further states the point of view of the poet, and the point of view of the opposing person.

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Steven Oliver uses many poetic devices in his poem, 'Hate He Said'. He used repetition with the phrase 'hate he said...', he used strong emotive language like; empathy, mourn, discriminate. The poet also uses a lot of emphasis when he voiced his poem in his video.

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'Hate he Said' invites audiences to see a debate in someone else's view. It shows the point of view of the poet, and gives a bit of a perspective on the opposer.

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The text invites us to think about how unfair life is for the Aboriginals and think about it from a Aboriginals point of view.

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the text invites us to believe that one of the people that were in the text believed that Australia day and ANZAC day was a waste of time and there was no point to Australia day or ANZAC day, in the poem Steven Oliver fights back with how Australia day and ANZAC day are not a waste of time because they both are about the thing we lost/took and how we need to respect what happened in the past.

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The text was produced in January the 25th 2013.
The public holidays that were displayed/told such as Christmas, boxing day, Easter and Anzac day.

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Steven Oliver's poem 'Hate He Said', was published on the 25th of January. This poem acknowledged the events that happened when the Europeans arrived.

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this text was produced on January 25th 2013. Which was also one day before Australia day.

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I think that, because of the date of the poems release (25 January), Oliver's poem was intentionally released the day before Anzac day to show that he might want another day more dedicated to Aboriginal Australians.

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Oliver's poem makes me feel.
Empathy but he likes to express himself and his feeling, why he thinks the other days are unless such as boxing day

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Oliver's poem 'Hate He Said' was produced on 25th of January, 2013 which was 1 day before Australia day.He uses the special event for the agrument poem.

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Steven Oliver used vocal qualities such as emphasis, pace, and pauses to capture the audience's attention, make the poem flow smoothly and create a greater impact on audiences. In the phrase '...Where the whole nation stops, like it does for a horse!...' the author uses a rhetorical question to get audiences thinking and involved. It also helps non-Aboriginal audiences to understand the struggles of Aboriginal people. Oliver mostly incorporates an 'AABB' rhyming scheme to keep the audience engaged. He also effectively uses stanzas to point out an idea to focus on for each stanza.

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The text was made on the 25th of January (day before Australia day). The poem mentions many events of the year, 'We have a day for Australia, the Queen, for New Years and Christmas and all those between like Labour and Easter, the ANZAC parade...'. Oliver uses those special days as an example for the argument poem. To get their point of view.

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When was this poem produced?
This poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013.
What social and cultural traditions are represented in the text?
The social and cultural traditions represented/mentioned in this text was ANZAC Day, Survival Day, Boxing Day, Easter and NAIDOC Week.

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The poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013 and Oliver was talking about how its important to support the dates like NAIDOC week and New Years and Anzac Day.

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Oliver's poem is touching in a weird way because the way he expressed him self and telling us why there's other day's that are useless such as boxing and the Aboriginal people don't have a day that talks about Aboriginal peoples past and how they survived or maybe there life back in the day.

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The poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013 as he was talked about the event people should not forget the significance of these events such as NAIDOC week, Australia day and Anzac day .

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How does the poem make you feel?
The poem makes me feel that the thing he said could be true and making me wonder why we have a lot of those things. He was also saying to not forgot the past and he explain why not to forget it

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Oliver's  poem was produced on 25th of January  and it was one day before Anzac day. some of the events that show's in the text is Boxing day , Australia  day and  Naidoc week, Christmas Easter and etc.

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This poem was produced on the day before Survival Day otherwise know as Australia Day the 25th of January, 2013. Oliver described the event of the British raiding Australia and taking the land and the war they had for the land along the shore of East Australia.

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The text was published on 25 January 2013, which is also 1 day before Australia Day. Some of the social and cultural events that are represented in the text are ANZAC Day, Boxing Day, NAIDOC Week and Australia Day.

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This poem was produced on the day before Australian day, 25th January, 2013. The social and cultural events represented in the poem were, Anzac Day, New Years, Christmas, Labor, Easter and more.

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The poem 'Hate He Said' by Steven Oliver was made in 2013 on the 25 of January and the poem is about Aboriginals history and some events in the text that were mentioned are ANZAC day, Australia day, The Queens birthday, new year, Christmas, Labour day, Easter and Boxing Day.

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Oliver's poem made me feel really touched and taught me more about Survival day because he talks about how unfair the Europeans treated the Indigenous people.

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The poem was  produced on the 25 of January 2013,the cultural traditions represented in this video where: Anzac day, NAIDOC week are the only two social and cultural traditions represented in the text

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Oliver's poem makes makes me feel empathy and this poem is to explain another way of thinking about Australia Day celebrations.

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How does this poem make you feel?
Oliver's poem makes me feel more educated on Survival Day and about why people acknowledge this day and the importance of it.

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The poem was produced on... the 25th of January, Steven Oliver released, 'hate he said'. Which is the day before Australia day. This was on purpose as he intended to educated the public about the troubles that are hidden and forgotten.

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The poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013, which was one day before Australia day.

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Mr Oliver's Poem was produced on the 25th of January 2013. The cultural traditions were Naidoc, Anzac Day, Boxing Day, Christmas ect. Good Job Mr Oliver.

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Steven Oliver's poem 'Hate He Said', made me understand Steven's point and informed me about his belief and perspective.

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the poem was produced on the 25th of jan 2013. some of the social and cultural traditions are, ' anzac, boxing day, naidoc and easter' thas pretty much it i think

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I think the poet is smart because they are telling us their point of view in a fictional argument, while telling the reader.
The poem makes me feel heartbroken that other events get their own day, and that that one day does not.

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Oliver's poem made me feel some empathy but I was kind of confused on what he was talking about. His voice was strong but in my opinion I didn't fully understand it or like it that much.

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Oliver's poem made me feel empathetic towards Aboriginal people because they don't have a day for them. For example there is Australia day, there's a day for horses but no day for Aboriginal people.

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Oliver's poem made me feel empathy as his poem was full of emotion as he talked about the past events that have happened and that he was willing to fight for the right for the people who gave their lives to protect the land and that he also believes in his opinion and values.

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Steven Oliver's poem makes me feel sad for the Aboriginals and scared because Steven does not sound very happy and he says hate a lot.

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Oliver's poem was well written because of the use of several points of view which caused me to think about this poem's unique style.

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Oliver's poem, 'hate he said,' made me feel connected to his perspective, how aboriginals have been mistreated since the arrival of the Europeans. This poem highlights the mistreatment of the Aboriginals.

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Oliver's Poem makes me feel like I should give more empathy about Survival Day or even just the Aboriginal People in general more than I already do, by describing the dispossession of their land after the fighting for their land

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Oliver's poem did not make me feel anything in particular. This poem is about someone indigenous wanting a holiday for remembrance for what happened to those who died.

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Mr Oliver's Poem " Hate He Said" , made me feel touched and sympathetic, I liked how he fought hard to have a day for those who fought for their country, for those who died doing that. I liked it overall.

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Oliver's poem, 'Hate He Said' made me feel sympathy for Indigenous Australians and how they've been mistreated for many generations. I think the poem is about enforcing a day celebrating the Indigenous lives and generations that were lost.

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Oliver's poem... gave me some sort of empathy, but as I didn't fully understand the poem. The poem was about how the Aboriginals where murder and stolen, and as it is forgotten.

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oliver's poem, 'hate he said' makes me feel appreciative of his understanding and wanting for a change and the fact that he is willing to fight for it. i think he wrote this because he loves his culture and traditions.

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Oliver's poem made me feel like the other person didn't care or dint want Anzac day to be a real holiday and same with the other aboriginal holidays.

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How has Steven Oliver used vocal qualities (volume, pitch, pace, pauses, emphasis) to engage audiences?

Do any language features stand out? (eg. rhyme, repetition, alliteration, metaphor, simile, inclusive language, rhetorical question)

How is the poem structured? (eg. stanzas, rhyming patterns) Does this (or do these) change/ influence the meaning of the poem?

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Poem written by Steven Oliver about Australia Day.

"Hate He Said"

Hate, he said was in my heart

Hate, he said tore us apart

Hate, he said to let it go

Hate, he said but he did not know

That what I had inside of me

Was a sadness born of empathy

That because I did not celebrate

It did not mean I was full of hate

I asked him to just try and see

Through my eyes the tragedy

Of dispossession, of pain, of hurt

Of the red of blood that stained this earth

I mourn for all the lives that were lost

I mourn for what this country cost

I mourn for how we came to be

For the end does not justify the means

It's in the past he said, move on

Why mourn for something so long gone?

I looked at him and came to say,

Do you think we should forget about ANZAC day?

It's not the same was his retort

I said wait a minute, give it some thought

People died while fighting for their land

Defending it from a foreign hand

Make no mistake there was a war

That had been fought on these very shores

A war that didn't always discriminate

Where the elderly or infants could meet the same fate

As those who fought to protect them so

And that's why we should never let go

Never forget what price was paid

For us to live as we do today

He looked at me quite seriously

Said he celebrates because we're free

He celebrates our democracy

And everything great in this country

I said, that's fine, I get that, it's clear

Just please don't forget how we got here

Just take a moment to think it through

What price was paid for me and you

To live in this country as we do

Don't take for granted the sacrifice

We need to remember those who died

Not let their legacy be swept aside

You got an apology, he said

It talked about loss and mentioned the dead

What more do you want? He asked of me,

And so I replied in the hope he would see

We have a day for Australia, the Queen

For New Years and Christmas and all those between

Like Labour and Easter, the ANZAC Parade

And just what the hell is Boxing Day?

There's even a day that we have for the Shows

But nothing that speaks of my people's woes

A national day to acknowledge the cause

To acknowledge all that has happened before

And I don't mean NAIDOC I mean something more

Where the whole nation stops, like it does for a horse!

A day, is that too much to ask?

To remind us, don't ignore the past

He processed my words and looked at the ground

We both sat in silence, then there was a sound

A sound that seemed like heaven to me

A sound of two words that said, I agree!

We talked some more as the day came to end

And despite our differences I'd made a new friend

He understood as the day came to night

That I needed some things in this country made right

And because I did not celebrate

It did not mean I was full of hate.

© Steven Oliver 24/01/2012

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Poem written by Steven Oliver about Australia Day. "Hate He Said" Hate, he said was in my heart Hate, he said tore us apart Hate, he said to let it go Hate, he said but he did not know That what I had...