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Argumentative Thesis Statement
Example
Public Transport should be free for the poor as the poor will require to travel to place where there are soup kitchens or any other charitable places and they will need the free transport to go to work too

Analytical Thesis Statement
An analysis of the college admission process reveals one challenge facing counselors: accepting students with high test scores or students with strong extracurricular backgrounds.

2. In conclusion , to brief , Finally

3.The introduction is a method to introduce the whole story so an introduction with a good thesis statement and one that generalize what the whole essay is all about is important .
And after that the body of the essay is required fir content
And finally to make a conclusion ensure that the conclusion conclude the whole essay and does not stray from the topic

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1)Argumentative Thesis Statement
Example : Secondhand smoke is just as harmful as smoking and leads to a higher risk of cancer and heart disease, hence smoking in any public place should be banned.
Informative Thesis Statement
Example : To exercise all body muscles at once, you can take up swimming as a form of exercise.

2)thus,to summarize, to sum up.

3)Introduction
- Write a catchy opening line or hook sentence to grab reader’s attention.We can using an interesting stastistic or quote.
-Introduce the topic and elaborate by introducing facts or ideas that you intend to use as main points or major sections of your essay.

-State your thesis. After you introduce the overall topic, you should conclude the introduction paragraph with a single statement that acts as your thesis.

Conclusion
-Restate and rewrite the main points and the thesis statement without changing their meaning. This is needed so that the conclusion does not look like a repetition of the main body sentences.

– Write the concluding paragraph; remember that it should be short and clear. The last sentence of the concluding sentence is as significant as the thesis statement in the introduction.
– Make sure the conclusion covers your thesis statement, and the main point of the essay.

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1) argumentative thesis statement
- public services such as public restrooms, regular food donation and other public facilities should also be shared with a homeless so that it would improve life for all resident of that city
three-point thesis
- junk food is bad for your health because because it can increase you blood sugar, make you feel inactive and weak and increase the risk of being an obes.
2) in summary, to sum up , in short
3) introduction  :
- defining words
- telling a story
- asking a question
- using quotation
- making a comparison and contrast
conclusion :
- restate thesis statement
- recommend a solution
- express hope
- state a powerful fact
- state consequences

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1. Types of thesis statements are closed and open thesis statements. First of all, closed thesis statements is a statement of the main idea of the argument that also previews the major points the writer intends to make. For example, everyone should drive a hybrid car because they pollute less, they have better mileage, and they also help to reduce petrol’s cost. Secondly, open thesis statement is a general opinion and position that is taken on a topic without going into specific details. For example, good parenting is necessary for effective child upbringing.

2. finally, in conclusion, in a word

3. Steps on how to write introduction :-
- general statement
- include background and information
- thesis statement

Steps on how to write a conclusion:-
- restate thesis statement
- then can :-
• recommend a solution
• express hope
• make a strong comment
• use quotation
• state a power fact
•consequences

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1) argumentative thesis statement

- public services such as public restrooms, regular food donation and other public facilities should also be shared with a homeless so that it would improve life for all resident of that city
three-point thesis

- junk food is bad for your health because because it can increase you blood sugar, make you feel inactive and weak and increase the risk of being an obes.

2) in summary, to sum up , in short

3) introduction  :
- defining words
- telling a story
- asking a question
- using quotation
- making a comparison and contrast

conclusion :
- restate thesis statement
- recommend a solution
- express hope
- state a powerful fact
- state consequences

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1) argumentative thesis statement

- public services such as public restrooms, regular food donation and other public facilities should also be shared with a homeless so that it would improve life for all resident of that city
three-point thesis

- junk food is bad for your health because because it can increase you blood sugar, make you feel inactive and weak and increase the risk of being an obes.

2) in summary, to sum up , in short

3) introduction  :
- defining words
- telling a story
- asking a question
- using quotation
- making a comparison and contrast

conclusion :
- restate thesis statement
- recommend a solution
- express hope
- state a powerful fact
- state consequences

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i. Argumentative thesis statement.
Example: Monitoring children on their internet use is important to make sure they are using it the right way as children could spend more time on dark websites, avoid face to face interaction and easily influenced by inappropriate behaviour.
ii. Expository thesis statement.
Example: Parents should monitor their children's use of internet in order to avoid any harmful activitues that could effect their future in the long run.

2) thus, Therefore, To sum it up.

3)
i. Introduction

Grab the reader's attention by startling information, quotation, or questions.

Write one or two sentences that will lead to your thesis statement.

Finish with your thesis statement.

ii. Conclusion

Restate your thesis statement in whole another words without changing its meaning.

Recommend a solution for your whole essay.

Express hope.

State a strong comment, fact or even consequences to make your conclusion interesting.

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i) Argumentative thesis statement

Technology usage should be controlled because it restricting human’s imagination, reduced communication between humans and makes people lack of concentration

ii) Three-point thesis statement

Cycling should be promoted as a good sport for everyone because it promotes weight loss, builds muscle and helps improve mental well-being.

2.

i) To conclude

ii) Hence

iii) To summarize

3.

i) Introduction

Write a general statement that will catch the reader’s attention.

Write some informations about your topic.

Write thesis statement.

ii) Conclusion

Restate thesis statement.

Ending your essay by giving recommendation, express hope or give a comment about the essay.

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Muhammad Nabil Syahir bin Samsol Johari (2017218912

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Muhammad Nabil Syahir bin Samsol Johari (2017218912

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1) Expository thesis statement

-The movies of John Hughes feature high school students from different walks of life, the element of teen romance and memorable soundtracks that enhance the theme of teen angst.

Analytical thesis statement

-The story of Harry Potter contributes to the sense of Justice and curiosity throughout the novel.

2) Finally,Hence, Therefore

3)Introduction
-start with a question
-include interesting facts
-thesis statement
-stick to the formal language

Conclusion
-restate thesis statement
-review supporting details
-summarize arguments by paraphras

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HAIKAL AFIES (2017223954)

1)Because junk food is bad for your health, the size of sodas offered at fast-food restaurants should be regulated by the federal government  (ARGUMENTATIVE)

The Internet serves as a means of expediently connecting people all across the globe, fostering new friendships and an exchange of ideas that wouldn't have occurred prior to its inception..(EXPLANATORY)

2)Concisely, As a final point , To end with

3)Steps to write an introduction

-          Capture your reader’s attention by begin your essays with mysterious statements, funny story or a question.

-           Explain the content by providing the background information.

-          State your thesis statement by introduce your subjects which is a sentences that expresses the main idea.

Steps to write a conclusion.

-          Restates your main idea along with the support sentences and summarizes the whole essays .

-          Try to finish up your conclusion with a statement that leaves your readers with a something to ponder.

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(MEGAT HAKIMI)(2017209646)

1)Federal immigration enforcement law needs to be overhauled because it puts undue constraints on state and local police. (ARGUMENTATIVE)

-Reading develops a child's mind by fostering comprehension skills, increasing vocabulary, and exposing them to new worlds they might not otherwise encounter.(EXPLANATORY)

2)In a nutshell, last but  not least, To sum up.

3) Introduction.

Introductory statements

- Is the initial that makes the ultimate point, introduces the idea or  importance and opens the door to the meat of contents.

Thesis Statement

- Is one sentence that expresses the main idea of a research paper or   essay.

Introduce supporting ideas(optional)

- Contain facts, statements, examples-specifics which guide us to a full understanding of the main idea.

Conclusion

-Transition, statement reflecting back on thesis

-The sentence should summarize what you said in thesis statement.

-Restate key points

-Ending statement that provokes thought (optional)

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Explanatory Thesis Statement

Student should minimize consuming fast food,they prefer eat fast food rather than a healthy meals,student should give more attention on fitness and healthy diet,it can lead student to a way of healthy life and prevent them from disease.

Argumentative Thesis Statement

Based on the statistic accident in 2015,there all over 489,606 accident that have been recorded as a driver should follow the rules that have been made and maintained by an authority while driving all kind of vehicle to avoid accident.

in the final analysis,ultimately,in essence

write the introduction with something can attract the attention of reader.Present the reason for pot's existence.Bring up issue nowdays that can related to the topic and explain how the post will help adress the problem that brought reader to it.

write the conclusion with restate thesis.Summarize all your point in simple and short sentence.End the last sentence with something that reader feeling impress to your essay

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Muhammad Azim (2017218698)
1.Argument Thesis Statement.
Example: Celcom should improve their network from low speed to better as like as the elses.
Analytical Thesis Statement.
Example: By upgrading the graphic, Valve can increasing the number of Dota 2 players and launch many rare items in order to improve their profits.
2. as can be seen, in conclusion, overall.
3. Introduction:
Step 1: Write a catchy opening line.
Step 2: Introduce your topic.
Step 3: Write a clear, focused thesis statement.
Conclusion:
Step 1: Write an opening sentence for your conclusion.
Step 2: Summarize your strongest points.
Step 3: Leave the reader with a lasting impression.

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1. Expository thesis statement- Explain the topic to the readers and audience
Exp: The documentary featuring about life of animals in the wild, how they behaving through different season, how they hunt and fight for their territory, food, shelter and mate"
Argumentative- By taking stand on a subject and you must provide supporting details why you make the claim
Exp: International music do influence more and more teens in our country also could bring bad effect to our country rather than local music, international music should be banned do you agree? Defend your claim"

2. To summarize, as conclusion

3.Introduction
-using quotation
-making comparison or contrast
-defininh words
Conclusion
-express hope
-state effect
-state fact

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1) Argumantative
Example : Education is important to have because it could enable one to get a better paying job.
•Explanatory
Example : High levels of alcohol consumption will have bad effects on your personal health, such as weight gain, heart disease, and liver complications.

2) therefore , furthermore,as a result

3) •Introduction :
i) begin with general statements
ii) include background information
iii) thesis statement

•Conclusion :
i) restate thesis statement
ii) give a hope
iii) recommand a suggestion

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a) There are two major types of thesis statements: explanatory and argumentative. The explanatory thesis announces the subject to the reader; it never declares a stance which needs an argument to defend. These explanatory theses are evident in expository essays and research essays. In an argumentative essay, the thesis statement should be a claim, not a factual statement or a personal response to a topic. It should be an idea that provokes opposition, a claim that readers might choose to refute.

examples :
argumentative thesis statement
Malaysians should eliminate the regular consumption of breakfast rich with fats because it may lead to excessive obesity, feeling sleepy after eat and may lead to death.

explanatory thesis statement
We will discuss the origins and how ping pong became one of most renowned sports of human history.

b)
as a result

for this reason
therefore

c)
how to write an introduction
i. let the reader know what u want to write.  grab your reader's attention.
ii. explain a bit about your main topic
iii. write a simple thesis statement

how to write a conclusion
i. restate your thesis statement
ii. express hope and use powerful fact to convince reader
iii. give a suggestion

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- What can I learn from the movie Accepted?

It’s normal when you have fail because you can try again until you can achieve your dreams. So if it does not work out, keep going if it is important to you, then it is worthy of your time and energy.

Create your own path. Life is not about finding yourself, it is about creating yourself. We should bear in mind that the usual ‘system’ does not eork for everyone. You do not have to go to college to be ‘somebody’ so if going to college is not your cup of tea then it is okay to take the risk and against the ‘system’.

Always bear in mind that not all rejections are bad. Some rejections probably will lead you to something new or more successful path.

-Why the character act that way?

Bartleby constantly being rejected by 7 top-notch colleges including the least ranked college. He was pressured by his parents as his father said “if you want to be somebody, you go to college’ despite the utter dissapointment by his parents, he decided to fake his ‘college’ acceptance letter by creating a fake college.

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Question : The movie is pessimistic or optimistic about human nature?

Answer : Based on the movie Accepted(2006), the movie is pessimistic about human nature as the main character, Bartleby lied to his parents about his acceptance into a college. Not only that, he didn’t tell the truth to the students that came to register at the university that he created. His intention is good because he believes that each person have their own speciality and hidden talents but the way he handle the problems aren’t logical and very wrong.

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Who do you want to imitate in the accepted movie?

The person that I want to imitate in this movie is Bartleby because he never give up eventhough he was been rejected by multiple college that he applied. Next,he stand up for his principles.He voice up at the court that it is okay to be different.As long as your figure out what your dreams,goals or what you want to do in your life.So all you have to do is convert your dream into passion then act towards achieving your goal.

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How does the main character changes?

Answer: At the beginning of the story, Bartleby was seeing as a hopeless guy because he got rejected from any university he applied for and that made him to open his own university with the help of his friends. Initially, it was a cover up for his parents but something happened that made all the rejects wanted to enroll in his university, he tried to reject them but after hearing their complaints he didn't have the heart to stop it.

The character slowly changing when he realized that every rejects that went to his none-existent university is actually have their own capabilities and unique in their own ways including himself. He started to create courses that doesn't exist. The passion he had in him made him standing up for his friends in court and ended up winning.

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if you can change the title what would it be?

Rejected would be the title that i want to change as the movie tells about the main character (bartleby) being rejected by all colleges that he apply.

Discuss the external factors that lead to the main character decision

- to impress his schoolmate,peers and friends as the other already get accepted by some colleges
- he did not want to dissappoint his parents by not getting in to college
- wanted to help other people who have the same luck as him (did not accepted by any college) as he understand the feeling of being rejected so he did not want them to feel sad and sorrow.

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Question : what is your feeling about the movie ?
Answer : the movie feels incredible, awesome but nonsense . How can a teenagers build a college without any teaching basic ? The movie is incredible because Bartleby have a really good passion to make Dad and Mum happy . The movie was really awesome because Bartleby could actually make everyone felt their dream can be true such as the scene in the court.

Question : which aspect really worked and which didnt ?
Answer : im amazed with the number of students applied in the college, and the prop for the college were really awesome ! There is no aspect that didnt really worked so overall the movies waa great

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What is your favorite line in the movie?

·         When Bartleby Gaines decided to create a university namely South Harmon Institute of Technology ,with his friends .This part teach me that once you do figure it out and find your dream ,give it all you got. Never let people tell you what you can’t do.

What do you learn from the movie?

·         It is okay to be different, and it is totally okay to be rejected. As long as you figure out what your goals are or what you want to achieve in the future. Never let rejection be a wall for your success.

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How does the movie reflect the real world?
In real world, there are many students had been rejected by the colleges that they applied for. However, there are no such case for them to create a fake college so that they have a place to study. If they had been rejected, they might look for a job.

Memorable scene :
I think the most memorable scene is when Bartleby been given a chance to make his South Harmon Institute of Technology become legitimate. He makes an impassioned speech about the failures of conventional education. As the result, S.H.I.T been given a one year trial to test the system and later S.H.I.T become legitimate.

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Which performances particularly stood out?

Answer :- Bartleby Gaines who creates a fake college,The South Harmon Institute of Technology(SHIT).Bartleby Gaines role affects other character around him and make them to believe what there want to achieve.

If you a director,what can you do to make the movie is a thiller movie?

Answer :- bring a prestigious college to compete with SHIT college in Innovatian and Technology Festival.One the way to the festival the bus had accident cause by the bus tire explode and all of them die,the bus fall into river and never be found including their corpse.

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Is the movie as what you expected ?
The movie was as expected as the movie shows sign of the persons down fall as it is rather obvious in the movie
A character that i would add is a close friend called jacob who is a programmer who could make the fraud better and last a little longer as the story needs a bit of technical explaination and a little bit of uumph to make it more interesting

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The characteer that i like

in my opinion Bartleby Gaines is probably the character that i like the most in this movie because he is the type of guy that doesn't give up even when he's been rejected by every college he applied.He also like to think outside the box like when he decide to make his own college even thought it's a ridiculous idea.He shows to people that if you don't give up in certain things you will achieve it one day.

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What is the problem in this movie?

The movie portrays itself as a stupid, low-brow teen flick and it delivers on that portrayal. Problem is even with these low expectations, as a movie-goer you expect to be at least entertained. That’s where things go horribly.

How did you solve it?

Give a better grasph and understanding on the story line and ensure the movie portrays as more moral based rather than just stupid jokes

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Movie plot
The movie started with a senior student named Bartleby Gaines also known as the protagonist of the movie. He got envy with his friends after all the college he applied for turn him down. Yet he still does not want to disappoint his parent also to impress his schoolmates. So the only option he have is to make his own college to cover up his failure. Later, many student that were rejected just like him appplied and got accepted to his fake college named South Harmon Instituted of Technology . In the end of the movie, the conflict began when he must defend his college for ministry of education and rival college to keep South Harmon live on.The movie end with his university got official certificates.

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Q : If i can change the ending, how can I do it ?

A: when their college was going famous, many students that fail to continue their study was know about this college and applied the college. This college not only known by students but parents and also worldwide. One day, their college was being criticism with some parties because their college was not legal. After that, minister of education send a spy to look at how the college was going on. After a month being there, the spy become friends with the students and lecturer there and love them. The spy also love the subjects that he takes at the college because the course that he takes was his favourite’s. But, there is one college that actually their rival do something that makes the college will not certificate. The rival knows about the spy and they met the spy and give them money and will kill the spy if the spy give the good information about their rival. Day after day, the day of the judgement is come. The dabate between the college and minister of education was really great because to pretend their own college. After giving a lot of points to minister, they finally lose to the spy of minister. The college was finally not certificate and have to clear and close .