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Dear Mom and Dad ,

Let me share with you the adventure sports offer by Lingua Sports Academemy.I am really keen to join the BMX cycling. Mr Jackson will be my coach.He is a knowledgeable and a helpful coach.Moreover,the fee is only RM150 for five sessions.Not only that, i can spend my free time in a beneficial way.I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy.

Regards,

ChinHongZe

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Dear Mom and Dad,

Let me share with you the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am really keen to join BMX cycling. Mr. Jackson will be my coach. He is a knowledgeable and helpful coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM150 for five sessions. Not only that, I can spend my free time in a beneficial way. I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy.

Regards,
Chin Hong Ze

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Dear dad and mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy.I am keen to join paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr Jay Chou will be my coach . He is a knowledgeable and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM 90 for 3 sessions.It is affordable and reasonable.Not only that,I do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need to prepare body armour only.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports academy because it is a challenge for me to skate well and perform tricks

Your daughter

Misha

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can’t wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is a knowledgeable and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns as they will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare the body armor.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy. I am sure I can spend my time in a beneficial way.

Regards,

Misha

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports Academy.I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what?Mr.Jay Chou.Heis knowledgeable and helpful.Besides,the fee is Rm90.The price is afforable and reasonable.Lastly,I dont need to buy the air gun as it will provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball lesson.I am sure I can spent my free timein a beneficial way.

Your son,

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I don’t need to buy the air gun as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Kah Him

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Dear dad and mum,

I am eager to share with you about adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable reasonable. I do not need to buy air guns as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join paintball. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you the adventure sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I don’t need to buy the air gun as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Zhen Hong

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Dear Dad and Mun,

I am eager to share with you about adventure sports offered by Lingua Sport Academy. I am interested to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Beside, the free is RM 90. The price is affordable and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy body armours as it will be provided by the organiser.

I really hope you give me the green light to join paintball this coming. I am sure I can spend my fee time in a beautiful way.

Your san

Joe mun

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am interested in joining paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy body armor as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join paintball this coming holiday. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Joe Mun

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Dear Dad and Mom,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM 90. the price is reasonable. Lastly, I do not will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball lesson. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Esther

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Dear Dad and Mom,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to worry about buying the air gun as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Esther

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingue Sports Academy. I am keen to join the BMX cycling class this coming holiday.

Guess what, Mr Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is a knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150 for 5 sessions. The price is affordable and I can afford it with my own pocket money. lastly I don't need to buy a bike as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the BMX cycling challenge. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Hoi ling

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the BMX cycling class this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150 for five sessions. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I don't need to buy a bike as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the BMX cycling challenge. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Hoi Ling

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Dear dad and mum, I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday. Guess what? Mr Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful.Besides the fee is only RM90. The price is afforable and reasonable. Lastly, i dont need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer. I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball lesson. I am sure i can spend my free time in a beneficial way. Your daughter,

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is only RM90. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I don’t need to buy the air guns as they will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Yi Han

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Dear dad and mom,

I am eager to share with you about BMX cycling. I am keen to join BMX cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fees is RM150 for 5 sessions. The price is affordable and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy the bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you hope you give me the green light to join BMX cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Rou Xuan

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Dear Dad and Mom,

I am eager to share with you about BMX cycling. I am keen to join BMX cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150 for 5 sessions. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Lastly, I do not need to buy the bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX cycling. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Rou Xuan

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Dear dad and Mom, I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball class this coming school holiday. Guess what, Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. The coach is knowledge and helpful. Besides that, the fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I don't need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by the organizer and I only need to prepare body armour only. I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy. I can spend my free time in a beneficial way. Your son,

Tan Powell

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Dear Dad and Mom,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides that, the fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I don't need to buy the air guns as they will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare the body armor.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy. I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Tan Powell

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join BMX Cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr Jackson Wang is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150. The price is afforable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you can give me the green light to join the BMX Cycling. I can spend my free time in a benefical way.

Regards,

Yan Ann

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join BMX Cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jackson Wang is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy a bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you can give me the green light to join BMX Cycling. I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Regards,

Yan Ann

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about a Paintball academy. I am keen to join this military combat simulation this coming holiday.

Guess What! Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. Moreover, He is knowledgeable and professional coach. The fee is only RM 90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, but We also don't need to bring air guns as it is already provided by the organizer, the only thing I need to bring is body armor.

I hope you give me the green light to join.

Warm Regards

Tai Yoong Bing

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about a paintball academy. I am keen to join this military combat simulation this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. Moreover, he is a knowledgeable and professional coach. The fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, but we also don't need to bring air guns as they are already provided by the organizer; the only thing I need to bring is body armor.

I hope you give me the green light to join.

Warm regards,
Tai Yoong Bing

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Dear Mom and Dad,

I am eager to share with you about adventure sports offered by Lingua sports Academy. I am keen to join Paintball class this coming holiday. Guess what? Mr. Jau Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpfull. Besides, the fee is RM90 3 sessions. The price is afforable and reasonable. Lastly, i do not need to buy air guns as it will be provided by the organizer. I really hope you give me the green light to join. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Malcolm

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Dear Mom and Dad,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the Paintball class this coming holiday. Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90 for 3 sessions. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy air guns as they will be provided by the organizer. I really hope you give me the green light to join. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Malcolm

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Dear dad and mum, I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday. Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. The fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. The price is affordable and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air gun as it will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare some body armour. I really hope that you give me the green light in this Lingua Sports Academy because I can spend my free time in a beneficial way. Your son, Aden

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. The fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. The price is affordable, and I can afford it with my own pocket money. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air gun as it will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare a set of body armor.

I really hope that you give me the green light to join Lingua Sports Academy because I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Aden

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about. I am keen to join paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM 90 for 3 sessions. The price is affortable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy paintball as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball lesson. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial.

Your Daughter,

Melissa.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about my interest in paintball. I am keen to join the paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90 for 3 sessions. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy the paintball equipment as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join the paintball class. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Melissa

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Beside, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy air guns as it will be provided by the organiser.

I really hope you can give me the green light to join it. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter

Law Qin Er

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90. The price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy air guns as they will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you can give me the green light to join the paintball activities. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,
Law Qin Er

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Dear Dad and mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I would like to join the adventure sports.

Guess what? Mr Lee Choong Wai will be my coach. The coach is knowledgeable and helpful. He also have 10 years experienced on this sport. Besides, the fee is only RM100 per month. It's reasonable and affordable. I do not need to buy the knee guards and helmet because it will be prepare by the academy.

I really hope you can let me join it, please. So that, I can spend my free time in a benifical way.

Your daughter,

Jessmin

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Dear Dad and mum,

Iam eager to share with you about Lingua Sports Academy. Iam interested to join skateboarding this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr Messi is my coach. He is know ledgable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM 120. The price is afforable 4 sessions. Lastly, I do not need to buy skateboard as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me green light to join skateboarding. Iam sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Liew Jia Yu.

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Dear Mum and Dad, I am can't wait to share with you about adventure sports Academy.I am keen to join Paintball this holiday. Guess What?Mr Jay Chou is my coach.He is knowledge and helpful.Besides,the price is afforable reasonable.Lastly,I do not deed to buy body arm our as it will be provided by the organizer. I really hope you can give me the green light to join adventure sports Academy.I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way. Your son Jia Xian

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Dear Mum and Dad,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports Academy. I am keen to join paintball this holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the price is affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy body armor as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you can give me the green light to join the adventure sports Academy. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your son,
Jia Xian

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join Paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what, Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, i do not need to buy the air guns as it will be provided by by the organizer and I only need to prepare body armour only.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports academy because it is a challenge for me to skate well and perform tricks.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I can't wait to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join the Paintball class this coming school holiday.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou will be my coach. He is an experienced and professional coach. Moreover, the fee is only RM90 for 3 sessions. It is affordable and reasonable. Not only that, I do not need to buy the air guns, as they will be provided by the organizer, and I only need to prepare body armor.

I really hope you allow me to enroll in this Lingua Sports Academy . I am sure I will spend my time in a beneficial way.

Your son,

Kayson

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about me joining the paintball activity.I am keen to join this activity.

Guess what?Mr Jay Chou is my couch.He is knowledgeable and helpful.Besides, the fee is RM90 its has 3 sessions.The price is very affordable and reasonable.Lastly,I do not need to buy the air gun because,it is provided by the organiser.

I really hope you can let me join paintball.I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I am eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I am keen to join Paintball lesson.

Guess what? Mr. Jay Chou is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM90; it has 3 sessions. The price is very affordable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy the air gun because it is provided by the organizer.

I really hope you can let me join paintball. I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Giselle

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Besides, the feel is only RM 90. The price is affordable and reasonable. (elaboration)

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I do not have to buy air guns as they will be provided by the organizer.

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I really hope you can give me the green light ( allow me ) to enrol in this Lingua Sports Academy.

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I really hope you can give me the green light to join in the program organised by Lingua Sports Academy

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I'm eager to share with you about the Lingua Sports Academy. I'm keen to join BMX Cycling this coming holiday.

Guess what? Mr Jackson Wang will be my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful. Besides, the fee is RM150. The price is afforable and reasonable. Lastly, I do not need to buy bicycle as it will be provided by the organizer.

I really hope you give me the green light to join BMX Cycling. I'm sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.

Your daughter,

Yun Xuan

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Dear Dad and Mum,

I'm eager to share with you about the adventure sports offered by Lingua Sports Academy. I would like to join BMX Cycling on this coming weekend.

Guess what? Mr Jackson Wang is my coach. He is knowledgeable and helpful person. Besides, the fee is only RM150 for 5 lessons. It's reasonable and affordable. Lastly, I only need to prepare helmet, body armour, knee guards and gloves. The bicycle will be provided by the organizer.

I hope you and dad will allow me to join this adventure sports. I am sure I can spend my free time in a benefical way.

Your daughter,

Jessmin

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I am sure I can spend my free time in a beneficial way.