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You are the one to make the final call, and your beliefs of what should happen should be priority. - MarQuis

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trust your own writing skills over others, don't second guess your writing skills. (jordiee)

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value your own work

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trust yourself

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Check your final piece for errors

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only the writer know what is the best for the characters and for the story. - milena

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you should value your work and make sure you can do it. - jadah

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You know what you want to write and how you want your story to go.

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make sure your story makes sense and doesn't have parts that don't go together. stories need to make sense. -jadah

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Writing what you know and experience.

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the first draft is always the worst and we have to revise to make it better. - milena

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Revise your story if you do it will make it better

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Always look over your work, no matter what.

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you need to revise your story for errors. (jordiee)

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revising your story to make it better then how it was Nick s

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Make sure your final piece is clean, and doesn't have errors. - MarQuis

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you have to revise so your story is perfect for you

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No tears for the reader no tears for the reader -JJ

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No tears for the reader no tears for the reader -JJ

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If you don't express emotions the Reader won't feel it.

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if you keep changing point of views then the reader will be confused.

-jadah

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If the story doesn't make you feel a certain way it probably won't make the reader either.- MarQuis

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No tears for the writer no tears for the reader - Sam

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No tears for the writer no tears for the reader - Sam

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if you dont care about your own book the readers wont care

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dont make them do things for no reason

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if you change the point of view it makes your story confusing

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write about something you experienced or know

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reminding the reader about the main character and telling the reader about the character

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giving characters motivation is helping them get to thier gials help them succeed

Nick

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i know how to be

a great sport player and a good player on the field Nick s

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if your not attached to ur own writing or book people wont feel the same and not like it to nick s

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no tears for the reader no tears for the reader

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no tears for the reader no tears for the reader

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add emotion to your story, don't make it boring. If you're being lazy when writing then it probably wont turn out good.

-jadah

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that the writer has to like their story or else neither the reader will. - milena

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If the story doesn't make you feel a certain way it probably won't make the reader either.- MarQuis

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No tears for the writer, no tears for the reader-GM

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No tears for the writer, no tears for the reader-GM

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Write the feeling that you want the reader to feel

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no tears for the writer, no tears with the reader

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no tears for the writer, no tears with the reader

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writer + no emotion while writing, reader = no emotion while reading (jordiee)

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no tears for the writer no tears for the reader

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no tears for the writer no tears for the reader

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If you aren't emotionally attached to your own book the readers aren't

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don't try to make it seem like you know something you don't

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write about things you are comfortable with - milena

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Write about things you're educated about. - MarQuis

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i know how to be

a great sport player and a good player on the field Nick s

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story about something your experiences or something you know of (jordiee)

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Write about subjects you know about or experienced

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gives them personality so they can decide by themselves whatever they want like a living real person. - milena

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dont make them do things for no reason

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ask yourself what your character would want to give them more passion. (jordiee)

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"What does this character want"

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Write a character a human goal that they may or may not be able to achieve.- MarQuis

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giving characters motivation is helping them get to thier gials help them succeed

Nick

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Giving the thing that makes a character keep going.

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don't make them do something for no reason

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1st,2nd, & 3rd. Need to stick to one pov. (jordiee)

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first person; second person; third person-milena

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Be consistent with your point of view

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if you change the point of view it makes your story confusing

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Stick with pov; be consistent

Limited omniscient, first person, second person- MarQuis

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Stick with a point of view throughout the story.

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don't change your point of view it is confusing

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reminding the reader about the main character and telling the reader about the character Sam

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creating a character that changes and has their own personality. - milena

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describing the characters player build, or their mannerism- MarQuis

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writing subtle or non-subtle facts about your character (jordiee)

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Describing the character so readers will take interest in them

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flesh out the character so they'll have more personality

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it adds how what they look like how they are and what they do

Nick s

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Contently reminding the reader of the main character. - JJ

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to describe something and not say it

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show don't tell means be descriptive but don't be concise.

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describe because you'll have more to write

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You have to use more imagery and descriptive language

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to be descriptive about something rather than just saying it. (jordiee)

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It means to write what's happening instead of showing it.

- Jadah

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trying to figure out what it is

Nick s

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Show, don't tell

You describe something instead of saying it bluntly.