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All about me.... Page 1

Module 1:

Cover letter and Reflection..... Page 2

Logical Fallacies and Appeals..... Page 3

Create Padlet Portfolio and Professional Bio..... Page 4

Module 2:

Critical Response Essay..... Page 5

"The Danger of a Single Story" reading...... Page 6

Brainstorm and Thesis Essay 1..... Page 7

Module 3:

Annotated Bibliography...... Page 8

Research Questions.... Page 9

Finding Simple Facts isn't so simple.... Page 10

Module 4:

Researched Argumentative Essay... Page 11

Revised Annotated Bibliography.... Page 12

Essay 2 outline.... Page 13

Portfolio Reflection.... Page 14

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My name is Madison Brodsky. I am 18 years old and a senior at Woodmont High School and will be attending Newberry College in the fall. I had previously started an internship at a chiropractor, allowing me to further my knowledge within areas of the medical field. It has taught me patient care skills and how to best assist patients whenever I can. I have continued to work at this job and learning new skills to allow me to potentially further myself in the medical field. I am looking to continue my studies to become a bigger part in the medical field.

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I think I had definite room for improvement on the cover letter. I did well with the formatting, but a few minor details on MLA formatting were missing. I clearly showed the use of all three appeals within my cover letter to an employer. However, I need some improvement in identifying the aspects that the employer would need from a new hire. I needed to clarify what I could provide and demonstrate clear knowledge of what the employer was looking for. As well as a few grammatical errors that had gone unnoticed by me.

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I have a fairly well understanding of logical fallacies and how the appeals apply to everyday life commercials. My major concerns about mistakes in this assignment would be misuse of capitalization errors and grammatical issues. I need to pay more attention to run-on sentences and break up my sentences for more clarity within my writing. Using more transitional words to help the words flow more easily to a reader would greatly improve my writing.

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Create Padlet Portfolio and Professional Bio

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Create Padlet Portfolio and Professional Bio

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Creating my Padlet for the portfolio was generally easy once I figured out how to use the system. Based on classmate feedback, my writing was professionally done and well-written. However, she also mentioned that there were instances where I could've added more depth and explanation to a statement. She mentioned I needed to be more specific with my future goals and I completely agree.

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I think essay one’s writing process came fairly easily to me, although I have found it is slightly easier for me to compose everything for an essay all at once rather than spreading out the writing over several days. Something difficult for me to do would be shortening sentences. I tend to write longer sentences to try to explain material as best as possible, but sometimes, when doing so, it causes coherence gaps because of the length. If I had to rewrite it, I think I would pay more attention to the way that I word things because there is most likely a better way to do so that adds more clarity. I could also shorten phrases, providing more clarity to the sentence.

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This was a fascinating piece for me to read because I never thought about how little thought some people put into decisions or how they treat others. I needed to fix a few grammatical errors within this writing. Working on shortening sentences and using fewer words to get the point across. Allowing more clarity within my writing because it provides a clearer, shorter statement instead of a longer, drawn-out explanation.

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I could've done better on this assignment, providing clearer statements. I can provide clearer statements by shortening explanations and being direct. Creating more coherence within sentences by taking out some words and replacing them with clearer interpretations. While focusing on smaller grammatical errors and exchanging words for ones that are more direct and clear within my writing.

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I needed to provide a clearer and more thought-through thesis that was debatable and provided clear points for discussion. Revision for grammar and exchanging words for ones that provide a clearer description. While adjusting sentence structure to form clearer and direct statements without overly explaining.

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I provided clear questions that would aid in my research while still being complex enough to show understanding and argumentability. While providing helpful critiques to other students and still being respectful in a colleague manner. My questions were highly relevant to the proposed topic while being clear on my opinion of the matter.

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I provided credible sources and understanding of the topic. While showing a depth of research within my knowledge. I needed to correct small grammatical issues to provide clarity and coherence within my writing and rephrase sentences to become clearer.

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The writing process for essay two was more constructed with more assignments focusing on the development of the essay. I think in some circumstances it was a little easier than writing essay one because I was able to work out some kinks earlier on within assignments leading up to the essay itself. However, I think my essay construction was fairly good, and my only typical issues are small grammar corrections or clarity corrections. I think having more sources to back

up my point made it slightly easier because I was able to use several other pieces of work or statements to further prove my point. I think finding sources that are helpful and credible can be slightly difficult at times because it can be hard to tell if a source is truly credible sometimes. Essay one’s feedback helped me to try to shorten the explanation to make them more clear or change the phrasing of some sentences.

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I provided an articulated question to base my research off of. Noting a well written thesis that clearly explains the topic that would be discussed within the essay. Evaluating sources correctly to provide understanding of why they fit my thesis. Just needing to adjust some small grammatical errors of wording and phrasing.

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Providing clear evidence to back up claims and research topics demonstrating a carefully composed counterargument and rebuttal that clearly shows understanding of my topic. Showing developed and clear topic statements and being able to provide clear evidence to back up my claims. Small rephrasing and sentence structure issues being fixed would greatly impact the clarity and coherence within the writing.