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Hello my dear students!

How is our Alice doing? You can explore this padlet and write down your anwers below.

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FIRST DRAFT IS FIRST FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT

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FIRST DRAFT IS FIRST FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT

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KEEP IN MIND that your first draft is your first formative assessment. It is due this Friday. Use classroom discussion option or the padlet to communicate to each other.

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ALICE SCRIPT

Narrator: In this mystical, scary and creepy evening, two sisters sit in their little room, watching their phone.

Alice:“Ariana, did you finish the homework yet?”

Alice asks, leaning over.

Ariana:“Nope. Would you like to see what I’m looking at?”

*Alice nods, as Ariana moves over to see what Ariana was looking at. Alice groans as she sees

Ariana looking at the latest news of global warming yet again.*

Alice:“BORRINGGG!”

Ariana sighs, as Alice moves back to where she was sitting.

Ariana:“You know..The world is dying.”

Alice:“Not like I’m wasting resources.”

*they sit in silence as they continue looking at their phones.

Scene 2:

Narrator: SUDDENLY, THERE WAS A HUGE NOISE FROM THE PHONE.

The two sisters were frightened, first Ariana went to check on the noise, when she checked over and over she called her sister to come too. Then SUDDENLY BOOOM!! THEY GET SUCKED INTO THE PHONE.

Since the Queen of hearts hate people that love and care about the environment, so Ariana was CAPTURED. However, on the other side, because Alice doesn’t care about the environment so she was sent into this maze. This maze was filled of roses crying , and birds barking. Alice was surprised, she never seen this situation in her WHOLE LIFE. When she walked for a few steps she met CATERPILLAR.

Caterpillar: Hey girl, where are you going? (smoking move)

Alice: （handkerchief other Alice’s nose) No offense, although it is rude for a lady to smoke here, it pollutes the air. So please stop smoking. Thank you

Caterpillar: This is not your world, this is DOOM LAND! （Looking up and smiling)

Caterpillar: Also, who do you seem to be looking for?

Alice: Madam, I'm looking for my sister. Do you know where is she.

Caterpillar: Of course I know, I KNOW EVERYTHING!

Alice:Then, may I ask where is my sister?

Caterpillar: I'll tell you if you play cards with me.

Alice: Then, I think I should go.

Caterpillar: Don't go, don’t go, I'll tell you… (unhappy face)

Caterpillar: Your sister is in the western area of doom land. You need to walk to the queen's castle to save her.

Alice: Thank you so much!! (bowing)

Scene 3:

Narrator:At the hamburger party

March Hare:

Alice: Who are you?

Mad Hatter: Who are US?

March Here:

Alice:  I am Alice, Cheshire Cat sent me to you.

Mad Hatter: Sent you to our hamburger party?

March hare:

Dormouse: Of course for the hamburger party.

March hare:

Mad Hatter: Coming to the hamburger party she should not come, unless the real Alice is her.

March hare:

Dormouse: It is apparent that she lacks the manners for the hamburger party.

Alice: My parents taught me manners, unlike you stranger.

Mad Hatter: Get off young lady don’t annoy our peaceful party, time here is standing still we have hamburger party to enjoy for days! (Shouted)

Cheshire Cat: Hello Lady and hardly Gentlemen, am I interrupting anything?

Mad H.: Off with YOU!

Cheshire Cat: Oh Hatter,I love that hat of yours, I say that it suits me better than you.

Mad H.: HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT, YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SAY ANYTHING!

Alice: Oh stop, it you two! You two are mad.

Cheshire Cat: We’re all mad here.

Mad H.: Alice, have you any idea why is a Raven like a Writing Desk?

Alice: I have no idea, do you?

Mad H.: I don’t know the answer.

Cheshire Cat: No one knows the answer.

Mad H.: Farewell young Lady!

Cheshire Cat: The Clock is ticking, it is time to say Goodbye!

Scene 4:

Narrator: 2 days later…

Alice: Where is that castle! I already walked for 2 DAYS!! Someone let me rest!

Guards: Who’s SPEAKING!! COME OUT YOU WHOEVER YOU ARE!!

Alice: So sorry to disturb, however have you seen my sister?

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1. Midnight California- watching something about the next destination.

2. Futuristic world-Alice sister got captured during the trip.

3. Rescuing task- to rescue Ariana (sister).

4. Hamburger party- bringing out the topic of environment (global warming, pollution).

5. Take action-Alice saves her sister, explains and puts the topic into the script.

Biggest Reminder: include global warming and pollution, and make it dramatic and funny.

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•Name of the characters can be changed

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Narrator: Ellie

Alice: Sofia

Alice’s Sister: Vicky (name is Ariana)

March Hare: Yuta

White rabbit: Naomi

Emily: Queen of Hearts

Andy: dormouse

Howard: Mad hatter

JV: Cheshire Cat

Yeran: guard

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Narrator: Ellie

Alice: Sofia

Alice's Sister: Vicky (name is

Ariana)

March Hare: Yuta

White rabbit: Naomi

Queen of Hearts：Emily

Dormouse：Andy

Mad hatter：Howard

Cheshire Cat：JV

Guard：Yeran

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Dormouse: It is appearent that she lacks the manners for the hamburger party.

Dormouse: Of course for the hamburger party.

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Scene 1:

Narrator: In this mystical, scary and creepy evening, two sisters sit in their little room, watching their phone.

Alice:"Ariana, did you finish the homework yet?"

*Alice asks, leaning over.

Ariana:"Nope. Would you like to see what I'm looking at?"

*Alice nods, as Ariana moves over to see what Ariana was looking at.

*Alice groans as she sees

*Ariana looking at the latest news of global warming yet again.

Alice:"BORRINGGG!"

*Ariana sighs, as Alice moves back to where she was sitting.

Ariana:"You know.. The world is dying.”

Alice:"Not like I'm wasting resources."

*They sit in silence as they continue looking at their phones.

Scene 2:

Narrator: SUDDENLY, THERE WAS A HUGE NOISE FROM THE PHONE.

*The two sisters were frightened, first Ariana went to check on the noise, when she checked over and over she called her sister to come too. Then SUDDENLY BOOOM!!

*THEY GOT SUCKED INTO THE PHONE.

Narrator: Since the Queen of hearts hate people that love and care about the environment, so Ariana was CAPTURED. However, on the other side, because Alice doesn’t care about the environment so she was sent into this maze. This maze was filled of roses crying, and birds barking. Alice was surprised, she never seen this situation in her WHOLE LIFE. When she walked for a few steps she met CATERPILLAR.

Caterpillar: “Hey girl, where are you going?”

*Caterpillar smokes

Alice: “No offense, although it is rude for a lady to smoke here, it pollutes the air. So please stop smoking. Thank you.”

Caterpillar: “This is not your world, this is DOOM LAND!”

*Caterpillar looks up and smiles

Caterpillar:“Also, who do you seem to be looking for?”

Alice: “Madam, I'm looking for my sister. Do you know where she is?”

Caterpillar: “Of course I know, I KNOW EVERYTHING!”

Alice:“Then, may I ask where is my sister?”

Caterpillar: “I'll tell you if you play cards with me.”

Alice: “Then, I think I should go.”

Caterpillar: “Don't go, don't go, I'll tell you... ”

*Caterpillar acts unhappy.

Caterpillar: “Your sister is in the western area of doom land. You need to walk to the queen's castle to save her.”

Alice: “Thank you so much!!”

*Alice bows

Scene 3:

Narrator:At the hamburger party.

*March Hare stayed quiet.

Alice: “Who are you?”

Mad Hatter: “Who are US?”

Alice:“I am Alice, Cheshire Cat sent me to you.”

Mad Hatter: “Sent you to our hamburger party?”

Dormouse: “Of course for the hamburger party.”

Mad Hatter: “Coming to the hamburger party she should not come, unless the real Alice is her.”

Dormouse: “It is apparent that she lacks the manners for the hamburger party.”

Alice: “My parents taught me manners, unlike you stranger.”

Mad Hatter: “Get off young lady, don't annoy our peaceful party, time here is standing still we have hamburger party to enjoy for days!”

*Mad Hatter shouts out the lines.

Cheshire Cat: “Hello Lady and hardly Gentlemen, am I interrupting anything?”

Mad Hatter: “Off with YOU!”

Cheshire Cat: “Oh Hatter, I love that hat of yours, I say that it suits me better than you.”

Mad Hatter: “HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT, YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SAY ANYTHING!”

Alice: “Oh stop it you two! You two are mad.”

Cheshire Cat: “We're all mad here.”

Mad Hatter: “Alice, have you any idea why is a Raven like a Writing Desk?”

Alice: “I have no idea, do you?”

Mad Hatter: “I don't know the answer either.”

Cheshire Cat: “No one knows the answer.”

Mad Hatter: “Farewell young Lady!”

Cheshire Cat: “The Clock is ticking, it is time to say Goodbye!”

Scene 4:

Narrator: 2 days later...

Alice: “Where is that castle! I‘ve already walked for 2 DAYS!! Someone let me rest!”

Guards: “Who's SPEAKING!! COME OUT YOU WHOEVER YOU ARE!!”

Alice: “So sorry to disturb, however have you seen my sister?”

I corrected some mistakes and unified the layout, this should be the final version.

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Dormouse：She doesn't know the etiquette of the hamburger party.

Dormouse: You will want the hamburger party for years.

Mouse: Home? Do you even have a home?

Mouse: I am local and I can take you there.

Mouse: The cat is coming for me!

Mouse: It will be thriller to play with the “Danger”.

Mouse: Cat loves to be clasped. Here little Catty, Catty, Catty, come for a hug.

This is my second script of Mouse and Dormouse.

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Last scene: final scene

Alice:(Alice approaching the castle, before she stumbles across a plate of tarts)I have been so hungry..A little bite won’t hurt wont it?…

Narrator: Alarm is on, ALARM IS ON!! Something is not right…

Guards: Who is making the alarm on? They will get VERY SERIOUS CONSEQUENCES!!! (Walks up to look). (After a few steps) oh, it’s a little girl, everyone no need to panic, although where are those cakes?

Alice: I ate them…

Guards: Call the Queen, this is an emergency!! And Quickly, okay?

Queen of waste: WHO IN THE WORLD, ATE MY CAKES? OFF WITH THEM.

Alice: Are you the Queen of waste? I am really sorry for eating your tarts however, you don’t need to be so angry about it, right?

Queen of waste: Little girl! You are the one that ate my treats, now you’re  asking ME if that it’s nothing? So rude, this is “doom land,” and everything goes by me.

Final

NARRATOR: The Queen, furious, tries to kill Alice, before she felt something, stopping her. It was Ariana stopping her, who broke out of her cage with the help of the other characters. (Queen of Waste is angry, and tries to attack Alice again, but before she could, Ariana pushes the Queen away, making Alice safe. Ariana is harmed.)

Alice: stop! What are you doing? If you keep harming your people, you won’t have anything in the end!

Queen of waste: No one cares about me! Then why should I CARE ABOUT THEM!!!!!!!!!

Alice: When you start caring about others, they will also start to think, and care about you.

Queen of waste: It sounds nice, although I dunno, I never tried anything like this.

Alice: When you try, it’s a start, why don’t you try from now?

Queen of waste:(looking at Alice in a new way) Okayyy, then let me heal your sister’s wounds first, as a start of course.

Narrator: The Queen of waste, is starting to change, will she actually change or is she just faking, to justify that we will see in the next chapter.

(Written by Emily and Ellie, during the weekend)

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FINAL VERSION NEEDS POLISHING AND ONE MORE SCENE

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FINAL VERSION NEEDS POLISHING AND ONE MORE SCENE