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1. need source citation 2. avoid sentences in PPT slide 3. reference list's title use italics

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1. Try to make more eye contact and have more body language.

2. Decrease the pauses in order to improve the influence.

3. Remember to provide academic evidence.

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1 more fluency language using

2 no reading

3 enlarge contents, longer time presentation

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W8L2    1.PPT pictures can not contain Chinese, each picture should have a source.2.Practice a few times, memorize a little bit, control the timing, and finish in eight minutes 3.Don't stare at the computer all the time, be confident, use more body language, and move

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W8L2    1.PPT pictures can not contain Chinese, each picture should have a source.2.Practice a few times, memorize a little bit, control the timing, and finish in eight minutes 3.Don't stare at the computer all the time, be confident, use more body language, and move

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1.provide academic evidence for idea improvement

2.add clear verbal citation

3.improve prosodic features

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1. No reading

2. More body language

3. More ppt details

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1️⃣Control the time and practise more

2️⃣make the ppt better

3️⃣without draft

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1. I need more fluently language and practise more before the presentation, maybe no nervous while on the stage.

2. improve the reference list

3. make eye contact with teacher and more proper body language

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The areas I need to improve in my final speaking exam:

1.Eye contact and appropriate body language should be used more and naturally.

2.When introduce the advantages, I am supposed to find some figures and visuals and make some charts(2) in PPT.

3.No large blocks of complete sentences.

4.Please give the surname and the published year. Also, Harvard reference system is necessary!

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1.     Need speak more smoothly and in a loud voice.

2.     Need to pay attention to the cohesion of sentences.

3.     Need try to use a wide range of structures and vocabulary with accurate words and grammar.

Do not be nervous.

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Areas to improve in my final speaking exam.

1. Change the number of reference list

2. Better designs for PPT, adding visual aid

3. Add more eye-contacts

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three areas to improve my presentation

1.remove long sentences out of the powerprint.

2.pay attention to the word pronunciation of "recruitment"

3.remove the number of reference list

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This article will talk about the disadvantage of free healthcare. Free healthcare means all citizens can use healthcare system for free or at a low cost which is provided by the government.

One of the main disadvantages of free medical care is that the quality of care may decline due to limited resources and increased demand. Increasing demand can lead to longer hours. On the one hand, it is harmful to patients who need immediate treatment and those with chronic diseases. On the other hand, tight resources can lead to stress for health care workers. In a word, the purpose of free health care is positive, but its potential risk is a challenge that needs to be addressed.

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Availability of public welfare free medical services is universal; however, an excessive demand, limited resources, and staff negligence have led to a decline in service quality. Consequently, the waiting time of patients is also impacting their health, posing as an significant challenge.

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my initial summary:

The topic of he lecture is free healthcare. It is also named as universal health or single payer system, which accepts service support from the government for free, aiming to help all people have the right to free health care.

However, there is a big drawback. The standard of free health care is slowly decreasing due to limited health care resources and growing health care needs. This may overwhelm healthcare providers and facilities, leading to increasing wait time and then it could delay patients who need immediate care.

Refined  one:

The lecture focuses on free healthcare, also known as universal health or a single-payer system, where the government provides healthcare services free of charge to ensure everyone has access to medical care. However, a major drawback is the gradual decline in the quality of free healthcare due to limited resources and increasing demand. This strains healthcare providers and facilities, resulting in longer wait times and potential delays for patients in need of urgent care.

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my initial summary:

The lecture examines the limitations of free universal healthcare for citizens, emphasizing potential challenges like overstretched healthcare providers resulting in extended wait times and compromised treatment for patients requiring urgent care. Moreover, it underscores the possible decline in the standard of healthcare delivered. In conclusion, the lecture advocates for necessary adjustments to uphold the efficacy of free healthcare services.

my refined summary:

The lecture explores the constraints of providing free universal healthcare to citizens, with a focus on potential issues such as overburdened healthcare providers leading to prolonged wait times and compromised treatment for patients in urgent need. Additionally, it highlights the potential deterioration in the quality of healthcare provided. Ultimately, the lecture advocates for essential modifications to maintain the effectiveness of free healthcare services.

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The mini lecture focuses on drawbacks of free health care, which is a free universal health care for citizens. Although it ensures everyone to access free medical treatment, it has some disadvantages. One of the drawbacks is that it may overwork healthcare provider as a result of conduct the waiting time longer, it may affect the treatment of patients who need immediate care. The other drawback is that it may decrease the quality of care provider. In all, the free health care needs adequately adjust.

The mini-lecture discusses the drawbacks of free universal health care for citizens, highlighting potential issues such as overworked healthcare providers leading to longer waiting times and compromised treatment for patients in need of immediate care. Additionally, it emphasizes the potential decrease in the quality of care provided. Overall, the lecture suggests that adjustments are needed to ensure the effectiveness of free health care.

XIPU AI

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The original version:

The lecture introduces free healthcare — a system where the government provides healthcare services to all citizens free at the point of use, or with minimal charges. It bears the disadvantage of potential decrease in the quality of care due to limited resources and increased demand which results in overwhelmed healthcare providers and facilities, resulting in longer wait times so that the patients’ health may deteriorate further and potentially less thorough care. This also makes healthcare workers experience burnout, affecting the quality of care provided.

The modified version:

Free healthcare, also known as universal healthcare, offers medical services to citizens without charge. However, its downside lies in diminished care quality due to heightened demand and limited resources. This strain overwhelms healthcare providers and facilities, leading to extended wait times and potential health deterioration for patients. Additionally, staff burnout further compromises service quality. Addressing these challenges is crucial to maintain the integrity of universal health coverage.

The platform I use: Chat3

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My initial summary:

In the business context, Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) strives to generate positive societal impacts while ensuring companies are held accountable. Yet, this commitment can strain a company's financial resources and provoke shareholder skepticism about its profitability implications

My refined summary:

In the realm of business, Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) seeks to create favorable social impacts and enforce accountability among companies. However, this endeavor may strain a company's financial resources and trigger shareholder doubts regarding its effects on profitability.

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My initial summary:

CorporateSocial Responsibility (CSR) in thebusiness context aims to makepositive impacts on society andhold companies sociallyaccountable. However, it can lead to potential strain on a company's financial resources and skepticism from shareholders regarding its impact on profits.

My refined summary:

In the business context, Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) strives to generate positive societal impacts while ensuring companies are held accountable. Yet, this commitment can strain a company's financial resources and provoke shareholder skepticism about its profitability implications

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My initial summary:The lecturer discusses some disadvantages about Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR),which is a method that companies make positive effects to society, bring companies socially acceptable.She first states that CSR will create potential stress to company’s financial resources. Second, she regards that shareholders always skeptical about CSR couldn’t bring profits for companies.

My refined summary:Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) in the business context aims to make positive impacts on society and hold companies socially accountable. However, it can lead to potential strain on a company's financial resources and skepticism from shareholders regarding its impact on profits.

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My initial version： The lecture introduces the topic of Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR), which is a business mode beneficial to the society in various aspects. Nevertheless, CSR is likely to become a heavy financial burden due to its high cost. According to the lecturer, it is believed by some shareholders that priority should be given to the profit since the original aim is to receive maximum returns.

My refined version（chat 3）：The lecture introduces Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) as a business model with various social benefits. However, it highlights the potential drawback of CSR being a significant financial burden due to its high costs. The lecturer suggests that some shareholders prioritize profits, as the primary goal is to maximize returns.

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The AI I used : Chat 3

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My original version:

The lecture is about CSR-Corporate Social Responsibility.It’s a business model which helps company to be social accountable in multiple ways.The aspects covered by the benefits includes social,economic and environment.However,one obvious drawback is the potential strain on company financial resources,diverting funds from critical areas is seemed as a prohibitive investment cost for smaller business and startups.Furthermore,CSR is viewed skeptically by shareholders because they claim that profit maximum is more important than CSR.

My refined summary based on AI feedback:

The lecture discusses Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) as a business model promoting social accountability. It encompasses social, economic, and environmental aspects. However, a notable drawback is the strain on company finances, diverting funds from crucial areas, which poses challenges for smaller businesses. Additionally, shareholders often prioritize profit maximization over CSR, viewing it with skepticism.

The AI platform I use:AIchatOS

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My original version:

The lecture introduces CSR—Corporate Social Responsibility, a business model that helps companies to be socially accountable, contributing to the society by making positive impacts on social, economic, and environmental aspects. One challenge CSR faces is the potential strain on a company's financial resources, diverting funds from critical areas for smaller businesses or startups regarding its prohibitive investment costs which eventually compromises the business’s sustainability. Moreover, CSR is viewed skeptically by shareholders considering company's primary responsibility as profit maximization for shareholders causing shareholder alienation.

The modified version:

The lecture introduces CSR—Corporate Social Responsibility in business, emphasizing its societal contributions. A notable challenge is the financial strain it poses on companies, especially smaller ones, diverting funds from essential aspects. Shareholders' skepticism, prioritizing profit maximization over CSR, further complicates matters. Balancing these concerns is crucial to maintain sustainability and shareholder relations.

AI platform I choose: Chat 3

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My initial summary:

The topic of the lecture is CSR —cooperating society responsibility. It is a business model that enables companies to conduct business in a socially responsible manner. While it has many important advantages, there is one major disadvantage as well: it may put a strain on a company's financial resources. Implementing CSR typically entails significant sustainable practices, community projects, or employee welfare programs.

XIPU AI REFINE:

The lecture topic is Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR), which involves companies conducting business in a socially responsible manner. While there are numerous benefits to this approach, one significant drawback is the potential strain on a company's financial resources. Implementing CSR often requires significant investment in sustainable practices, community projects, and employee welfare programs.

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The lecture delves into the notion of inclusive pedagogy, which strives to ensure all students, regardless of gender, nationality, or background, have equal access to learning materials, fostering an equitable learning setting. Despite its noble intentions, the lecturer sheds light on the hurdles linked with this approach. Numerous educators and institutions are ill-equipped to handle the complexities of inclusive pedagogy, given the substantial time and resources required for successful implementation. Moreover, schools may face challenges in offering the essential facilities to cater to the diverse needs of their students. In essence, there is a pressing need for enhanced efforts to fully harness the potential of inclusive pedagogy.

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The speaker is talking about inclusive pedagogy, which means to create a same learning environment for all students .Regarding the differences between diverse students. As a result, both teaching and learning stretegy need a change.For the challengs in university, the requirement for substantial resources is of importance. Universities are quite struggle with hiring some special trained staff and providing assistant technology.

But for success inclusive pedagogy, teachers need to adapt their teaching method to meetthe new stretegy. But 45% teachers feel difficult adapting the new teaching method while 63% of them says there is alack of time of finishing the teaching goal.

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My initial summary:

The lecturer discusses about some disadvantages of inclusive pedagogy. She explains that inclusive pedagogy is a method that can make students diverse in genders, races or abilities to be educated equally. The lecturer first points out that many schools are struggling about the high cost which inclusive education needs. Next, she states that having inclusive education will require educators a lot of time to get adapted. What’s more, it will also bring them more stress.

My refined summary: Inclusive pedagogy in higher education aims to create an environment where all students, regardless of their differences, are equally included and engaged. However, its effective implementation poses challenges, including the need for substantial resources and the demand on educators to adapt their teaching methods.

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The lecturer talks about the different sides of the inclusive pedagogy,which is an approach to teaching whose aim is to create an equal learning environment and let all students be actively engaged . However, it also brings the disadvantage .Inclusive pedagogy gives much pressure to teachers who need to prepare a lot to make sure that every student is involved.

The lecturer discusses the concept of inclusive pedagogy, an approach to teaching that aims to create an equal learning environment where all students can actively participate. While this approach has its benefits, such as fostering student engagement, it also presents challenges for teachers who must invest significant effort in preparing to ensure the involvement of every student.

XIPU AI

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My initial summary:The speaker outlines one disadvantage of inclusive pedagogy.She explains that inclusive pedagogy is a teaching system that includes all students,regardless of their own individual conditions and ensures the teaching strategies as well as the learning materials accessible to all.She stresses that a significant challenge is the requirement for substaintial resources to implement it.The adoption of the inclusive pedagogy to the university curriculum are time-consuming,cost-high and adding pressure to teachers.

My refined summary:The speaker highlights a drawback of inclusive pedagogy, explaining that it is a teaching approach that aims to accommodate all students, irrespective of their individual circumstances, by making teaching strategies and learning materials accessible to everyone. She emphasizes that a major challenge lies in the substantial resources required for its implementation. Integrating inclusive pedagogy into university curricula is a time-consuming and costly process that can also place additional pressure on teachers.

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This lecture introduces inclusive pedagogy——an approach to teaching that aims to create a learning environment where all students are equally included, valued and actively engaged in the learning process. One challenge inclusive pedagogy faces is requirement for substantial resources hindering its effective implementation in the university setting. This makes universities struggle with higher costs associated with training staff, modifying curriculum and providing assistive technology. Moreover, heavily relying on the ability and willingness of educators to adapt their teaching methods to the diverse needs of all students can be time-consuming and demanding for educators with heavy workloads.

The modified version:

"Inclusive pedagogy aims to create an equitable learning environment for all students. Challenges arise due to the substantial resources required, leading to financial strains for universities. Moreover, educators face time-consuming demands to adapt teaching methods to diverse student needs, affecting their heavy workloads."

Platform I use: chat3

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My summary:

The lecture discuss the concept of inclusive pedagogy,which is a potential teaching method that ensures every learning material available to all including students of different gender and nationalities as well as from diverse areas,and creates a fair learning environment for all.The lecturer mainly points out the disadvantage of the method.Most initiatives and teachers are unprepared for this idealized method,not only because it is time-consuming but also it is quite hard for schools to equip with the necessary facilities to meet all students’ requirements.In conclusion,more efforts are needed to achieve inclusive pedagogy.

My refined summary:

The lecture explores the concept of inclusive pedagogy, a teaching approach aimed at providing equal access to learning materials for students of diverse genders, nationalities, and backgrounds, thus creating an equitable learning environment. However, the lecturer emphasizes the challenges associated with this method. Many educators and institutions are unprepared for the demands of inclusive pedagogy, as it requires significant time and resources to implement effectively. Furthermore, schools may struggle to provide the necessary facilities to meet the varied needs of all students. In conclusion, greater efforts are needed to fully realize the potential of inclusive pedagogy.

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W2L1 homework

Summary

SEN in mainstream classrooms means the  inclusion of students with special educational needs in regular,non-special education classrooms.SEN in mainstream classrooms is based on the belief that all children have the right to be educated together .

SEN in mainstream classrooms can help to promote acceptance,understanding and social integration .What’s more it also promotes diversity and social integration.

However,though the SEN in mainstream classrooms boasts a lot of benefits, it also has some negative sides which are pretty challenging.firstly,teachers may struggle to meet the diverse needs effectively.secondly,SEN students might find the mainstream curriculum is challenging or not suitable.Hence,while inclusive education is generally desirable,careful consideration and appropriate strategies are highly needed to ensure benefit all students.

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1.My initial summary:

The speaker talks about two disadvantages of inclusive education.Inclusive education means learning withs peers of diverse backgrounds,including those who need special education.She stresses that one significant drawback is causing the academic progress slower.She explains teachers may slow down the pace for students with learning disabilities,which may influence other students.Moreover,the speaker adds that it may be of great difficulty for the special students to adopt the mainstream course.

2.My refined summary based on AI feedback:

The speaker addresses two primary concerns associated with inclusive education, a system where students from various backgrounds, including those requiring special education, learn together. She highlights that a notable disadvantage of this approach is the potential deceleration of academic progress. This slowdown, she explains, occurs as educators may need to adjust the learning pace to accommodate students with learning disabilities, which could inadvertently impact the academic advancement of their peers. Additionally, the speaker points out the significant challenges that students with special needs might face in adapting to mainstream coursework. This adaptation struggle underscores the complexity of implementing inclusive education in a way that effectively meets the diverse needs of all students.

3.The AI platform I used:

Choice 2:Chat 3

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The initial summary

The lecture talks about the SEN education. It stands for inclusion of students with special educational needs in regular non-social classrooms. The SEN education has some disadvantages.First,it may reduce the speed of teaching and make more difficult for teachers to plan lessons. Second , some SEN students may find the lessons of mainstream students is hard for them which may bring about lower academic outcomes. The last one is SEN students are twice as likely as peers to be excluded.

The refined summary based on AI

The lecture delves into the concept of SEN education, which advocates for the integration of students with special educational needs into conventional classrooms alongside their non-SEN peers. Despite its noble intentions, SEN education faces several notable challenges.

Firstly, incorporating SEN students into regular classrooms can slow down the teaching pace, presenting difficulties for teachers in lesson planning. The diverse needs of students demand tailored teaching strategies, which can be time-consuming and complex to implement effectively.

Secondly, the mainstream curriculum may prove challenging for some SEN students, potentially leading to lower academic achievements. The disparity in learning capabilities between SEN and non-SEN students can exacerbate feelings of frustration and inadequacy among those struggling to keep up.

Lastly, SEN students are at a higher risk of exclusion compared to their peers. This exclusion can manifest in various forms, both formally, through disciplinary actions, and informally, through social isolation. Such experiences can have detrimental effects on their educational journey and overall well-being.

In summary, while SEN education aims to foster an inclusive learning environment, it is imperative to address these challenges to ensure all students can thrive academically and socially.

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The AI I used： Chat 3

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The lecture introduces the SEN education in mainstream classrooms. SEN education stands for inclusion of students with special educational needs in regular non-social classrooms. There are some disadvantages of this education mod. Firstly, it indicates the potential for slower academic progress for SEN students and their classmates. Teachers also have to struggle to meet all diverse needs effectively, especially for those lack specialized training in SEN education. Secondly, SEN students may find the mainstream students curriculum too challenging or not suited to their learning styles which may bring about lower academic outcomes. Lastly, SEN students are twice as likely as peers to be excluded indicating an issue of integration and acceptance.

The refined version

Inclusive pedagogy in higher education involves the inclusion of students with special educational needs (SEN) in mainstream classrooms. However, this approach presents challenges. Teachers may struggle to meet diverse needs effectively, particularly without specialized training in SEN education. Additionally, SEN students may face difficulties with the mainstream curriculum, leading to lower academic outcomes. Moreover, integration and acceptance can be problematic, as SEN students are more likely to be excluded compared to their peers. Careful consideration and appropriate strategies are necessary to ensure inclusive education benefits all students.

The AI platform I use: Chat 3

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benefits:

Strengthen social cohesion and peace

Strengthen the quality of teaching

Provide a better environment for students

Improve students’ rights to learn

drawbacks:

Influence the children who need special education

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Children are more likely to feeling lonely when they are not allowed to join after class activities only because they are asked to perform like all the others, thus leading to the lack of the sense of belonging, which would harm the children.

Educators would feel more stressed when their kids are being judged by the same standard instead of a more flexible standard.

For those who are different from others, disabled for example, the sense of isolation and separation may strengthened with inclusive education.

It’s unfair for the disabled to receive similar education like others because they may learn less at the same time.

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