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Based on my feedback, I need to work on being more specific about an idea and sticking with that idea. I need to stop getting caught in the weeds and analyze the main topic/main idea.

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One of my writing goals is to stay on track, i kept repeating my examples,  So for next time I won't do the same. I will do even better to get a 4 next time.

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After the feedback I received from my baseline essay, one of my writing goals in the future is to check my organization skills. The main reason why I said this is because last time I made my essay, I was unaware that I put the wrong topic in the wrong paragraph. Next time I am given an essay, I will make sure to keep track of this when revising.

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When I read the feedback on my essay. I came to the conclusion that I need to work on strengthening my claim. I also might need to work on my transition and grammer. Another thing I need to work on is just restating my claim and be less vauge overall.

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One of my writing goals is to stay more on track, i kept repeating some of my examples. Another writing goal is to come up with more ideas because I was running out of things to say.

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Based on my feedback, Some things of my new writing goals would be having a stronger conclusion and more transition words in the beginning of the paragraph.

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From the feedback that Ms.Brizard gave me I found out that I will not include the actual reasons in my intro and I will use YOU instead of I whenever I am talking about my own expieriences.

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Bᴀsᴇᴅ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴇᴇᴅʙᴀᴄᴋ I ʀᴇᴄᴇɪᴠᴇᴅ,  sʜᴏᴜʟᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋ ᴏɴ ᴇʟᴀʙᴏʀᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴏɴ ᴍʏ ᴇxᴀᴍᴘʟᴇs ᴀɴᴅ ᴍʏ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴɪɴɢ. I ᴀʟsᴏ sʜᴏᴜʟᴅ ɴᴏᴛ ɢᴏ ᴏғғ-ᴛᴏᴘɪᴄ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴɪɴɢ.

ᵖˢˢˢᵗ⁻ ᶦ ᵈᶦᵈⁿᵗ ᵍᵉᵗ ᵃⁿʸ ᶠᵉᵉᵈᵇᵃᶜᵏ⁻⁻

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Some of my writing goals are to explain more details and or add examples to my writing but also to restate the conclusion.

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One of my writing goals is have better evidence and write essay with hard evidence. Another writing goals that I have is have better thesis.

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After the feedback I received from the baseline essay I should work on further elaborating on my introductions and making sure my thesis is clear and understandable

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My writing goals are that I need to focus on putting more details,add transition words and explaining things more detailed.

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After I read through my feedback I think I need to strengthen my conclusion and give more analysis on my evidence/ examples.

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One of my writing goals is to be clearer with my writing and be able to further explain what I mean. I also want to use more higher vocabulary words and organize my ideas better.

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Based on the feedback I received, I should work on being more specific with my examples and give more analysis/insight on them. I also think I could work on adding more advanced vocabulary.

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Some of my writing goals are to get better at writing different details and to make sure that I don't repeat what I already said.

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My goal is to improve more on developing my introductions and my conclusions.

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After the feedback I received from the baseline essay some of my writing goals are to improve my grammar and to add an appropriate amount of evidence. Another thing I could work on is my transition words.

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After the feedback I received from the baseline essay, I think that my writing goals should be to improve my grammar. I also think I need to work on building a stronger conclusion and to write better details.

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What I think I need to improve on is adding more examples and explaining things more. In addition, I can also add better intros and claims to my essay.

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-I plan on establishing stronger conclusions.
-I plan to improve on my organization and be straightforward in my essays.
-I plan on using more interesting transitions,words, and hooks to give my essays more of an intriguing effect.

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Some writing goals I need to work on are, using more examples/details and better transition words. I also need to work on using better vocabulary words and being more clear and specific.

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Some writing goals i need to work on are my transition and vocabulary words. I also need to work on being more descriptive on my writing.

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After the feedback I received from my essay I think I could focus more on my thesis statement. I can also work on giving better examples to back up my claim.

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I think i should work on adding details and examples. While being specific and clear