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Region one successful sample essays and resumes. Essays from the south texas.

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Composition books, journals

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A yearly student planner/pro folio(AVID) with documents needed for reference, planning, district calendar for their high school years

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Calendars for planning for our seniors since dates are so critical this school year. 

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Calendars for planning for our seniors since dates are so critical this school year. 

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Title: My Memoirs. A journal filled with prompts that would allow the student to begin a memoir about their life.

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Asynchronous modules/resources that are easily accessible 

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Asynchronous modules/resources that are easily accessible 

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I know I keep posting this guy, but if we can get something similar to the type of materials this website creates (without having to pay a lot of money to access these materials each time).  https://www.collegeessayguy.com/cwiab-student-13-warm-up-exercises

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I call this part "vulnerability training," because I find it's more specific than "warm-up exercise." Also, "warm-up exercises" are expendable, while I believe these exercises are essential.

A Quick Word on Vulnerability:
Why am I asking you to be vulnerable? A few reasons:

1. Vulnerability is one (of four) qualities of an excellent personal statement (in fact, it's the "personal" part). I'll share the other three qualities as we go...

2. Vulnerability is a great life-skill to learn, and

3. It's one you can get better at as you practice.

If you're in a workshop, your facilitator (teacher/counselor) will let you know which one to do. If you're working alone, pick one of those below. If you're bad at making decisions, do the first one.

Option #1: "If you really knew me..."
This one is simple: Begin with the phrase "If you really knew me..." and share something with your partner that you wouldn't normally share with someone. Be brave! Go as deep as you're willing to go.

Here's a video of me doing this one:

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I call this part "vulnerability training," because I find it's more specific than "warm-up exercise." Also, "warm-up exercises" are expendable, while I believe these exercises are essential. A Quick Word on Vulnerability: Why am I asking you to be vulnerable? A few reasons: Vulnerability is one (of four) qualities of an excellent personal statement (in fact, it's the "personal" part).

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Some topics to consider creating content for:

What’s the purpose of the personal statement?

What are qualities of an outstanding personal statement?

Essay Brainstorming Exercises

Montage vs. Narrative Structure (https://www.collegeessayguy.com/cwiab-student-18-montage-structure-sample-essay)

Types of Montage Essays

How to raise the stakes and draw your reader in

Ways to make your essay more insightful

How to make sure your personal statement “flows”

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Montage is something you've likely all encountered before, but some may not be familiar with the word itself. It's a technique that involves using separate elements (pictures, words, music, etc.) to create a new whole. In filmmaking, the montage effect is used to condense space and time so that information can be delivered in a more efficient way.

Take the classic "falling in love" montage, commonly used in romantic comedies. We don't see every single interaction. Instead, we see: one surprises the other at work, probably with flowers; they walk through the park; they dance in the rain; they pass an engagement ring store. You get the idea.

A few images work together to tell a larger story. And you can use this technique for your essay to tell a larger story about you.

FIND A THEMATIC THREAD

If you're going to build a montage, you need to find a way to make the different experiences you'll use feel connected. Think of it this way: if I just had a paragraph on growing up in Latin America, speaking of which religion, speaking of which literature is important to me, speaking of which... you're going to feel understandably confused. So I need to have something that threads the pieces together.

The sample essay below ("Laptop Stickers") was written by a student who collected stickers on her laptop. Each sticker connected to different values and experiences. Stickers are her thematic thread.

There are virtually infinite things that could work as a thematic thread to tie your montage together. A place? An art form? A hobby? We'll explore an exercise in a bit that can help you do so. But for now, here's that "Laptop Stickers" essay, so you can more clearly see what I mean by a montage and thread.

My Laptop Stickers

My laptop is like a passport. It is plastered with stickers all over the outside, inside, and bottom. Each sticker is a stamp, representing a place I've been, a passion I've pursued, or community I've belonged to. These stickers make for an untraditional first impression at a meeting or presentation, but it's one I'm proud of. Let me take you on a quick tour:

" We <3 Design," bottom left corner. Art has been a constant for me for as long as I can remember. Today my primary engagement with art is through design. I've spent entire weekends designing websites and social media graphics for my companies. Design means more to me than just branding and marketing; it gives me the opportunity to experiment with texture, perspective, and contrast, helping me refine my professional style.

" Common Threads," bottom right corner. A rectangular black and red sticker displaying the theme of the 2017 TEDxYouth@Austin event. For years I've been interested in the street artists and musicians in downtown Austin who are so unapologetically themselves. As a result, I've become more open-minded and appreciative of unconventional lifestyles. TED gives me the opportunity to help other youth understand new perspectives, by exposing them to the diversity of Austin where culture is created, not just consumed.

Poop emoji, middle right. My 13-year-old brother often sends his messages with the poop emoji 'echo effect,' so whenever I open a new message from him, hundreds of poops elegantly cascade across my screen. He brings out my goofy side, but also helps me think rationally when I am overwhelmed. We don't have the typical "I hate you, don't talk to me" siblinghood (although occasionally it would be nice to get away from him); we're each other's best friends. Or at least he's mine.

" Lol ur not Harry Styles," upper left corner. Bought in seventh grade and transferred from my old laptop, this sticker is torn but persevering with layers of tape. Despite conveying my fangirl-y infatuation with Harry Styles' boyband, One Direction, for me Styles embodies an artist-activist who uses his privilege for the betterment of society. As a $42K donor to the Time's Up Legal Defense Fund, a hair donor to the Little Princess Trust, and promoter of LGBTQ+ equality, he has motivated me to be a more public activist instead of internalizing my beliefs.

" Catapult," middle right. This is the logo of a startup incubator where I launched my first company, Threading Twine. I learned that business can provide others access to fundamental human needs, such as economic empowerment of minorities and education. In my career, I hope to be a corporate advocate for the empowerment of women, creating large-scale impact and deconstructing institutional boundaries that obstruct women from working in high-level positions. Working as a women's rights activist will allow me to engage in creating lasting movements for equality, rather than contributing to a cycle that elevates the stances of wealthy individuals.

" Thank God it's Monday," sneakily nestled in the upper right corner. Although I attempt to love all my stickers equally (haha), this is one of my favorites. I always want my association with work to be positive.

And there are many others, including the horizontal, yellow stripes of the Human Rights Campaign; " The Team," a sticker from the Model G20 Economics Summit where I collaborated with youth from around the globe; and stickers from " Kode with Klossy," a community of girls working to promote women's involvement in underrepresented fields.

When my computer dies (hopefully not for another few years), it will be like my passport expiring. It'll be difficult leaving these moments and memories behind, but I probably won't want these stickers in my 20s anyways (except Harry Styles, that's never leaving). My next set of stickers will reveal my next set of aspirations. They hold the key to future paths I will navigate, knowledge I will gain, and connections I will make.

Neat essay, huh? In a bit I'll teach you how this essay was developed.

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Montage is something you've likely all encountered before, but some may not be familiar with the word itself. It's a technique that involves using separate elements (pictures, words, music, etc.) to create a new whole. In filmmaking, the montage effect is used to condense space and time so that information can be delivered in a more efficient way.

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Campus visits from college admissions specialists would help solidify the importance of the college essay.

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I think students could benefit from hearing a recent grad and their experience with writing the essay.

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Love this idea!!! Followed by a writing workshop!

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Helping students make personal connections and be comfortable with sharing them, adapting them and incorporating them into their writing 

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Helping students make personal connections and be comfortable with sharing them, adapting them and incorporating them into their writing 

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Students struggle with some of the basic conventions of grammar, like proper comma usage, so I’d create a tangible workbook with rules/practices they can revisit.

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I'd like it to cover the following: writing style and identity, writing process, basic grammar guide, and mentor texts that display a variety of writing styles.

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I'd like it to cover the following: writing style and identity, writing process, basic grammar guide, and mentor texts that display a variety of writing styles.

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Sections to include sentences from "readings" and for students to emulate that writing.

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Sections to include sentences from "readings" and for students to emulate that writing.

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Exemplars for students to study and break apart

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I would come up with real life statements to write about. 

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I would come up with real life statements to write about. 

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I’d like to have some essays from local students to serve as mentor texts.

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Exemplar essays and graphic organizers for writing process

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Exemplar essays and graphic organizers for writing process

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Mentor texts including recommendations of picture books, short stories and essays.

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Mentor texts including recommendations of picture books, short stories and essays.