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All about ME

NAME

PETS white Cat

favourite MOVIE/TV Show

Kunafe about my♡ FAMILY

favourite CANDY

favourite

PLACE

Home Cafe

MUSIC

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my

old arabic Sonng

favourite

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Turkey

heritage

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Tordan.

HOBBIES 目

reading chers

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4 bay s

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000 17-2. 1967

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Science

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Education Politics and philosoph

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in school Physics History

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FOOD

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56

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Hello, channel one. I always believed that I could be a scientist. Imagine you had a big dream and you live in a poor family and the money is tight. So you have to depend on yourself to get the money for the equipment of your dream. When you finally get the money to buy whiterobe laptop, metals, wood and some AI functions, imagine all the success you can create with this equipment. Well, there is a thing that I haven't told you yet. Way back ago, my ancestors was my tribe ancestors were so evil they were so evil that they were mocking God. So a lord curses them. Now they only can eat salmon. So my idea is to create a machine with all the equipment to generate all the foods in the world and even new, better foods. And so I can give things started all the way back at Bahrain Cetera. I was four and my mom was sick. So I worked hard and got equipment. Then I started working hard. All day, all day up. No sleep. Until I created the machine. Then I generated food. And all the globe of the world are surprised and impressed and happy. And when I give myself credit, they all loved me. And they said I'm a hero. So you did it. Great job. This story is what this story what I'm trying to say is to never give up. No matter what. Just don't give up, no matter how hard times are much. Mujtaba Ali signing out.

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Based on the information provided, Fikri seems to have a diverse range of interests and hobbies. It's great to see that he has a pet cat and enjoys spending time at his favorite cafe. His love for old Arabic music and movies indicates an appreciation for his cultural roots.

It's interesting to note that Fikri has a passion for reading books on science, education, politics, and philosophy, as well as a particular admiration for Cher. It would be great to know more about the specific books he enjoys reading and what he finds intriguing about them.

It's also worth mentioning that Fikri has a family consisting of his wife, who is an architect, and four sons. It would be interesting to know more about his family dynamic and how they spend time together.

Overall, Fikri seems like a well-rounded individual with a variety of hobbies and interests that reflect his cultural background and personal preferences. It would be great to learn more about his experiences, values, and aspirations.

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Based on the information provided, Fikri seems to have a diverse range of interests and hobbies. It's great to see that he has a pet cat and enjoys spending time at his favorite cafe. His love for old Arabic music and movies indicates an appreciation for his cultural roots.

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Faris' Life as YouTuber in the Cursed School

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Faris' Life as YouTuber in the Cursed School

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Great job, Mujtaba! Your passion for science and determination to achieve your dream is truly inspiring.

Here's a corrected version with improved word choice:

"Hello, Channel One. I have always believed that I can become a scientist. Imagine having a big dream but living in a poor family with limited resources. You have to rely on yourself to gather enough money to buy the necessary equipment to fulfill your dream. Finally, you are able to purchase a whiteboard laptop, metals, wood, and some AI functions. Just think of all the success you can achieve with this equipment.

However, there's something I haven't mentioned yet. My ancestors, who were part of my tribe, were so wicked that they even mocked God. As a result, a curse was placed on them, and they can only eat salmon now. My idea is to create a machine with all the necessary equipment to generate all the foods in the world, including new and better ones. This way, I can start to reverse the effects of the curse that originated from Bahrain.

I was only four when my mom fell ill, and I worked hard to gather enough resources to start building my machine. I worked tirelessly day and night, without sleeping, until I finally created the machine. With it, I generated food that impressed and surprised people all over the world. They were happy, and they all praised me as a hero.

This story is a testament to the fact that you should never give up on your dreams, no matter what. Just stay determined and persevere through tough times. Mujtaba Ali signing out."

And here are five examples of idioms that could be used in your original production:

1. "Bite off more than you can chew" - Mujtaba could use this idiom to describe a time when he took on a project that was too big for him to handle.

2. "The sky's the limit" - This idiom could be used to express Mujtaba's belief that he can achieve anything he sets his mind to.

3. "Put all your eggs in one basket" - Mujtaba could use this idiom to describe a time when he focused all his resources on achieving a single goal.

4. "Rome wasn't built in a day" - This idiom could be used to remind Mujtaba that great achievements take time and effort.

5. "The proof of the pudding is in the eating" - This idiom could be used to describe the moment when Mujtaba's machine finally generates food and impresses people all over the world.

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Ammar's Last Story: The Super Transformer

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Ammar's Last Story: The Super Transformer

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert

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Faris' Life as YouTuber in the Cursed School

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Faris' Life as YouTuber in the Cursed School

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Great work, Faris! Your story is very creative and imaginative. However, I think we can improve the wording to make it even better. Here's a revised version:

"I am Faris, an 11-year-old boy with big dreams of becoming a successful YouTuber. One day, I stumbled upon the idea of exploring a haunted school for my channel. With my camera in hand, I bravely made my way through the seemingly endless corridors. Eventually, I came across a mysterious book that begged for my help, but I couldn't understand its message.

As I continued my journey, I found myself soaring through the air, watching as a bystander. However, after 20 years of mundane life, I returned to the cursed school, only to find that the door was now shut tight. I warned others of the danger and even shared my footage, which garnered millions of views.

Despite the strange and eerie events that occurred, I remained determined to pursue my passion for creating content."

To vividly describe characters, try using descriptive language that appeals to the senses. For example:

1. "Sarah had soft, curly hair that bounced with every step she took."

2. "John's piercing blue eyes seemed to bore into my soul."

3. "The old man's wrinkled hands shook as he handed me the mysterious book."

4. "The principal's booming voice echoed through the empty hallways, sending shivers down my spine."

5. "The ghostly figure floated towards me, its translucent body glowing in the darkness."

To show a character's inner/outer conflicts and changing feelings and mindset growth, try using dialogue and actions that reflect their emotions and thoughts. For example:

1. "I can't do this," Sarah whispered, her eyes darting around nervously. "Yes, you can," I replied, placing a reassuring hand on her shoulder. "We're in this together."

2. John clenched his fists, his jaw tight with frustration. "I won't let them win," he muttered to himself, taking a deep breath before charging into battle.

3. As I opened the book, a wave of fear washed over me. "What does it want?" I wondered aloud, my mind racing with possibilities.

4. The principal's stern gaze bore into me, making me feel like a child again. "You know the rules," he intoned, his voice laced with disappointment.

5. As the ghostly figure drew closer, I felt a sense of calm wash over me. "I'm not afraid," I whispered, standing my ground.

By using descriptive language, dialogue, and actions, you can bring your characters to life and show their growth and conflicts in a dynamic and engaging way. Keep up the great work, Faris!

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Great job, Husain! I appreciate your effort in describing your experience playing Roblox.

Here's a revised version with improved word choice:

"I was engrossed in playing Roblox when I suddenly heard a loud noise and saw a box of toys fall over. It startled me, as I wasn't expecting any disturbances in the game. Upon further inspection, I realized that the box had fallen from the drawer, which my sister had left open. The drawer was unsteady, which added to my fear and anxiety."

To describe the setting vividly, here are five examples:

1. "The virtual world of Roblox was so immersive that I barely registered my surroundings: the dim light of the room, the hum of the air conditioner, and the faint rustling of the curtains."

2. "The toys in the box were a jumble of colors and shapes, ranging from action figures to stuffed animals. They looked like a small army that had fallen in battle."

3. "The drawer was an old wooden one, with peeling paint and creaky hinges. It seemed to have a life of its own, threatening to topple over at any moment."

4. "My sister's room was cluttered with books, clothes, and other knick-knacks. It was hard to navigate through the mess without knocking something over."

5. "The sound of the toys falling was deafening, like a thunderclap in a silent night. It reverberated off the walls and echoed in my ears, making me feel disoriented and dizzy."

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Ammar's Last Story: The Super Transformer

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Ammar's Last Story: The Super Transformer

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Great job, Ammar! Your story about riding the super transformer was very exciting and engaging. However, there are some areas where word choice and grammar can be improved. Here's a corrected version:

I received a letter in the mail that said I had been randomly chosen to ride a super transformer. The machine can transform into four different forms: a robot, a rocket, a plane, and a ship. My teammates would be waiting for me at the Ali laboratory in three days, and I couldn't believe my luck. I was going to ride the latest machine in the world and be part of a live stream!

Three days later, I arrived at the laboratory, which was quite a distance away, but I knew it would be worth it. When I got there, I called the number they gave me and a scientist showed me around. The machine was so big that they had left it outside! The scientist then showed me the robot, rocket, plane, and ship modes, and I was amazed at how incredible the machine was. My crew consisted of two girls and three boys, and we were all excited to ride the machine.

First, we used the ship mode and helicopters took us to the ocean. The machine was so fast that we went from Asia to Africa in just minutes! Next, we used the plane mode and flew around the world in just an hour, which was incredible. Finally, we used the rocket mode and launched into space. However, we encountered a meteor and had to quickly transform into the robot mode to save the city from destruction.

Overall, it was an amazing day, and I had a lot of fun.

Here are five examples of idioms that you could use in your story:

1. "The world is your oyster" - This means that you have many opportunities available to you, just like how Ammar was randomly chosen to ride the super transformer.

2. "Over the moon" - This means that you are extremely happy or excited, just like how Ammar felt when he found out he had been chosen.

3. "Out of this world" - This means that something is amazing or incredible, just like how Ammar described the super transformer.

4. "Shoot for the stars" - This means that you should aim high and have big goals, just like how Ammar and his crew aimed for the moon.

5. "Back to square one" - This means that you have to start over from the beginning, just like how Ammar and his crew had to transform into the robot mode when they encountered the meteor.

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert

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Great job, Ammar! Your story is short and sweet, and it's impressive that you completed the story dice challenge with only 29 words. However, I have a few suggestions on how you can improve your word choice to make your story even better.

Firstly, you can vary your sentence structure to make your story more interesting. Instead of starting every sentence with "we," try using different sentence starters like "I" or "my friends and I." This will make your story more engaging to read.

Secondly, you can use more descriptive words to paint a better picture of the scene. For example, instead of saying "we had burgers," you could say "we enjoyed juicy, delicious burgers." This helps the reader imagine the taste and texture of the food.

Thirdly, try to use more specific nouns and verbs. For instance, instead of saying "we heard some music," you could say "we listened to a live band play upbeat rock music." This gives the reader a clearer idea of what was happening in the story.

Fourthly, you can use similes and metaphors to add more color and depth to your story. For example, instead of saying "the prize was cool," you could say "the prize was as exciting as finding buried treasure."

Lastly, don't be afraid to use figurative language like personification or hyperbole. This can make your story more fun and memorable. For instance, instead of saying "we went home," you could say "we flew home on the wings of our excitement."

Keep up the great work, Ammar! With these tips in mind, I'm sure your future stories will be even better.

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Great job, Ali! You wrote a story about a boy who tried an unusual ice cream and didn't like it. However, there are a few ways we can improve the story and make it even better!

Here's a revised version of your story:

Once upon a time, a boy named Ali read a book about ice cream. He was curious to try different flavors, so he went to a dinner where he found a cactus ice cream. Excited to taste it, he bought it and took a bite. Unfortunately, he didn't like the taste and found it yucky. Feeling disappointed, he decided to share his experience with the police and asked them to close the ice cream shop. Later, he went to a spelling bee and won, which made him feel better. The end.

To make your story even more interesting, here are three suggestions:

1. Add some details to your plot. You can describe the boy's thoughts and feelings as he tasted the ice cream, or include some dialogue with the police officer.

2. Create a problem that the boy needs to solve. For example, maybe the ice cream shop is causing some kind of trouble in the neighborhood, or the boy needs to find a way to make the ice cream taste better.

3. Give your story a happy ending. Instead of just winning a spelling bee, maybe the boy can discover a new ice cream flavor that he loves, or he can make a new friend who shares his passion for ice cream.

Keep up the good work, Ali!

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Faris' Life as a YouTuber in the Cursed School

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Faris' Life as a YouTuber in the Cursed School

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One day I wish it to be a YouTuber. Then I have get into an idea to get into the cursed school. I get there with my camera. There was downstairs or infinity downstairs. I finally did get there and there was a dictionary said all of it help me, help me. I didn't know what he means. I go up again to the school. The school was normal. I wanted to go to the door to go down. But I have got through it. I know that I was a spectator and wow, I could fly. 20 years later I get bored. Then I get into a desert. There was someone say to me that he will return me to 20 years. Then after the 20 years the door was closed. I say to everybody that it is cursed. The news say that the school was cursed. Then about the video I edited it and it has get millions views. Dent.

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I was playing Roblox and I hear sound and I see box of toys fell. I scared that I know the sound come from the game in Roblox. What a nice thing and funny thing. And the box fell because it's my sister who put it in the draw. And the draw was hold. I really scared.

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Ammar's last Story: The Super Transformer

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Ammar's last Story: The Super Transformer

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The mail came in. It has a newspaper in it. It said, you have been randomly chosen to ride our super transformer. It can transform into four different forms a robot, a rocket, a plane and a ship. Your teammates will be waiting for you at an Ali laboratory. Story come after three days. I can't believe it. I got selected to ride and drive that machine. This is amazing. I can ride the latest machine in the world and I'm going to be in live stream. I can't wait. And they said I have five crewmates, two girls and three boys. Three days later, it's the day I can go to the laboratory. It is a long way there, but it's going to be worth it. When I got there, I didn't even need it. The machine is so big they left it outside. I called the number they gave me and the scientists came out to show me the laboratory. There was so much stuff there and they there and them. Finally they showed me the robot mode, the rocket and plane mode and the big ship mode. I went inside my crew where they perform me. I was later and my home was fore. The scientist told us to first use a big ship mode and the helicopters came to take us to the ocean. The ocean was far, so it took a while to get there. When we got there, it was so light high. It was like it is flying. It was the fastest boat I've ever seen. We went from Asia to Africa in minutes. This is a boat. What is a rocket, a plane and a robot. This machine must be taken time to make it. More than amazing. Look at the helicopters are here to take us away from the ocean. And the scientists told us to use plane mode. And helicopters came to take us to the airport. It was so big and they had so many planes. But there were normal planes and they don't transform like the machine I'm in with my crew. Oh, it is a timer to fly. Wow. It has a real fire and fuel. It is so fast. It is so close to the speed of sound. Then that means it is amazing. We took a lap of the world in an hour. Incredible. It was a time to land, so we landed on the runway and stopped. This test is amazing. The next mode is a cool one indeed. Rocket mode. The helicopters came to take us to where we will launch. There is a new place in Bahrain, but there is a new K. It took a while to get there, but it was worth it to ride a rocket. We first needed the fuel and it took time to put fuel in. So we ate some food. We ate banana and drinks and some drinks like juice and then came back to the rocket. They said there is a goal this time and it is to go to the moon. And we counted from ten to one and launched. There was so much smoke in huge amounts. It's amazing how fast it is. Let's go to space. Oh, no. There is a mirror. You're about to hear us at full speed. But luckily my teammates hair clip fell off and her hair pressed a button and it was the laser button and it broke the meteor. We had to get back to Earth. We were low on fuel and we landed on the robot. We transformed into a robot, which was a big we had to go to the country or we will destroy the city. It was a very good day today. Have fun and goodbye.

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert

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Hi. My name is Ammar. I am from Razi school. Today I'm doing the story dice challenge with only 29 words. One day I had a letter and I won a prize to the desert. We had burgers, milkshakes and we heard some music and went home. Bye.

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Once upon a time, the boy read a book the ice cream. But the ice cream cactus he get it from one dinner. Then he go by it. Then he tried it. Then he said it's yucky. Then he go to the police and said, close that ice cream shop. Then he goes to get spelling, gets a newspaper. The end.

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Faris' Life as a YouTuber in the Cursed School

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Faris' Life as a YouTuber in the Cursed School

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Ammar's last Story: The Super Transformer

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Ammar's last Story: The Super Transformer

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Ammar spacecarft story the longest amazing

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert

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Ammar's 1st Story: Winning a trip to the Desert