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Guidelines for peer feedback Outline 3 G03 (1)

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1. What were your strengths in the essay?
I had a good variety of ideas, I could include most of them and thankfully I could support them with reliable resources.

2. What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?
I could understand how capable I am about my skills of writing and organization.

3. What were your weaknesses in the essay?
I failed most in punctuation parts, commas and periods are my enemies.

4. What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?
I have to study more about comma splices, run-on sentences and fragments.

5. How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?
It helps a lot, my classmate's recommendations were amazing.

6. What was meaningful about this experience? Why?
It was that I could learn that even if I fail or not everything is perfect, I can also improve in my skills and I really learn.

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1. What were your strengths in the essay?
Most of my content and ideas were well organized and coherent.

2. What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?
I understood my capacity of writing essays, specially my skills of organization.

3. What were your weaknesses in the essay?
I had some problems with punctuation rules, specially comma splices.

4. What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?
I have to study more about comma splices, discover different ways to mix sentences.

5. How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?
His recommendations were okay, not the best ones, but still okay.

6. What was meaningful about this experience? Why?
Even if I fail or if not everything is perfect, I have the possibility to improve in my skills and learn.

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1. What were your strengths in the essay?
I had a good ideas, and all my topic sentences were clearly linked with my thesis statement.

2. What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?
With this last Essay I could really understand that I have many abilities, and I learned how to find resources.

3. What were your weaknesses in the essay?
Again I failed mostly in punctuation parts, comma splices are really my enemies.

4. What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?
For next semester I really have to study more about comma splices, and all the different punctuation rules.

5. How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?
His video feedback was helpful, he gave some ideas and recommendations.

6. What was meaningful about this experience? Why?
I enjoyed some moments in this experience, not everything was perfect but I could really learned.