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The point of view is 3rd person because it makes more scince to tell it from a narriator.

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This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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The point of view i thought was best was 3rd person because i want the readers to read from a narrative writer,reader.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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What are the universal human rights? - Benedetta Berti

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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What do you have to do for this assignment?

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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It would take place ina small village where people are controlled minute by minute .The people who live there where only allowed to eat at certain times and a very small amount there only also allowed to watch tv for 5 minutes each hour. they where only allowed to have 5 hours of sleep and if they even wake up a minute late they are punished by being put in a black box for a whole day with nothing. They where also allowed to use the restroom 3 times a day. The time setting would be about mid 2014 ,

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How to recognize a dystopia - Alex Gendler

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Theo apprentance Blaacksmiths Authorities decider

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Student Model for the Writing Prompt

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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Main character would be cindey buckets and she believes that the society is very wrong and she wants to stand up for what is right and she hates being controlled minute by minute.   antagonist are known as the minute men they walk around every house making sure everyone is obeying them and doing what they say each and every minute.

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The decider assigned theo to be blacksmith when he wanted to be a song writer theo U.S society so they can control a lot more easier people.

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How will you be graded for this writing?

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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The conflict is cindey vs the society and antagonist she sticks up for her slef a

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Event #2:Blacksmiths are working in the smithy.
Event #1:Theo is taken from the nursery pod and is told his assignment.
Event #3:Neema explains why the government gives people miserable jobs.
Event #4: Theo begins to sing during work and is punished for rebeliating his assignment.
Event # (Climax):theo gets punished for singing by not being able to sing or talk.
Event #:Neema isa out raged at theos punishment and gets all the blacksmiths to sing and rebeliate.
Event #:Neema and all of the blacksmiths get punished but the song keeps breaking out.
Event #(Resolution): The government realized what they where doing was wrong and let them do what they wanted.

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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The protaginist eventually realize what cindey was doind a saying was good and eventually the protaginist let who ever livew there followed by them making more houses.

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The theme is that the author is trying to tell us to never give up to prove a point scince it right other people will help and eventually your point will be proved.

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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Cindey grows in this story by standing up for what she knew was right. The protagignist move forward by learning what they where doing was wrong

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What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write.

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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The most exciting moment was when cindey proved everybody wrong

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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That its not hard to prove your point and prove everyone wrong.

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Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you.