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I like the emotions and feelings of the story

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I like the emotions and feelings of the story

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i like the dog story because he knows that the dog didn't do anything. he did it. he told the dog what to do and i think that is brave to say.

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I like how there are a lot of writers tricks, and the title really brought my attention. I liked how there was a lot of  good emotions too. This story could be really relate able to some people, because a lot of people probably loose there pets. Like this one time I lost my fish, but then I found it in the garage.

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I liked how a lot of the writers used dialogue in there writing it really helps drag the reader in.

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They used a lot of action.  They used good detail and punctuation.

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this story was really interesting I can kind of relate to the revealers because they been going through some pretty tough times. I was really hooked when she stared the book it was different. but also there was a lot of righters tricks which makes this even more impressive I LOVE THIS passage.

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this story started with cool words like, "the waves washed up to my feet like a wall."

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I liked the story because it made you think think something is going to happen even though you might not be right. For example, "Emma's gone!" I yelled at my mom. I thought that Emma was a baby not a gecko.

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i liked it because there were a lot of writers tricks

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There was really good dialog, There also was a lot of emotion. In a way.... The  author showed how the people felt and It is a really good book.

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The author used a lot of writers tricks and dialogue to make this story interesting.

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This story had a lot of writers tricks and did well at showing and not telling. The title also got my attention. It also had a lot of very descriptive words that described the situation perfectly. It also had dialogue. That got my eye immediately. It was overall a good story with writers tricks, descriptive words, and dialogue.

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There was such great dialog and great writers tricks. I can connect to the story because my cat ran away for a couple days and we all worried till we found her. One my favorite writers trick was "I found her , I found Emma." Which is repetition for affect.

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I liked the authors writing tools and how they used punctuation. I also liked how they standed out by saying EMMA'S GONE! this really pulled me in.I also liked how he used righter tricks.

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their are a lot of writers tricks and their was a little bit of diolog

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I really liked how she/he used amazing adjectives. When she wrote ''My mom and sister scurried downstairs''
She could have said ran downstairs, but scurried is a better adjective.

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I liked all of the writers tricks the author included. The words were so descriptive I felt like I was there. The one who lost the gecko. The dialogue made the story more exciting to read.

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I liked the story because their was a lot of dialog in it. And there was some good words.

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I liked it because there were many good words, and a lot of writers tricks. for example in paragraph 4  "It said her skin as smooth as baby skin."  Or in paragraph 3 "flashlights are spotlights"

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I liked all the writer tricks she or he used in there story.  They used some show not tell, and I like how they used it more than once.  I also liked how the story made you think a little bit.  Sometimes they made something sound like something different from what it actually Is.

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Their are a lot of writers tricks. The diolog was balanced.

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The end of the story was a good ending to wrap up the story. Also the dialog was good because she used it throughout the story. The simile she used good comparisons. The theme of the story was well written. She showed what was happening instead of telling. The title of the story was well named.

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I liked how at the end it was showing her learn from her mistakes and this made a theme

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The title of this story really hooked me and made me want to read more. I could immediately connect to the piece because of the well-chosen title.