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1)to make the story make you feel you are there
2)to make the story detail and make it long

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1.  write a story that makes the reader think of whats happening
2. show not tell

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Tomorrow I want to add more dialog to my new writing piece, thoughts, and show, not tell. Also, making it more like a movie, not a summary and write a page and a half or two.

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1)show not tell
2)write more

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Tomorrow I'm going to work on
1.Dialog with feelings
2.Show don't tell.

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1)dialogue
2)Show not tell

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sowing not telling

rivising

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1. Show how the characters feelings
2 show the way other characters act

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Tomorrow I want to try :
1. Why a character does something
2. Try to use flash forward/back

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1) Show not tell.
2) Be focused on my work!!
3) I want to put the other characters perspectives.
4) Write as much as i can!!

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1) Write 1 and a half pages or more
2) Showing not telling how the character is feeling.
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1) I am going to work on show don't tell
2) focus on my writing

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1) Show don't tell.
2) Describe (specifically)
3) Get readers hooked in the story.

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1. Show not tell
2. Make the reader(s) picture the story.
3. Describe the story a lot.
4. WRITE EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

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1.show not tell
2.write more pages

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tomorrow i want to put more show not tell

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For tomorrow, I would like to wright...
1. Explain more about how I was feeling in a moment (Show not tell).
2. Let the reader(s) picture my story.
3. Let the reader(s) feel what I'm feeling.

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1) I wan to add a lot os detail into my story
2) I want to explain whats happening   around me

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my big goal is to try and do what the author of eleven did and SHOW dont tell :/:P👍

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Tomorrow I want to put a lot of action and a lot of dialog.

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1) I want to write fast and furious  and really try to make my story about what we learned.
2) I want to my meaning noticeable for the readers.
3) I want to add more dialogue:):):)
4) I want the reader(s) to feel what I feel.
5) I am going to try to add a flashback or flash forward.

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1 I want my story to be detailed.2 I want to show my setting.3 I also want it to be mostly word spelling correct.

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1)Make my entry longer
2)Show don't tell.

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Add  more flash backs
Add more puntuation
Show don't tell

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I should show my stories what it is about, Because if I make a list of what things are cool in the interesting parts. So I should it my reading skills.

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1- I want to make my story interesting.