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They talk to the reader a lot

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Dead words

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Not powerful

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Listy

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Never told us why

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Listy

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The conclusion is not wrapping the story up

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The conclusion is not wrapping the story up

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Q

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Wo

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Thay didn't use grate word chou

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Doesn't wrap up and using dead words

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Need better word choice and dead words

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It's listing to much

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It does not have proper spelling

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It doesn't have a powerful conclusion . Have better word choice

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Needs more power but really good.

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They really don't have a powerful word choice for their conclusion or in most of there paragraphs at all

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I thought no it could be better by using different word choice

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Not powerful conclusion

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The conclusion was not powerful it did not hook the reader!

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I don't know we're the conclusion

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Only says those are my three reason

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The conclusion is not powerful

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They are using rip words not powerful

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To meny peryeds

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No paragraph

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The conclusion is not summing it up that well

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To meny

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Their conclusion sounds like they have no schema. This conclusion does not hook the story up.

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Using some dead words

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I don't like that they stated their

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Intro talking to the reader and no paragr

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Intro talking to the reader and no paragr

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No pa