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What new idea are you exploring? Do you think your'e relying too heavily on the Disney princesses to make your point? In other words: Have you thought of ways your argument could be made more clear without the reliance of the examples your'e choosing to use? It feels like your argument is more centered around the princesses rather than the idea your'e introducing itself.

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This topic has been heavily discussed in modern society, what's the unique twist you will be adding to the conversation?

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Do you plan to analyze one movie from each wave of princesses? If so, what will you make that choice based on?

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How can you differentiate between reliance on a man and Disney wanting to simply on romance as a motivational factor.

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Are you focusing mostly on reliance on a man, beauty standards or this achieving adventure theme

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Do you have specific princesses you are focusing on, or are you going to include all of them?

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Do you plan on relating how the princess role has evolved to broader societal developments on how women are perceived?

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What gap are you planning to address in the scholarly conversation? ( I am not quite sure how your topic is differentiated from other research)

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This is such an interesting topic. In your research paper, do you plan to talk about how Disney plays into these gender roles in order to continue profiting off of the princess brand?

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Do you plan on bringing religion or politics into this, because people have very strong opinions about porn and sex in relation to those topics?

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In the past as well as current topics, pornography has been tied to political means and issues, how does that change the conversation on pornography in relation to society?

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Your first primary source feels more like a secondary source. How do you plan on analyzing it like a primary source instead of using its ideas like a secondary source?

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Will you focus your argument on a specific age group throughout your argument, or instead look into the broader societal effects?

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How will you tie this into identity- is it more linked to the people who indulge in porn or the women it affects?

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How do you plan to project a more affirmative viewpoint on this topic. It seems that your'e only planning to explore your topic rather than asserting your perspective on it. If you only want to explore and not affirm, what do you think your'e doing to progress this idea.

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Do you plan to include the rise of a teen pornography audience in your paper? Are you going to talk about the harmful stereotypes that are often portrayed in pornography, or is your presentation more about the psychological impacts of sexual content?

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How do you plan to tie in popular culture to this topic? Adding sources beyond just scholarly discussions of psychological impacts may help you situate why this is a modern issue as pornography has existed for generations.

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Are you specifically looking at black women? If not- how will you bring in the black man experience?

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How does the documentary address the idea that colorism is passed down within families?

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This topic is already highly analyzed by scholars. How do you plan to bring your own voice/ perspective to it?

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Do any of your sources center colorism's affects on black men, or do you think your project is more focused on colorism's impact on black women? Do you plan to talk about colorism within other races?

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How are you going to add the recent conversations on social media of individuals calling out companies and brands on their colorist norms? What I am asking is, do you think its significant to talk about the recent changes of trying to change colorist norms?

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What specific aspects of the documentary will you be analyzing? It seems the wealth of information in this source may overwhelm your perspective and your voice within the paper.

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I really appreciate this topic Abdoulaye! do you think you would benefit from developing a new perspective? I think you have all of the information you need to come up with a new perspective.

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Will you focus on how colorism is developed/perpetuated in society or have a deeper focus on its effects?