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I love the idea of the game. What is the key demographic? How did you come up with this idea

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very original i like the idea of using pie face for this game it could be a little neater

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The dog pictures are kind of weirdly cut out so maybe you might want to re print them and cut them out again.
The writing on your poster board is cramped, so maybe use a bigger font, but the pop out because the background is black.
Where is your poster board?

The game should be 6+ maybe because they have to read the cards.
The game pieces, squeaky toys, don't really look like toys but thats your opinion.

The paper on your box is coming off, so maybe mod podge it so it doesn't come off.
Good game.

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1. Name Of Game: Don't Wake The Dog

2.  Hard To Understand But I Like How The Game Works

3. players 2 - 6 players

4. Ages  6+

5. How Much Time Dose It Take? If You Had Said That Then Sorry That I Didn't Hear

6.I Like Your Hand Made Pice's

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I think the play do and stuff is really smart but the box looks really messy and kind of dis organized.I like the clock and the machine thing you have the dog on. I would play your game it seems really fun good job

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I don't get this game.

what's with all this clay that is  mixed together.

Her box is a bit messy.

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The front and back of the box are a little messsy with the cutting and the pictures aren’t very clear.

There’s alot  of stuff going on and the background doesn’t really match the game because you can easily get out of the house.

We also didn’t actually see the squeaky toy hit the dog so I don’t actually know if your game works or not. Does it?

Make your logo bigger aswell  because the logo is really small
The idea is good though

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The dogs look pretty. How much would it cost?
Objective get all the kids to the end.
Do you need to have straight.
How old do you need to be.
Can you work as a team?
What happens if you wake dog.
I like how you make your on chapter
But overall I what to play your game 👌👍👏

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This is something like a game that I have heard of, o font really remember the name of it though. I think the characters could be better. But they are very different and awesome. I would play your game for sure. I like how you used the pie face item. What is your key demographic? How did you come up with this idea?

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tbh, I don't know if I would play this game. I really don't want to say this but the box looks  very messy. But I have to say, the spinner/ board looks amazing! Im very Impressed by the pieces and that there hand painted. job well done! 👍🏽

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I can’t tell what the photos are. The writing is hard to read so maybe you should double space them. And the box looks like the paper is peeling and the words that you cut out are messy, so you could probably cut them into a rectangle. Great idea, but I definitely think the art could be a bit better.

The squeaky toys don’t look like dog toys! I like the idea of penalty cards though. I don’t think it should be 3+. That’s too young to understand the game. I think maybe you should make t 5+ at the most.

You were very loud and clear during your presentation, and you weren’t too fidgety. But yeah I don’t think you should cut right on the edge of the photos. You should leave some room so we can see clearly. But great game!!

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Nice job

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i think that it is very clever that you are using key components from other games in yours. i absolutely LOVE the characters its realy cool how you made the people. GOOD JOB :)

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I like the idea and your energy.  This game reminds me of "Don't wake Daddy!" from the 90s.

I like the cards because the add replay ability and differentiation every time you play.

I would like to see a logo and know how you win. I would also like to see gameplay.

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I love you're box. I like how colorful the pieces are. You're game sounds fun. I have never seen something like this and iI really like it but you should speak up. All in all iI love you're game

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Wow I love it. you are using pieces from another board game for yours. its great you are using clay for your character pieces. Very unique. I can't really see the letters that  you printed. PIE FACE

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your box could use some work like maybe gluing the pictures better and the explanation was a bitt confusing

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I think you should cut the dogs a little better And you spelled "walked" wrong, unless it says waked. Also Mr.Norof said that you should see the texted from far away and i can't see it from my seat. But i see potential.I like the idea.

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I like the box but were it says the title It should be a bit more neat I don't really get how the pie face is used as a spinner but creative good idea! I love the name great choice. I also like how you made the pieces hand made really good idea the game seems fun in general i would love to play it! I think the words on the back should be a bit bigger and maybe put your logo on the back.

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The poster should be a little bigger. More color.
Speak louder.What is the story. Why did you make this. did you bye the board.

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1 your box  you   glue the box one more time
the dogs can be redone
the tiping  can be  a bit  biger . the paint can be thicker

2 the name  dont wake  the dog  i think  it fits your game .

3 your board  i love you board it looks so nice

4 the cards  they look so good

5 the  people  i  love all the creativitie  well done

6  the pie faces game  what is the point of it i find it  use full

5+

how much dose the  game take

for you to win how  do you win

what are the rules .

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the box is a bit messy you should glue the pics on better
because it is not going to stay on

the figures that you play with are cute there little clay figures
and i think that is cute

the game dose aline with your demographic and the name goes with your game

i like how you used different items from deferent games to use for your game components

i like how there is not a timer but a spider thing and how its not time but it give down when you do something wrong

and ensted of using a die you use a spider to move around that is cool

and overall this game is cool
and i would play this game again

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Lets start of with the texture of the cover it is all over the place the paint is not thick . I think that the cover is super messy i am sorry but it is the truth . You look nervous but that is understandable . Your box is not very professional.
Your dog pictures are pealing . Your game objective is confusing. I understand the choking hazzard it is a good pre cautionary mesure .

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you mite want ti past your picketers on better. I can tell you used pie in the face you a maybe paint over it. . you can maybe make them look like dogs more. Dose the pie in the face thing fit in the box?

your game is not really easy to under stand. you have a good age range. I can believe you made the pieces. I like the perspective.

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let's start of with the dogs they don't look that good, it looks like you just glued on a dog pic ( and words ) on to a pice of paper.

it really just looks like you just glued every thing on a box. the little playdoh things are could fall apart and break.

the title is kinda bland. and the name is ok but the way you rote it is mesy. i can tell it's from the pie face thing. maybe you can color it so it does not look like it is from a game.

the name is funny though. i like the triple !. the time is really good

i don't understad why it is 5+, kids are really imachure. maybe 7+. when you take of the top the sides of the under box are really mesy. you just got o marker and scribbld.

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I'll start with your box. The cover doesn't look nicely made. It looks like you got pictures, cut them out, then glued them on, It doesn't look to great. Im sorry.

Your board looks very nice but i have one question... where is the winning spot on it?

I love your board game title "Don't wake the dogs!!" great title for your game! I also love how you need to not wake the dog using squeaky toys! Very creative.

Your time limit it very nice for your game. 20-30 minutes is reasonable.

I noticed on your box you put a choking hazard, doing that was very thoughtful of you.

The age range is good 5+ is an amazing starting point for young children.

Good job Ellie I would LOVE to play your game.  Also sorry for a bummer in the start. Still I love your game. Amazing job!