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After reading each post, write your comments and thoughts about your classmate's and friend's work. You are encouraged to give positive comments and words of encouragement.

You may also ''vote' for the best eyewitness report by clicking on the relevant button at the end of each post.

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Dear classmate,

I think you have written a good recount about what happened during the accident. I like how you have used interesting words to give an idea of what was happening.

Keep it up!

Jeremy

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Hello there,

You described the accident very well. Just remember to use past tense in your writing, ok?

Hambali

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?

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When reading the recounts, and providing your feedback, consider the following questions:
1. Does the writer/s provide as many details to the recount?
2. Does the factual recount contain sequence of events or events described in a chronological order?
3. A factual recount should be objective and not contain opinions, thoughts or feelings of the writer/s. Did you notice any of these?
4. Is the recount written in the past tense?
5. What do you like/dislike about the eyewitness report?
6. What would you suggest for improvement? Why do you say that?