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Comments in screenshots. Cheers! Cool tech

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--> glucose & amino acids. Linking words should be "Such as" instead of "of"
Active Transport
Active Transport

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--> glucose & amino acids. Linking words should be "Such as" instead of "of"

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No mention of energy requirement

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A bit strange, cause involve movement of particles but through solution of different water potentials.

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Absorption and adsorption are different processes; should be "small intestine" not intestines
- gabz

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Maybe some concepts don't have to be split up? Many propositions in between terms, could be combined instead :)

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Does not only refer to water; so perhaps concentration is better than water potential
- gabz

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Link from net movement to the individual processes may not be explicit --> can lead to confusion as to which branch pertains to which process

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Usage of nouns; should be animal cell undergoes lysis/crenation; plant cell undergoes plasmolysis
- gabz

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-Can give more examples of diffusion perhaps?
-rate affecting diffusion: state how it is affected (directionality)

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'involving' down a concentration gradient sounds weird

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Some branches lack connecting words i.e. diffusion --> rate of diffusion

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can add connecting word between diffusion and rate of diffusion like "can occur at different" and then the box as "rate"

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"Net movement" box does not light up in the definition of Diffusion or Osmosis
- gabz

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https://www.mindomo.com/mindmap/6c87f5b37db69cd88d72c22fce5611c3