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Grammar is not.

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Organization seems better
Making a claim seems a bit better
I wish we could take a step back and work more on grammar, spelling, and sentence structure. A lot of kids are so bad at that, it's difficult to even get to the point where the reader can understand the message.

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Thesis statement present...for the most part
Organization attempted
Grammar and sentence structure need help

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Star:  Students are making clear paragraphs.
Star: Students are beginning to provide evidence to support claims.
Wish: Students should cite sources to avoid plagiarism.

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They are making claims.
Their organization is improving.
I wish they would be able to go deeper with their thinking

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Many of the students are doing a better job at stating a claim and providing evidence. I wish they would work harder at their language and sentence/paragraph structure.

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Stars: Students are stronger is organization and stating claims more clearly
Wish: Students need more evidence to support claims

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Stronger voice (more pleasant to read)
Seem to understand the components of argument papers better.
Wish they'd do better with some grammar/spelling basics.

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Star: They are organizing their ideas and claims and expanding their vocabulary.          

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Star: They are organizing their ideas and claims and expanding their vocabulary.          

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Wish: Use more evidence to back up their reasoning and maintain focus throughout their writing

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Still a little surface level with thinking and arguments.

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They are making a clearer claim than last year.

They are able to make a counterclaim that goes against the claim.

I wish their grammar was better because it takes away from what they are saying.

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Star:  The students are getting better at organizing thoughts. 

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Star:  The students are getting better at organizing thoughts. 

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Star:  They are better at providing evidence.
Wish: That they could communicate their ideas better.

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They are using evidence or rational points to support their arguments better this year.

They have better transitions thought out the essay

Wish- go more indepth  with their thoughts, many still just addresss srpurface levels of arguments/counter arguments