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Glow:your voice was a bit loud
Grow:look at the audience more and make the font bigger

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Peter
grow: speak a little bit louder and face the front
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Grow: I think you could use more facts and speak a little more louder and look at the crowd.
:Glow. I like the facts.

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glow=he gave a lot of details
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Glow: your voice is nice and clear his presentation is nice.
Grow: your font for the letters.

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grow: you need read loud, don't nervous when you explain her, also need more wrote about her.
glow:good question to ask her.

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glow: you were loud and clear
grow: your grammar

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Glow:His slides
Grow:Need to be louder and needs to correct his "i" needs to put more definition

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grow: your voice was not clear its like shaky cause your nervous
Glow:the slides was good.

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Glow: I like your confidence and tone of your voice. I think it was a good presentation overall.
Grow: Maybe look at the crowd.

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Glow your slides are very good detailed.

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glow=good information
grow=explain more

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one thing he did well was that he was loud his slides ware clear

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grow; look at the crowd more
glow;your voice is very loud and the slides are really good

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You need to speak more laud.

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you need to raise your voice louder

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glow: good voice and information you choice.
grow: explain reason why  you choice her.

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Glow:you explained your slides really good
Grow: something you can do is change the color of the fonts because it was hard to read

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glow: You had a lot of information and your slides were neat and you looked at the audience
grow: vocabulary

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you need to make your presentation longer and take your time explaining

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Grow: You could maybe speak louder and research more about her. Another thing is you can look at the crowd more
Glow. You did good presenting

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one thing that giselle did well was her slides where clear grow one she can do better is write more e

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glow=looked at the people
grow=more information

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Grow : , be more confident in your slef
Glow :you’re information was good .

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gissellgrow:you could talk louder and look at the crowd 

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glow:you had really good slides

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Glow: your slides were well organized
Grow:look at the audience more

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Glow: i like how you spoke with a good tone and you were confident and gave good facts about her.
Grow:

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Grow: face the front more and speak a bit louder
Glow: the slides are nice

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Glow:something you did good was explain your slides
Grow:talk a little bit louder

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Glow: Know his charecter well and got good infornation
Grow needs to put more efort on his slides and

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Glow Your slides were good and very good and have a lot of details
Grow Maybe speak a little more laud

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Glow:very confident
Grow:Speak louder

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i liked that he has loud and clear and his slides whare cleat

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glow: something you did good were your slides were neat
grow: look at the audience more

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glow: good your information and I love your question you want to ask her.
grow: you need read loud and more evidence why you choice her.

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Glow:  I like how you had a lot of information and you explained her challenges
grow: none

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glow:you did really good and did alot of research and showed her life

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glow: good voice and good information you choice her in your presentation.

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Glow:His vocabulary
Grow:Look at the audience more

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Glow: Something you did well was that you were loud and clear
Grow: you should look a little bit more at the audience

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Glow: His loud voice
Grow: Don't be nervous

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Glow ; you did good by giving us a lot of information i f

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Glow:He is giving us a lot of information of her woman he choice for #Force of nature
Grow:To not be nervous when he is presenting and that he needs to look at the audience

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Glow: Something you did good was that you were nervous but you still went up there and were confident
Grow:

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grow- Something you could do is look at the audience more
glow- Your voice was loud and your slides were neat

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grow:look at the audience more
GLOW: you had a lot of good facts and information

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Kiet
Glow: I like how u didn’t just give facts about her but you more deep information about her
Grow: don’t write to much it can get difficult

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Glow- I like you explained why and important things about Malala
Grow- use quotes and/or put things in your own words

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Rafael
Glow: your voice projected the room you words where clear. I like how you actually looked forward into knowing her and things about her life point out the good facts about her and how she stud up for not only herself but for others as well.

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glow: you did great when you told us why you chose Malala

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grow:change the color of the fonts on the words
glow:you did good

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To use less filler words, to make the slides more easy to read.

His voice was loud

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Glow: good voice level
Grow:Change his background because you can't see the letters

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glow: loud voice and explain awesome.
grow: something I can't see your quote, so you need use perfect the background for your presentation.

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Glow: Something you did good was that you had a lot of information about the women you chose

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glow he is loud and clear

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Glow: you did good when you told us her background and how she was insecure

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Glow: he gots good evidence and has a grate voice
Grow: Needs to know he wrote and also what to say

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Grow- Something you can do better is add a bit more pictures.
Glow- Your voice was loud for everyone to hear

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Halima
Grow: be less shy be confident
Glow: Her voice was loud and clear

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Finish your slides

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Glow you were confident about yourself and laud.
Grow you can maybe make sure what you going to say before you speak.

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glow: loud voice and good quote
grow: slower read and need explain why you choice her.

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Halima
Glow: I like how you projected your voice
Crow: finish your project

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glow: You did great and you knew a lot of details about your girl

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Glow:Good background
Grow:Needs to explain better

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Glow: Something you did good was that you were loud and clear and you were confident
Grow: Something you can work on is have your work done on time

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grow:finishing it
glow:you were confident and spoke loudly

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his voice was loud

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Glow: you spoke loud and you were confident

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glow: Something you did good was that you looked at the audience
grow: something you can improve on is slow down a little bit

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Glow- Your slides were neat and your voice was loud
Grow- you can look more at the audience and not read everything off the slides

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one thing he did well was being loud

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Glow: I like how you put a lot of information about her and called out the things that she did and how specific you where about her and amazing volume it voice your voice projected across the room not to loud and not to soft. You knew this woman really well which is what made your presentation really great.
Grow: slow down

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glow: good information and volume
grow: go slower

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Glow he talks loud
Grow look at the audience

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grow : dont be nervous
glow: you had a lot of information

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Glow: He has a lot of good times her woman had and bad times also how she got trouaght her struggles

Grow:

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glow: loud voice and explain about her well
grow: you need read slow motion. :)

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glow he is lound and clear
grow one thing he can do is not be shy

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grow:look more at the audience
glow:it was very neatly

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grow- something you could do is the color of your letter font could be a different color so we can read it more easy.
Glow- your slides were really neat and you looked at the audience

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Glow: I like his vocabulary
Grow: nothing

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The slides were neat

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Gonzalo
Glow: your voice was projected

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glow: loud voice and your explain.
grow: need more quote.

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Glow: Something you did good was that you were loud and all your slides had pictures
Grow: something you need to work on is to be confident and not shy

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Glow- I like how your slides were really neat.
Grow-look at the audience more and have a louder voice.

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her slides are clean
grow she can speak louder

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Glow: you did great when you told us about how she said she only made it because of the people who doughted her from the start

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grow: look at the audience more
Glow: you had a lot of information

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grow:look at the audience more
glow:you had a lot of information