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I like how you told a story about going to your friend's house to show Maddy a magic trick. Maybe next time you can keep adding details and descriptions as to what happened at the magic show. I would love to read more!

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I like how you described a magical chocolate go-cart, maybe next time you can tell more about the kid that you met while riding this go-cart.

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I like how you described eating chocolate, maybe next time you can tell a story about trying to buy it at a store, but every store you went to didn't have any left.

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I like how you described chocolate being on your go-cart. Maybe next time you could tell a funny story about it and how you played a game with it.

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I like how you talked about chocolate and even drew a colorful picture! Maybe next time you can make a cartoon caption and add in more words and pictures to go with it!

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I like how you talked about the different kinds of chocolate and the type of car you would like to get. Maybe next time you could add in more about magic!

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I like how you told a story about your life and the go-cart! Maybe next time you can tell more about what you do at home with your own go-kart. I would love to read more about it!

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I like how you told a story about a go-cart race, I hope you add more details about the story because I want to know what happens next!

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I like how you used descriptions to show what you could do with a magic wand, maybe next time you could tell even more of a story about the magic.

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I like how you wrote about a chocolate go-cart, maybe next time you could tell more about the go-cart and what happened with it.

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I like how you used details similar to Charlie and The Chocolate Factory. Maybe next time you could continue the story about the person it seems really interesting and I want to read more!

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I like how you told me all the things you like and enjoy. Maybe next time you could talk about the different places you have been.

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I love the story about the magician ! Maybe next time you could tell me more about what happened to the chocolate bar.

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I love how you descried riding a chocolate go-cart! Maybe next time you could add more descriptions about the go-cart and what happened when you rode it.

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I love how you told a story about chocolate maybe next time you could tell more about the family who is enjoying the chocolate.

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I love how you repeated some of the words, but maybe next time you could use more details to bring your story to life.