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* good job introducing the situation.
* I like the way you talked about Alex's grandpa it made it very personal and that made it easy for me to engage.
* Excellent use of text evidence.
* Finally, you made some good common sense statements.

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like the way you tell the detail and the main idea.

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Xavier i like the little picture and your reasoning is spot on

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Xavier i like the little picture and your reasoning is spot on

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i like the little picture and your

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I really liked the emotions she used while reading.I also really enjoyed the reasoning behind her statement. The only thing i would change was the use of the word I and I'm

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good job

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from grayson

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it was very good i liked the picture on the video u had

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I really like how you express when you are reading, I also enjoyed the information in the essay. :)

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Very good gob I enjoyed it because it was very informational yet entertaning

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you did an amazing job and never quit writing your amazing at it

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Alesia,
You did really good
~I liked how u used texted evidence
~I liked how u talked about his grandpa and made it more personal
~You made some pretty good sense statements
Well done>>>>>>
Also great job on the flip grid

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Janaya,
When you make the point that the lessons are unnecessary it is a good point. It is not like he is quitting something that his life depends on.
Your essay was well written. Thank you for volunteering to read it in class!

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i loved your paper you really explained why he should quit amazing job

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good job!

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like the way you tell us the story and the way the way you write the story was beautiful

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Extremely informational to me. I enjoyed all the little details you had too. Good job!

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good job i love it

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Janaya,
You did excellent.
~I liked how u brought up facts that scientist have said
~I enjoyed how you brought up text evidence
~I like when u made the point that the lessons are unnecessary and its not like he is quitting something huge that his whole life is depending on this one change.
well done:::}}}}}

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Janaya, you did an AMAZING job, I really enjoyed how you included text evidence.

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lots of information and resaoning good job

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I really loved how you talk Alex's POV and how it could damage his mental health and drain him

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i think u did an good job on righting this i liked how u wrote all of that for this essay :)

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you did an amazing job!

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I think you did such a good job how he should quit and putting the words together.