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I like it.

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This thesis is great; it includes specific devices and responds to the prompt.

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Good; includes what it needs

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I believe the thesis is good.

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Good. States purpose.

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ok this one was actually really good :0 it hit everythinggg needed to be hit

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this thesis is good

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really good, def gets the point

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I think that was really good and had everything it needed

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its pretty good

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The first body paragraph was actually good due to the that it mention the the literary devices that were being seen in order to convey the author's purpose.Also, used text evidence to back his claim.

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i liked this paragraph bc of its choice of words and evidence

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paragraph 1 uses evidence to efficiently support their claim

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I feel as if the body paragraph was good for the topic as it added detail when needed to and had great vocab with good transition sentences

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I feel like this paragraph, although slightly a summarization, does well in answering the prompt as it talks about the specific literary devices and elements used and how they contribute to the story through how it impacts the reader.

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I think the body paragraph was good because they had solid evidence to back up their claim.

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good commentary, accurate description of the literary devices and how they were used, and had good vocabulary toooo

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It did point out the literary devices such as imagery and diction but I feel that the writer was quoting the story too much.

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The body paragraph seems simple, but the writer despite that hits all the marks, they include a literary device used by the author, the evidence required to back it up along with purpose to back up the claim and related it back towards the main idea of the thesis and has a good amount of commentary.

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It had a brief analysis and supportive evidence, I feel as though maybe the transition and wrap up sentence could be better

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Good in the sense that they are descriptive with the devices that are used and uses adjectives to describe character emotions/attitudes—also uses specific text evidence. I think the only thing it is lacking is a connection to the statement they made at the start of the essay.

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although they might have used too many quotes at times

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I really like how they added a lot of detail with many quotes. I think they analyzed this short story nicely and explained each characters actions well.

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I think that the body paragraph served it's purpose as evidence for the claim made in the thesis however, and this may just may be me, but the use of the same quotes from the text multiple time seemed unnecessary

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the body paragraph was pretty good. It pointed out the literary device that was used and how it achieves its purpose.It has good commentary and good transition words.Also had a nice topic sentence.

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I actually think paragraph 1 was pretty good. The vocabulary was sophisticated and the evidence was solid.

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lacking sophistication and detail

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I fell as if the thes lacks description of the story and its lenght does not help it

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The thesis statement had to be more descriptive and like it dosnt say what literaly devices the author used or the author's purpose.

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I believe the thesis is a good starting point but could be improved by specifying what literary devices were used and what the author hoped to achieve or the in life statement.

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The thesis was weak and was more of summary. The thesis should have included which literary devices were used and how the helped the author achieve their purpose.

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I believe that the first paragraph is in the right path, but is lacking a detailed thesis.

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I believe that the thesis could have used more detail besides "the author used literary devices."

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The beginning statement was a good analysis sentence in my opinion; however, that isn't really the right place for it. Moreover, the thesis sentence itself could have been more specific as to which devices were being used and why they were used to advance the underlying message that the student proposed in the beginning,

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I think that their last sentence was kind of stating the obvious and was vague but I think that the rest was good

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I like how he brought attention to relationships hiding their true feelings behind their smiles. I feel like it could have been a bit longer and in a way more descriptive but over all it was good .

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I think this person's thesis was really good and explained what the short story was about and was a good opening for the essay, but I think they could have made it longer

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The thesis statement is somewhat lacking sophistication and doesn't provide a more descriptive view of the literary devices present.

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I personally think that was a perfect description of the story.

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personally think it could have been a little longer and more descriptive