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Feedback from Nagoya International School student

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Feedback from Nagoya International School student

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Hello

So I think that your personal project is really good. You showed a lot of evidence of your work and the video was easy to understand. There were a lot of pictures and which showed your ATL skills such as planning and organizing.
If there was anything to change, I would say that you should make some of the images a little bit bigger so that it is easier to see for the viewer. Some people may find the images hard to see.
Also if you were to add soft background music to the video, it would fill in the empty spaces.
Other than that, it's really good. :)

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Hi, I really liked your exhibition overall! I really liked the fact that you included all of your requirements for your personal project. Your presentation was very organized and aesthetically pleasing. Also, you explained your ATLs in detail which was very impressive. I could see that you spent a lot of time on your project, so well done!

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I really think you did a wonderful job in your presentation. Everything was organized and well explained. I think what could help would be like a 'romaji' sort of thing where you have Chinese written.
Your product looks amazing by the way, the food looks very appetizing which is beneficial for a good cookbook.
You could add a few more photos on a few slides that just have words, just to make it easier to read. Reducing the number of words could also make the slides more well-made.
But overall, it was a nicely-done presentation. You clearly had organized your time well and made a delicious product. Bring some to school please :)
- Nutsa

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I really liked your project idea and the final product! You talked about your photography skills which showed me you put a lot of thought and effort into making your final product. I wish I can try something from your cookbook hehe

- Maybe Shanna?

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I think your persentation is so well! Everything is organised and easy to understand. The ATL skill you included was clear, and have many examples to show how you do on the self management. I think you can put more pictures for you cookbook and your dishes on to the persentation, because I really want to see what have you make TT Please bring your cookbook to school, I want to learn how to cook Chinese food too!
- Angel

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Zixuan,
What a lot of cooking you did! Your cookbook looked so visually appealing. And I can see you had very good organization skills throughout. Ms. Shirota

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Hi!
All of the food you made looks so good! The research you have done is very impressive and extremely well organised. I hope to use your cookbook one day!

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what is your favorite food in your cook book ?did you make a front cover for it?

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I think that your personal project is really good because you had given us a lot of evidence why you think it's kind of successful and many well-taken pictures to explain it, you write everything really simple on the slideshow, but talking about one point a lot, and looking at the pictures of your cooking book, I can tell just looking at the image that your had taken a long time to make this food and to explain the recipes for us. Also, I think the name is really good because it can let the reader feels like it's from their parents gift.

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Hello!
Your cookbook looks really impressive. All the dishes you made look delicious. Your presentation was very organized you've inspired me with my project. Thank you and good job!

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what is you favorite food in the cook book