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Good job Zoe.
A bit minimal perhaps, but your animation works well. Nice use of fog as a background.
And your amimated lines are well executed.

Bert

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Well done Keira

This is well executed. Your interpretation of your Haiku is very imaginitive.

Bert

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HAIKU FINAL

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shape task

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lines task

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circle wiggle path task

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Each turn of the road brings

New thoughts and each sunrise

Fresh emotions.

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This is really excellent.
Your fog is very well realised and your animated figure is excellent. The whole thing feels very complete - potentially part of a larger piece.
Well done. As ever your work is of a high standard.

Robert

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Excellent work!

Your Haiku is very good. Using your own voice has worked and your sound fx are terrific. The fire and shooting star are very well done and your backgrounds are very well executed.
Good job.

Robert

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Great job Willow!
Nice to hear you did your own voice for your Haiku. And the fact you did your own sound effects is excellent. Well done
Your backgrounds are great. Very nicely animated.
Your text works well also.
Good work all round.

Robert

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This all works excellently.  Like the spinning! Super job with your voice over and sound effects. You have done a great job with this.

Robert

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https://youtu.be/FiJ_fandJL4

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Excellent work Keir!

Terrific use of colour for your background and the whole thing
is very well realised. It feels very complete.  Timings are all good too.

Robert

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Well done Rosin. It all works well. Very good tear.
One small thing your storyboard had more background colours - did you plan to add this?

Robert

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This is excellent work. Well done. Very good back grounds, your fireflies are terrific and your timing is spot on.
Robert

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Story board?

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Final haiku (it’s quite bad quality due to my phone downsizing it but other than that I think it’s okay-)

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Final haiku (it’s quite bad quality due to my phone downsizing it but other than that I think it’s okay-)

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Hope drowned in darkness
Emerges from the night-time
Bright as fireflies

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Well done. Good work.
I know you feel you would ideally refine it a bit, and if do want to you can.
You have done really well though.
Robert

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Excellent work, Rhian

Backgrounds are very nice. Text is good and your timings are too.  Good job.

Robert

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Good job Jack.
Nice text work.
(Just out of interest, what programmes did you use for your haiku?)

Robert

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Good work Honor. It works very well.  The timing of the animated figures and the text is excellent. Good colour  palate choice too.
What extras do you want in your director's cut?
Robert

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Well done. Nice to see a finished piece from you. Usual idiosyncratic touches from you too.

Robert

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Two for the price of one.
Excellent job.   And a nice idea to include the japanese version.
What did you use to make this? (just out of interest.)

Robert

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Great job!
Between your storyboard and your initial clock idea to this, you have really developed your idea.  And you have really done it well.
It is also evident how much work you put into this.

Robert

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Excellent job!
You've achieved what you set out in your story board very well. Like your idea of having it 'written' on paper. This is a very good addition of texture.

Your timings are all good too.

Robert

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Bravo Emily

Excellent work. Really like your backgrounds. Your animated frog and your 'plop' with the text are great. Your timings are all spot on too. It's all very polished.

Robert

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Bravo Michael. Great to see a second one too. Good work all round. A good example of how 'simple' elements well executed work well. You have shown excellent skill and judgement.

Robert

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Stressful :)

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I may add more to this during this week but this is what ive done so far. I changed the idea from a hand touching fire to a cat touching a bramble as it fits the haiku. I also had trouble with media encoder as I think I have to update stuff so that is why the file is like this.

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Text:

"Spectres of the past
Do not govern the future
‘Less we grant consent."

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bvHX8xNqFvY

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all moving things
must arrive at their end:
a knotty willow

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Thumbs up ig

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Haiku project (English version + Japanese version)

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Haiku project (English version + Japanese version)

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My Japanese might not be that great

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I also want it to look as if its written on paper

The door is also to represent what they seek.

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TIPS FOR MAKING FOG, LEAF FALL, RAIN (LINKS TO OTHER PEOPLES YOU TUBE VIDEOS)

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TIPS FOR MAKING FOG, LEAF FALL, RAIN (LINKS TO OTHER PEOPLES YOU TUBE VIDEOS)

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im planning on doing an animation of a hand going over a fire then getting caught by it. I think that would go along with the haiku I chose which is the "everything I touch" one in the sound files

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After Effect Task 5 Audio Fade in and Out

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After Effect Task 5 Audio Fade in and Out

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First created on Adobe Animate, then the rest was exported from After Effects.

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The path worth taking,

Lies in the tangled forests

Between heart and mind.

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I didn’t really know what to do

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AFTER EFFECTS TASK FOR WEEK 7  MONDAY 28 FEB 

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AFTER EFFECTS TASK FOR WEEK 7  MONDAY 28 FEB 

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WEEK 6 (21 FEB) EXPORTING PNGs and IMPORTING INTO AFTER EFFECTS + MAKING THEM LOOP

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WEEK 6 (21 FEB) EXPORTING PNGs and IMPORTING INTO AFTER EFFECTS + MAKING THEM LOOP

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With the Spring Equinox on the rise
Optimism arrives again.
In the Beginning of Springtime
It shows strength.

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"seconds seem so long
minutes pass like sands of time
hours tick tock by"

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NOT FOR A MOMENT
DO THINGS STAND STILL - WITNESS
COLOUR IN THE TREES.
OMODA SEIJU
(1771 - 1776)