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Nancy to Lizi
I love your use of vocabulary and how you used Racer, yourrespose Is clear and very vibrant.

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I like how your evidence is telated to your answer and you are focused on the main topic of the question. You could inprove on paraphrasing quote

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Your response clearly shows how ugh-gluk impacted Keesh’s life in a negative way, but next time you should restate your claim at the end of your paragraph, following the RACECAR strategy.

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I liked your first evidence that shows how Bok motivated Keesh.And the way you explained the evidence.

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Your claim is strongly supported with two pieces of evidence.

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Your response answers the question and includes the strong evidence. Next time, be more specific when you explain your evidence.

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One individual that impacted Keesh’s life is his father, Bok, his father encouraged Keesh to follow his footsteps and become a great hunter by being able to save people from his town. Keesh wasn’t able to speak in the council and hunt for the meat, but he didn’t gave up, he stand up for his rights and showed everyone how intelligent he was by hunting the bear. For example in the text it states, “ For that i know my father, Bok, was a great hunter, I speak these words.” So this evidence shows that Keesh was inspired by his father to be a great hunter and to follow his path. Another piece of evidence states “Bok ,my father, was a great hunter.I, too, his son..”So this evidence shows that Keesh wants to be like his father, he wants to follow his footsteps, and hunt like him. In addition Keesh’s father motivated him to be a great hunter and save people from his town by providing them with a meat.

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I really like your response. I liked how you
explained your evidence and how you supported your answer with good pieces of evidence

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Your response shows how the character affect Keeps and motivated him to become who is. You as well use racerer.

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I like how your answer is supported by good pieces of evidence from the text. I think that you need to work on your second piece of evidence because it doesn’t support your answer

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I really like you response. I like that you supported your answer with good evidence from the text and I like that you used racecer strategy.

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I like how you used RACECER and the evidence you sited proved what you were saying and thinking. But you could have explained the evidence better because it’s short, and so people reading would understand more better.

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Your response includes how Keesh describes his father and how he distributed the meat evenly. I like how it also includes that Keesh “followed his [father’s] footsteps”. There’s a good reason for Keesh to hunt, since the council rejected his request. The second piece of evidence is strong, but I believe that you can use a different piece of evidence to replace the first one.

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Your response is very well written and the way how you showed that Bok father helped Keesh achieve his goals.

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I like your response in you paragraph. But I think you should’ve add one more evidence from the text that explains why Keesh’s father motivated him.

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I agree with your response because I also think Bok motivated Keesh.

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In your paragraph you said that the reasoning behind as to why keesh went hunting was just to get food for himself and his mother. Which isn’t true He didn’t only hunt for himself and his mother, it was one of the main reasons but wasn’t the only reason why

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I really like your response, and that you have everything that is needed to answer the question. Your answer is supported by good pieces of evidence.

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The evidence you used to explain how Keesh explained to the council that his father, Bok kept them out of starvation doesn't explain how he did. The quote does not go together with your explanation.

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I like how you mentioned what keesh's father did and what he achieved. Next time nest time maybe write about how Keesh takes what his father left behind and what he did with it.

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For that I know my father, Bok, was a great hunter, I speak these words. It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters, that with his own hands he attended to the division of it, that with his own eyes he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received fair share"

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I think that you should’ve used stronger evidence to show how Keesh was inspired by his father to go hunt. For example, your first price of evidence doesn’t really show how Keesh was “triggered” by his fathers death. Overall, your explanations to your evidence did support as to why you used the evidence you did.

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Your response presents two pieces of evidence and both were explained well. The response was a bit repetitive. Overall it was decent.

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The response you gave was very good, and the evidence you provided supported your answer, however when stating names, they need to be capitalized. For example, “ugh-gluk” should be “Ugh-Gluk” as stated in the short story.

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I like how you explain your evidence thoroughly and how you used evidence that is relevant to your response.
You can work on towards the end you could explain the over all impact his father had on him.
other than that good Job.

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One individual that impacted Keesh’s life is his father, Bok, his father encouraged Keesh to follow his footsteps and become a great hunter by being able to save people from his town. For example in the text it states, “ For that i know my father, Bok, was a great hunter, I speak these words.” So this evidence shows that Keesh was inspired by his father to be a great hunter and to follow his path. Another piece of evidence states “Bok ,my father, was a great hunter.I, too, his son..”So this evidence shows that Keesh wants to be like his father, he wants to follow his footsteps, and hunt like him. In addition Keesh’s father motivated him to be a great hunter and save people from his town by providing them with a meat.

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Glow: I agree with your ideas and the evidence you provided to back up your response. Also I like how you used RACECER in your response.

Grow: You could look back and fix some of your spelling mistakes and explain your evidence more thoroughly. I also think you could use better evidence than the first one it doesn’t show a big impact

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I don't think that because of what Massuk said made Keesh get more food. I think Keesh would have got the same amount of meat with or without Massuk saying this to Keesh. I do agree with the fact that if Keesh didn't risk his life to get the food he would not have much respect and honor.
Grow: you should use better evidence.
Glow: I like the way you explained the evidence and showed what this accomplished.

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Individual who motivated the main protagonist(Keesh) is his father. In the text it states “The father of Keesh had been a very brave man, but he had met his death in a time of famine, when he sought to save the life of a great polar bear. In his eagerness he came to close grapples with the bear, and his bones were crushed; but the bear had much meat on him and the people were saved”. This shows that his father was a great hunter and he tried to save his family and the whole village. After the conflict with council Keesh decided to go hunting alone. In the text it states “Those who saw him go noted that he carried his bow, with a goodly supply of bone-barbed arrows, and that across his shoulder was his father’s big hunting-spear”, this shows that his father inspired him to go hunting alone to show that he was confident and he wanted to defend his point of view. “...neither widow nor weak one cried aloud in the night because there was no meat” this shows that as well as his father he tried to save the village. Keesh’s father was an individual who impacted Keesh’s life.

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I agree with your response because, if Keesh truly wasn't inspired by his father, he wouldn't bring his father up when he was speaking the council.

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I like your response but I think that you second piece of evidence does not really show Ugh-Gluk bringing Keesh down. So maybe you should explain more on what you are trying to say.

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I agree with your response on Keesh's father, Bok, being an individual who has impacted Keesh's life. Bok has inspired Keesh to stand up for himself in the council and to go hunting for himself. Keesh's father , Bok, impacted Keesh in a positive way. Without Bok, Keesh would have stayed quiet in the council and wouldn't have had the courage to go hunting by himself.

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I agree with your response as to who inspires him, but i don't agree with your evidence, and your explanation for them. Your evidence doesn't really show that his father impacted him, you explained how he sacrificed himself. The second statement you made doesn't really relate to the evidence. Keesh doesn't save the village like his father, he jus became chief and was honored. To me your response doesn't really answer the question

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In “The Story of Keesh” an individual who motivated the main protagonist,Keesh was his father Bok. Father of Keesh sought to save the lives of his people by taking the life of a great polar bear.Keesh was his only son and after that Keesh lived alone with his mother.Evidence from page 62, Keesh states “I know my father,Bok was a great hunter,I speak these words.” This evidence evaluates that Keesh was proud and was motivated by his father. Further, from his actions or thoughts we can inference that he would be the person that would hunt for his people.In addition, father of Keesh motivated him because Keesh became brave and intelligent. Evidence from page 69 , Keesh states “Then did the bear grow angry, and rise up on his hind legs...But Keesh walker right up to the bear.” This evidence manifests that Keesh was brave enough to fight the bear.He used his skills and not give up to survive and become successful.

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I agree with You On the idea that Boks death impacted Keesh decisions and shaped his confidence.

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i like your paragraph and the vocabulary you used. And *Bok second sentence

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I like how you mentioned that his father Bok inspired his will to survive thought the story. Next time maybe work on what Keesh did and how he followed his fathers legacy.

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A lot of the people Keesh has interacted with has affected him in a positive and negative way. These interacts have really motivated him to become better in what he does and to prove to others that doubted him that he is capable of doing anything. Some interactions that really did help was one with Ugh-Gluk.
Keesh’s interaction with Ugh-Gluk motivated him because of the negativity/ doubt Keesh recurved from him. To prove this is the text it states “And one day Ugh-Gluk taxes him with witchcraft to his face

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In “The Story Of Keesh” an individual who motivated the main protagonist,Keesh was his father,

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One individual who has impacted Keesh's life and motive forever is his father Bok. Who his father was as a brave man and hunter inspired him to be the same and to follow in his footsteps. His fathers absence in his life shaped him to have high confidence and have passion in his hunting regardless of the doubts made by the council. For example, in the story of Keesh it states, "It was at a council, one night, in the big igloo of Klosh-Kwan ,the chief, that Keesh showed the blood that ran in his veins and the manhood that stiffened his back." This shows that that using phrases such as "and the manhood that stiffened his back" it shows how life shaped into who he is today. Also, in the text it states, " Bok, my father , was a great hunter.I,too his son shall go out and hunt the met that I eat. This evidence reveals that Keesh is inspired by his father in the aspect of hunting and he too will do the same.

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In "The Story of Keesh", There are many people who motivate Keesh. One of the characters that motivate Keesh is his father Bok. For example, Bok impacted Keesh because he inspires him to be confident and helped stand up to the council. When Keesh was standing up to the council, he brought up his father's name when stating "As I say, though Bok be dead because of hunting over-keenly, it is just that I, who am his son, and that Ikeega, who is my mother and was his wife, should have plenty of meat as long as there be meat in plenty in the tribe. I, Keesh, the son of Bok, have spoken". In this quote Keesh speaks confidently and passionately of his father. This shows that he is inspired by his father. In addition, he also states "For that I know my father, Bok, was a great hunter, I speak these words. It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters, that with his own hands he attended to the division of it, that with his own eyes he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received fair share". In this quote, Keesh is talking about how his father was strong and was able to hunt better than most and he also talks about how he was fair as well. He confronts the council about how it is different now and they reject him. Keesh then follows his father's example by going out to hunt and distributing the meat equally among his village to prove the elders wrong. Keesh is following his father's footsteps as a hunter. The fact that Keesh speaks so fondly of his Father and does his best  to be like him, greatly shows that Bok is one of the main people who motivated him.

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A certain individual that impacted Keesh's life is his father Bok. He impacted his life because he inspired him to go hunting. According to the text it states " Bok my father, was a great hunter. I too, his son, shall go hunt the meat that I eat". This piece of evidence is stating that Keesh is going to follow into his father's footstep as a hunter to find food for him and his mother. Another piece of evidence that shows that his father impacted his life is " Those who saw him go noted that noted that he carried his bow, with a goodly supply of boned-barred arrows, and that across his shoulder was his father's big hunting-spear". This piece of evidence is explaining that his father became Keesh's idol and that Keesh wants to honor him by using his father's weapons. This is how Keesh's father had an impact on Keesh's life.

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One individual who impacted Keesh life is his father Bok. Bok inspired keesh to be a great hunter. In the text it states that but steadily and with seriousness, Keesh went on. "For that i know my father, Bok was a great hunter, i speak these words. It is said Bok brought home more meat then any of the two best hunter, that with his own eyes he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man man received fair share. This show how Bok impacted Kessh life of become a hunter. Another evidence to support this is that it states Take this now, ye men, for my last word. Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt the meat that I eat. Box being a good hunter is inspiring keesh to be a good hunter and to go hunt for meat that he eat.

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An individual that impacted Keesh's life is his father, Bok. Bok impacted Keesh's life because he inspired Keesh to go out and be a great hunter. Evidence from the text to support "Take this now, ye men, for my last word. Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go hunt the meat that I eat." After the council denied Keesh's request for more meat, he took it upon himself to go hunt more, and he was inspired by Bok to do so. Another piece of evidence from the text to support is " For that I know my father, Bok was a great hunter, I speak these words. It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters..." Keesh's father was a good hunter who gave everybody a fair share of meat. This all shows that Keesh's father, Bok, impacted his life and decisions.

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One individual that had an impacted Keesh was Ugh-Gluk. He impacted Keesh because Ugh- Gluk threatened Keesh with beatings and punishment. "The anger boiled a white heat. They ordered him to bed, threatened that he should have no
meat at all, and promised him sore beatings for his presumption. Keesh's eyes began to
flash, and the blood to pound darkly under his skin. In the midst of the abuse he sprang". But near the end of the story Ugh-Gluk was so  threatened by keesh that he sent two other hunters Bim and Bawn to see how Keesh was getting all this meat because they thought he was doing witchcraft. "And Ugh-Gluk withdrew discomfited, the women laughing at him as he walked away. But
in the council one night, after long deliberation, it was determined to put spies on his track
when he went forth to hunt, so that his methods might be learned. So, on his next trip, Bim
and Bawn, two young men, and of hunters the craftiest, followed after him, taking care not
to be seen. After five days they returned, their eyes bulging and their tongues a- tremble to
tell what they had seen. The council was hastily called in Klosh-Kwan's dwelling, and Bim
took up the tale."  At the end of the story Keesh was the highest official in the clan."And this is the story of Keesh, who lived long ago on the rim of the polar sea. Because he
exercised headcraft and not witchcraft, he rose from the meanest IGLOO to be head man of
his village, and through all the years that he lived, it is related, his tribe was prosperous, and
neither widow nor weak one cried aloud in the night because there was no meat

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One individual that had impacted or motivated Keesh  was his father Bok .Bok was a great hunter before Keesh was born.When Keesh had went to the council to confront them about not getting more meat for him and his mother.He reminded the council what his father had done for the village and how he kept them out of starvation.In paragraph 5 of ''The story of Keesh '' Keesh with seriousness said ''For that I know my father Bok was a great hunter ,I speak these words .It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters,that with is own hands he attended to the division of it ,that with his own eyes he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received fair share."Keesh had lived by these words and disapproved of the council's decision.In paragraph 10 Keesh said to the council ''As I say , though Bok be dead because he hunted over keenly,it is just that I,who am his son,and that Ikeega ,who is my mother and was his wife ...I,Keesh the son of Bok have spoken.''Keesh is proud to be his father's son.He is inspired by Bok and speaks at the council in his name and honor.

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The individual that impacted Keesh's life is his father, Bok. Bok impacted Keesh's life because he was someone who gave Keesh the will to survive and inspire him to become a great hunter like his deceased farther. From example from the "The Story Of Keesh" it states the following " Bok , my father  was a great hunter, I too,his son, shall go and hunt the meat that I eat. And  be it known now that the division of that  which I kill shall be fair . And no widow nor weak one shall cry in the night because there is no meat". The example shows that Keesh is able to recognize  the great deeds his father has done and wants to follow his path by bringing meat to his tribe so they wont starve to death. Another example from the "The Story Of Keesh"  it states the following "Early next morning, however Keesh strode into the village. But he came not shamefacedly. Across his shoulders he bore a burden of fresh-killed meat and there was importance in his step of arrogance in his speech". The example shows that Keesh was able to show that he is able to hunt and made those doubt him think twice because he was able to bring back meat to his starving tribe. The individual Bok was a inspiration to Keesh which helped him work toward his goal of becoming a great hunter.

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In “The Story of Keesh” many individuals have impacted Keesh’s life, one individual that has impacted Keesh’s life is Klosh Kwan. Klosh Kwan has tried to bring Keesh down by telling him he can’t do certain things but it only made Keesh want to do more. For instance “ As I say, though Bok be dead because he hunted over keenly, it is just that I, who am his son, and that Ikeega, who is my mother and was his wife should have meat in plenty so long as there be meat in plenty in the tribe”. This quote states that Klosh Kwan the chief and the council did not want to give him more meat, Keesh thinks he should get meat because his father was a great hunter and helped the village get meat but the council refuses, it frustrates Keesh but gives him an idea. Another example is “ Never did boys of his tender age go forth to hunt, much less to hunt alone—early next morning Keesh strode into the village. But he came not shamefacedly. Across his shoulders he bore a burden of fresh-killed meat. And there was importance in his step and arrogance in his speech”. This quote states that that the council did not let Keesh have more meat to he went to hunt for it himself to prove to the council he can do something. Klosh Kwan and the council don’t let Keesh have more meat, it made Keesh mad so he went in his own to hunt for meat and successfully did it

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In “The Story Of Keesh” one individual who was important in impacting and motivating the main protagonist, Keesh, was his father, Bok. For example in he text it states “Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt the meat that I eat.” This displays how his dad inspired and motivated the main protagonist in the story and helped to provoke Keesh to decide to go out and hunt alone. Another piece of evidence that demonstrates how Bok motivated and inspired Keesh is that in the text it states “The father of Keesh had been a very brave man, but he had met his death in a time of famine, when he sought to save the lives of his people by taking the life of a great polar bear.” This shows how Bok saved everyone including Keesh so they could live longer than he would he was really brave. Also this impacts and motivates Keesh to live up to his legacy since he did a similar thing going out to hunt himself for his mother and the rest of the village.

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An individual who impacted Keesh's life is ugh-gluk. How ugh-gluk impacts Keesh's life is by threatening him to beat him because of how he was speaking to the council giving Keesh the idea to hunt for himself.""Hear me ye men!"he cried." Never shall I speak in the council again never again till the men come to me and say It is well Keesh that thou shouldst speak it is well and it is our wish." This change allows Keesh to depend on himself to hunt for him and his village."Bok my father was a great hunt. I too shall go and hunt the meat that I eat." Being inspired by his father who died for the sake of his village however given the motivation to hunt for his village by ugh-gluk and the council

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In “The Story of Keesh”, there were many individuals who motivated the main protagonist, Keesh. One important individual is Bok, the protagonist’s father. The text states that, “The father of Keesh had been a very brave man, but he had met his death in a time of famine, when he sought to save the lives of his people by taking the life of a great polar bear.” This quote states that Bok sacrificed himself to a polar bear in order to save his starving village. This saved many lives, but since people are prone to forget, nobody remembered the deed of Keesh’s father. Keesh was getting poor quality meat, so he decided to speak to the council. Bok motivated him because since he was a hunter, Keesh felt that he had a reason to speak his grievances to the council. The text states, “Though Bok be dead because he hunter over-keenly, I, who am his son, and that Ikeega, who is my mother and was his wife, should have meat in plenty.” This quote states that Keesh told the council that he should be getting more meat because he was the son of Bok. After the council’s rejections, Keesh decided that it would be better to hunt on his own. When he hunted, he apportioned the meat equally to the village, just like how his father did. This is how Bok inspired Keesh to speak in the council and hunt for his family.

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In "The Story Of Keesh" Keesh's father had motivated Keesh's life decisions by inclining Keesh to become a great hunter like his father. For example in the text it states,"Bok, my father, was known, a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt the meat that I eat." This quote shows how Keesh was inspired by his father to hunt for the food he eats, himself. Also in the text it states," across his shoulder was his father's big hunting-spear." This quote shows how Keesh was motivated by his father by carrying his fathers spear as a keepsake. This is how Bok had motivated Keesh to become a great hunter and impact his life choices.

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In "The Story of Keesh a individual that impacted the protagonist life was was the antagonist Ugh-Gluk. He impacted Keesh's life by going against him and was trying to put him down. For example the text states "and one day Ugh-Gluk taxed him with witchcraft to his face." This shows how Ugh-Gluk was thinking that Keesh mainly just cheated his way into getting meat and he got it through impure ways, this moved the conflict along and Keesh has to prove his worth when Bim and Bon started spying on him. Furthermore," that boy should speak in council! old Ugh-Gluk was mumbling" This illustrates that Ugh-Gluk thinks that he should speak but goes against him when he becomes too successful and that motivated him to start hunting.

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In "The story of Keesh" the individual that impacted Keesh's life is his father, Bok. His father has impacted his life because his father gave him the will to survive in an extreme environment. For example in the text it states "Take this now, ye men, for my last word. Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his  son, shall go and hunt the meat i eat" this shows that keesh was inspired by his father to go hunting. Also in the text it states "As his father has done before him, he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received a fair portion, keeping no more for himself than his needs required. And because of this, and of his merit as a hunter, he was looked upon with respect, and even awe; and there was talk of making him chief after old Klosh-Kwan" this shows that he was inspired by his father to be respectful and kind. And for his actions he then became the head man of his village.

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An individual who motivated the main protagonist, Keesh, was his father, Bok. Keesh's father was a great hunter in his village and sacrificed himself to save the people of his village. In the story, it states, "It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters,..., that with his own eyes he saw to it that the least old woman and the the last old man received fair share."  Keesh is saying that his father was a great hunter and brought a lot of meat not only for him and his mother, but for the village people. Keesh's father made sure every body in the village got meat to eat and nobody starved. Another quote in the story is, "Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, being his son, shall go and hunt the meat I eat. And it be known now, that the division of that which I kill shall be fair." The council men didn't help Keesh with the problem that he and his mother were getting  bad quality meat with a lot of bones. Keesh then decides that he will go hunting just like his father and shall divide the meat, he hunted, fair with everybody in the village. Keesh was inspired by his father, and so he followed in his fathers' footsteps in becoming a hunter. Keesh's father was one individual that impacted Keesh's life.

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One individual that motivated Keesh was Klosh-Kwan. This is because he denied Keesh's proposal and threatened him. Although, because of this Keesh was provoked to make a decision on going hunting on his own, even though being doubted by everyone in the village. When Keesh returns from his hunt he was accused of using witch craft.  In the passage it states "And one day Ugh-Gluk taxed him with witch craft to his face." But later, Keesh was praised when the council found out that he is just an intelligent hunter. In result of this Keesh soon becomes head man of the village.

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The Story of Keesh includes several different characters that has an impact on the protagonist, Keesh. Bok is mentioned throughout the short story, which is Keesh father. The text states “Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt meat that I eat.” This quote shows that Bok is what provoked to Keesh to go hunt on his own and provide the village with resources. By stating how Bok was a “great hunter” and that he would follow in his footsteps. Afterwards, the text states “As his father before had done before him, he saw to it that at least old women and the last old man received a fair portion, keeping no more for himself than his needs required.” In this part of the excerpt, Keesh does this because that is what his father used to do when he brought back meat before him. Therefore, the character Bok motivated Keesh in “The Story of Keesh”.

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One individual who motivated the main protagonist, Keesh, in the short story "The Story of Keesh" , is Bok, his father because he inspired Keesh to confront the council and hunt alone to prove that he can and will be the best hunter like his father once was. For example in the text it states "The father of Keesh had been a very brave man, but he had met his death in a time of famine, when he sought to save the lives of his people by taking the life of a great polar bear." This evidence shows the way Bok died and this is what really triggered Keesh to be inspired to hunt. Also stated in the text is "Take this now, ye men, for my last word. Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt the meat I eat. And be it known, now, that the division of that which I kill shall be fair." At this time in the story Keesh is explaining to the council that he will go hunt for meat and be the best hunter just like his father was.

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One individual that motivated Keesh is his father (Bok). For example in the excerpt it states "Keesh showed the blood that ran in his veins and the manhood that stiffened his back." This shows Bok motivated him because Keesh wants to show his manhood and his blood because of him. In addition the text also states "Take this now, ye man, for my last word. Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt the meat that I eat." This quote shows that because Bok was an excellent hunter, Keesh is now going to hunt so he is motivated to hunt because of Bok. This is how one individual motivates Keesh which is his father (Bok).

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An individual that motivated Keesh and impacted his life is Massuk. To prove this point, if Keesh went up to the council to discuss the lack of meat in the village for everyone, and Massuk never stated, "Shall the babies in arms tell us men the things we shall do?", Keesh would have never been motivated to go out and hunt equal amounts of meat for everyone by himself. To further prove this point, Keesh responded to Massuk by stating, "Never shall I speak in the council again, never again till the men come to me and say, 'It is well, Keesh, that thou shouldst speak, it is well and it is our wish." Without Keesh risking his life to get equal amounts of meat for everyone in the village, he would of never been respected and later on, become the Leader of village

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“The Story of Keesh” consist of many characters that have an impact on Keesh’s life. One of which is Bok, his father. “Those who saw him go noted that he carried his bow, with a goodly supply bone-barbed arrows, and that across his shoulders was his father’s big hunting-spear.“
Keesh was inspired by his father to go hunt alone, taking his his hunting spear. “As his father had done before him, he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received a fair portion”. Following his father’s footsteps, Keesh made sure that everyone from the last old woman to the last old man recieved a fair share of the meat. Throughout the story Bok influenced Keesh’s actions.

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In The Story Of Keesh, one individual who motivated the main protagonist, which in this case is Keesh, would be the councilman. Mostly because they didn't take him seriously. For instance, ''There was much laughter when Keesh spoke of hunting. The laughter followed Keesh as he left the council meeting." This demonstrates how the councilman had no faith in Keesh and took him as a joke, which then motivated him to try and to prove to everyone his full potential. Another example is, "The next day, Keesh started out for the shore, where the land meets the ice. Those who watched saw that he carried his bow and many arrows." This shows how Keesh wastes no time to start proving the councilman wrong by going out and hunting.

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One individual who motivated the main protagonist (Keesh) is his father Bok. His father impacted him because he was the person who inspired Keesh to stand up for himself and prove that he is as good as his father. In the story is states, "It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters, that with his own hands he attended to the division of it, that with his own eyes he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received fair share." This piece of evidence shows that his father died being a great man and was very brave. He also was the greatest hunter in the village because of the amount of meat he brought home, and he also divided the meat equally among everybody in the village. In the text it also states, "Take this now, ye men, for my last word. Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt the meat that I eat." This example shows what Keesh said to the council and compares himself to his father and he says that he is as great as his father and that he can hunt his own food. So this shows that Keesh's father, Bok, inspired him to be the great hunter that he is and become the headman of the village.

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One individual who motivated the main protagonist is Bok, Keesh’s father. Bok motivated Keesh because of his heroic death. Bok’s passing inspired Keesh because wen Keesh speaks up to the council, he uses his fathers legacy. In the text, Keesh stated, “For that I know my father, Bok, was a great hunter, I speak these words. It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters , that his own hands he attended to the division of it-“ Keesh had brought up his father’s name in the council as a way to show he deserved more food than the others. Because of his father’s legacy, he felt he and his mother should receive more meat than the rest of the village. Another quote that shows that Keesh is inspired by his father’s actions is when Keesh stated, “My mother has no one, save me: wherefore I speak. As I say, thought Bok be dead because he hunted over-keenly, it is just that I, who his son, and that Ikeega, who is my mother, and was his wife, should have meat in plenty so long that there be meat in plenty in the tribe.” This quote shows how Keesh was standing up for his mother’s name using the sacrificial death of his father. Even though standing up to the council caused Keesh to receive harsh beatings and

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One individual who motivated the main protagonist in " The story of Keesh" is Keesh's father Bok. Bok inspired Keesh to survive because his death had a great impact on Keesh. When Bok died he saved the village and with honor. with his father's sacrifice keesh fells like he has a right to get plenty of meat. This makes Keesh speak in front of the council in his fathers name. Keesh's father also inspires him to go hunt by himself. As the text states " As I say though bok be dead because he hunted over keenly, it is just that L who is his son and Ikeega who was his wife and my mother should get meat in plenty in the tribe". Keesh spoke up for his father because he was inspired by what his father did. The story also states " Bok was a great hunter I too his son shall go and hunt the meat that I eat". This shows that his fathers actions affectrd him and what he will do in the story.