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Two weeks ago I went to the Manga con Barcelona with my friends. We went by train.
When we arrived, we lined up while observing the environment.
I used to go as a kid with my mom and my brother, but now I don't.

After a few minutes, we went in.

Everything was amazing, there were a lot of people, especially with cosplays.

After looking at everything there was, we went to eat something.

I waited for my smoothie while my friend was in line to order his slushee. There were many people waiting for their food.

The food was very good.

Later, we decided to go see a show that was made by a youtuber, it was really fun. And it was recorded for a YouTube video.

We were super happy about it, and we bought a lot of stuff.

Corrections:
Pronunciation!
Slushie
Youtuber

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A year ago, I was with my best friend alone in my house, I was bored and we came up with the idea of making an omelet of potatoes and onion I was making the potatoes and she breaking the eggs we went to wait for them to be made. It smelled bad we went to see what happens and was that we had burned the whole kitchen we had peed and my parents when they arrived were scared
but they didn’t tell us anything because it was their fault they didn’t let us eat.

Corrections:
Pronunciation!!!
the idea of making a potatoes and onion Spanish omelet
and she was cracking the eggs, then we went...
It smelled bad so we went to see what was wrong with it
we had peed <-- nos meamos??? IT makes no sense

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Many years ago, I went most weekends at Tibidabo, Barcelona amusement park. The first thing we always did was get on the airplane.

Then we went to the miracle house. When we get out of the miracle house my mother and my sister go to the mats, and me and my father go to the diavolo, they are chairs that rise and turn very fast. At noon we go to eat at the camp tables, and later we go to the roller coaster, and from there to the logs. In the afternoon we went to the other point of the park to walk for a while. Before we left we rode one more attraction and we left.

Corrections:
The audio is missing!
I went most weekends to Tibidabo,

The first thing we always did was to get on the airplane.
When we got out of the miracle house my mother and my sister went to the mats
and my father and I went to the diavolo
Past Continuous vs Past Simple, missing.

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This history is of two years ago, I was  alone in a scary forest. I was reading under a old tree, it was beautiful but it was dead it was a shame. I was reading Harry Potter and the philosophical stone, it's a fantasy book, I don't have a favorite character, but if I had to pick one I'd prefer Hermione anyway I started walking into the forest and I found a cat, a little black cat, normally people would be scared but I was fine, I wasn't scared, the cat was so cute, I stroked the cat.
-Hi, do you have a name?
-Oh god I'm talking to a cat- I thought.
-Do you have any problem?- said the cat.
I screamed for the scare.
-Can you speak?- I said carefully
-Yes, I can, can you see?- The cat said of sarcastic form.
Oh my god, I didn't know this cat but I hated it.
-Why you can speak?!- I was very angry because the cat laughing of me.
-Simple, I'm a magic cat and you are in a magical forest.- I can't stand this cat.
Wiuwiuwiuwiuwiu
The alarm rang and I woke up.
All this was just a dream.

Corrections:
Watch out for your pronunciation (though you said Hermione perfectly!!!)
I was reading under an old tree
The cat said in a sarcastic way.
I was very angry because the cat laughing at me.

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In Noa’s birthday, my friends and I went to Costa Jump. We arrived in a building, while waiting an hour we could go to the jumping mats.

After that we went up to the mats, everything was fine, I was laughing and jumping with a lot of energy, I used to fall but nothing serious.

An hour had finished and my friends and I had go of the jumping mats, but in the last mat I fall and my ankle broke.

I was short of breath, I was crying, my friend saw me and went running off at the monitor. The monitor with my friend helped me to went to reception because I couldn’t walk.

When I arrived my mom came with me, she asked me what happend, I answered her and ran to the hospital.

At the hospital they put me in a wheelchair because my mom couldn’t carry me in her back. I was waiting for 2 hours until pay attention.

In the room the nurse put a bandage on my ankle.

When leaving the hospital I found it hard to walk but I could get into the car.

The next day my mom went to my uncle's home to find a crutch for me.

2 weeks after my mom took off my bendage and I walked again.

Corrections:
On Noa’s birthday, my friends and I went to Costa Jump.
An hour had finished and my friends and I had to leave the jumping mats, but on the last mat I fell and my ankle broke.
The monitor with my friend helped me to go to the reception because I couldn’t walk.
she asked me what had happened,
my mom took off my bandage and I walked again.

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History 1:

When I was a little girl. I was in class and suddenly I peed myself. All my classmates started to laugh. My teacher called  my family , my father came to school and brought  me new clothes. I got dressed and I went home because I was embarrassed.

History 2

A week ago I left school with friends. It was raining a lot and we had to go through a lot of. And I fell from all in front of everyone and felt embarrassed. My friends laughed at me and I too I got up and went home walking .

Corrections:
Story (not history)
Google translator???
Past continuous and simple together are missing.

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8 years ago on a Friday afternoon I went to my Torre de la Mora campsite.

We arrived and we unload the clothes from the car... Then my brother's friend called me to go to the park. I went to the park with him and he started suing me,while I was swinging my mother told me to get off because I was going to fall. I told him to swing me harder , then I took my hands off the swing and fell down on the floor and broke my chin and got two black teeth.

We ran to the hospital and they put it on me and told me that the teeth thing was going away with time.

Corrections:
Pronunciation!
I went to the park with him and he started swinging me

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12 of November 2021

1 week ago I went to the high school normally like every day.

I was dressed with hoodie and jeans like I usually do.

This day I was very happy because my father told me he was going to buy me what I had wanted since April.

I was eager for get out of high school and go to Barnasud to finally buy what I wanted so much.

When I got out of high school I went to my grandparents house to take clothes, later I went to my house to ate and finally I went to Media Markt to bought this thing.

I went back to my house and I mounted this thing.

I premiered it and it was super cool!

I tried it for a couple of hours and it worked really well.

Finally I ate dinner and I went to sleep.

Corrections:
Pronunciation dictionary, please!
I was dressed in a hoodie and jeans
I was eager to get out of high school and go to Barnasud
I went to my grandparents' house to take clothes,
later I went to my house to eat and finally, I went to Media Markt to buy this thing.
Past Continuous vs Past Simple missing

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A few months ago I went to a mall with a friend. When we arrived we went to eat ice cream at the Burger King, his ice cream was Oreo and mine was KitKat.

Twenty minutes later we went into the recteatives and played several games. In the games we did a lot of points and we spent them on two Chupa Chups and stuff from the movie Frozen. We walked into a toy store and played a game of guessing the price of toys. We also saw a copy of Barbie, I recorded my friend while she danced a song that sounded like a toy. Later we went to the book house. We saw some books and I bought the book of A perfect short history by Elisabet Benavent.

Corrections:
Pronunciation!!!
Twenty minutes later we went into the arcade and played
several games.
Have you used Google Translator?

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When I was 4 years old on King’s Night, they left me some chocolate lights with a chocolate coin trail. I was so happy that I quickly went to the dining room and accidentally opened all my family’s presents. My mother and father gave me a surprise that was not waiting for me, on my grandmother’s balcony there was a bicycle bigger than me of a blue and gray color, I still have it at home, now my brother has her going to my other grandmother’s house I met my cousin down the street so we picked her up and we went to my house, we were playing for a while and more cousins came. We all ate and played more with gifts.

Corrections:
The audio is missing.
Too short.
Past Continuous and Past Simple together are missing.
When I was 4 years old on Twelfth night -or- Three wise men's night
My mother and father gave me a surprise that I did not expect,
We all ate and played more with gifts. <-- makes no sense
now my brother has her going to my other grandmother’s house I met my cousin down the street <-- makes no sense
Have you used Google translator?

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Five months ago, I and the rest of the class went to PortAventura. The trip was a bit long but we managed to get there. My friends wore blue, red, yellow and orange bags. First we have lunch and 30 minutes later we go inside! First my group and I met and we decided to go to El Diablo ( Tren de la Mina ). 2 hours ago, I lost my phone at this attraction! I was very scared of this. My friends wanted to help me with special applications to try to find my mobile’s location. Luckily thanks to sergio and to reception I could find it before leaving PortAventura. I will never forget this experience.

Corrections:
First, we had lunch and 30 minutes later we went inside!
Luckily thanks to Sergio and to the receptionist...
Past Continuous and Past Simple together are missing.
Too short...

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A three weeks ago I was in the mountains eating, when my friends arrived while we had dessert.

Later my friend and I were playing football while a person passed by. My friend got angry because we didn’t pass the ball.

And it was time for the fight. I said goodbye to my friends and went to the gym.

My father and my coach were waiting for me, I was all prepared, I just had to change for my first fight. And the moment came I was very nervous, my coach just told me to calm down and that everything would be fine.Finally I came out of there very happy for my first KO, my coach congratulated me and my father also, instead my mother gave me a very strong hug.

Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation!!!
when my friends arrived while we were having dessert.
Three (not a) weeks ago I was in the mountains
Later my friend and I were playing football when a person passed by
my coach congratulated me and my father as well

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I used to really like attractions, so my family and I went to funfairs

There was an hour left to arrive, and I was very excited.

When we arrived, we bought the tickets while I was eating a snack, because I was hungry.

We got in the park, and we went to the attractions for kids, but I wanted to go to a heavy attraction. So I told my mother

I thought she heard me, so I left. But really she didn’t listen to me.

I went up to the strongest attraction, it was very tall, and it had many turns. It was very cool.

I went down to ride, and I went back to where my parents were. But I didn’t see them anywhere.

I finally found them while they were looking for me.

Corrections:
But, in fact, she didn’t listen to me.
it was very high

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It was 4 years ago, when I was camping with the school.

We were playing games  when the teachers called us to go with them to eat. In this moment we are going to the camping canteen, while my friend and me are talking about the game when all the people went running to the canteen when my friend and me watch a white shadow on our side, it was approximate a 1’60 m and only pass in our side then it was disappeared.

At this moment my friend and I went running to the canteen. When we arrived some friends told us they saw the same shadow, but they saw a black shadow. At this moment I don’t think it is very Important. I did not think it was important, I used to don’t sleep when I was afraid, but I finally sleep these days. In this days when I remember this I have scary.

Corrections:
.At this moment we are going to the camping canteen, while my friend and I are talking about the game
when my friend and I watch a white shadow on our side
it was approximate 3 feet 3⅜ inches
At this moment I did not think it was very important.
On these days when I remember this, I get scared.

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1 year ago I was in the supermarket with my family. The mobile phones were  ringing a lot but they didn't care. When we returned home we placed the purchase and looked at the messages that my parents had been sent. They were from the community group. They say that a strange person was in the zone. One of the persons who was in this group said that when he returned from a walk he saw a girl crying on his terrace on the ground floor. He asked her what had happened to her and the girl had told her that a man dressed very strange had entered and she was scared and ran out to the terrace of the man since it was open. We took it for granted that he was a tramp. From that day on, all the neighbors close the doors tightly so that no one can sneak in. It is not the first time that homeless people have sneaked through the goals. But they also sneak through the parking lot doors and scare people. Or there have even been times when they have seen neighbors and asked if they could enter.

Corrections:
Pronunciation dictionary, please!!!
Past Continuous vs Past Simple missing...

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FINAL TASK UNIT 2

When I was less than 3 years old, I was playing with a toy ambulance, on a balcony and the lights of that toy ambulance nailed my forehead. A year ago I was running to go out to the patio and the little finger on my right hand cracked.In 2018 I was at Siam Park and I pulled down a water slide and cut my foot with a small pebble as I came out of the pool below.

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A month ago I had competed in a Catalan karate championship he had competed against a Russian.I was very nervous because everyone said that I was going to lose because it was good but.In the first round with a front kick I made him a technical knockout.and I beat him.thanks to that I'm going to the Spanish championship.I am preparing to compete in the Spanish championship It will be very difficult

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A month ago I had competed in a Catalan karate championship he had competed against a Russian.I was very nervous because everyone said that I was going to lose because it was good but.In the first round with a front kick I made him a technical knockout.and I beat him.thanks to that I'm going to the Spanish championship.I am preparing to compete in the Spanish championship It will be very difficult

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Corrections:
Pronunciation!
I had competed in a Catalan karate championship against a Russian boy.
I was going to lose because he was good but, in the first round with a front kick, I made him a technical knockout and I beat him.
Past Continuous and Past Simple together are missing!

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When I was little I played tennis and was the best in my tennis school.
A team signed me but I rejected it, because that team was in Tarragona.
After that, I went to a tournament, I reached the final and I played against the team that signed me, in the end I won by one set, it cost me a lot, but I was happy to have won.
I learned to go where they sign me if I don't want to win a set, but it was a good and fun experience.
In the end I quit tennis when I was eleven years old and I feel like I want to go back.
But I'm already looking to sign up for soccer or basketball, although I like soccer more, on the one hand, I want basketball, but hey ... what does it matter?
The other day I went to play tennis with a friend and I felt free, I felt as if the court were my feet.
Really, in sports you have unique experiences.

Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation!
Past Continuous and Past Simple together are missing.

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Some weeks ago I was in the offices where my mom works in my room watching youtube when the PE teacher I had in primary went there with her son to talk with my mom while she works. I, my brother and Max(the kid) went to our room to pick three nerfs we have to play a nerf war in a storeroom and I got the big one so they were going after me as target and I managed to dodge almost all the bullets they shooted at me.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DF2BSNg0DD2z8RHV1kb5XGpWs9pPPNnD/view?usp=sharing

Corrections:
The audio is missing! <--- ok, it's on your drive...
Too short!

Some weeks ago I was in the offices where my mom works in my room watching youtube when the PE teacher I had in primary went there with her son to talk with my mom while she works. <-- it makes no sense at all...
Past Continuous vs Past Simple together are missing!

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It was Friday 31th of october , my friends and I were eating at my house. When we finish eating I put music on the phone, my friends and I were singing  and dancing. They were playing foosball, at the same time I washed the dishes. Then we went to a small party for children, to help the collaborating parents. This was much fun.

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In the past I went with my family to Disneyland.
There was a big castle in the center of the park.
This day I was drinking water when I decided to eat a hamburger.
I didn’t have fries, I decided to order them at the restaurant where I was eating.
- Hi!
-Do you have fries?
- Yes! Wait a moment please.
I used to tell my parents what I wanted to go to the attractions.
After lunch we bought a big Mickey Mouse.
At night we finally went to the attractions,I saw with my family a Disney show
Two months ago, I went to my grandmother’s house, I was on the couch while my mom was talking to my aunt.
At 5:00 pm I was on the phone when suddenly my cousin showed up.
At night my cousin and I went to the kitchen and found a big spider. We started screaming a lot and my mom woke up from the bed and scolded us.
The spider was fake and my cousin and I started laughing because of all the scandal we’d made

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A month ago I was playing a basketball game, and while we were playing, a person was bothering us with a camera flash, that was forbidden. The referee warned him, but he didn’t care. I didn’t have confidence before, but thanks to this I have now. In that game I was very nervous, but still had great statistics: 12 points, 5 assists and 3 rebounds, I put two baskets of 3 points. My team was wearing a blue T-shirt and the other team was wearing a red T-shirt. But unfortunately we lost. Our coach didn’t get too upset because we lost a little.

Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation!!