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Mª Jesús, I don't know how many times you have rehearsed it before recording but let me tell you WELL DONE!!!! I'm impressed. If you continue working on rhythm and pronunciation like this time, it'll pay off for sure!

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10 dic. 18.11_ answering John's whatsapp

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Noelia, let me start by saying that I'm very happy that you've done this activity. The only way to learn and improve is by doing. In addition, the information is clearly presented and that's essential in a mediation activity.

Now, I'm afraid I have to tell you that it was very hard to understand due to pronunciation and rhythm issues. Please, don't let this discourage you. I'm a true believer that mistakes are part of the learning process and the only way to sort them out is by knowing what they are.

Some of the pronunciation issues that prevent understanding are:
- I’ve just rid (read should be pronounced /red/ here)
- e sports

- e sleep (you meant slip)
- Finally
- Since wrongly pronunced *sains
- Final consonants: Hell condition (health), Feel trip (field), If you need more hell (help)
- On the whole, it does sound like a robot and I'm afraid that's very hard for native speakers to understand. You need to start applying connected speech.
++ On a more positive side, I'm glad that you used the verb recommend with the correct grammar, congratulations.

FINAL TIP:
If you have a written version of your oral mediation or you have time to transcribe it, you can use a tool called  Natural Reader (very useful to help students practise speaking on their own)

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Almudena, it really shows you've rehearsed it. Well done! On the whole, this is great work. There are some parts that still sound a bit like a robot, but it's part of the process. Keep practising and it'll pay off for sure.

COUPLE OF THINGS YOU NEED TO TAKE CARE OF:
- pronunciation of extremely
- pronunciation of sign ed permission slip. I'm afraid you confused si ng with si gn. Let me tell you, though, that I find it beautiful that slips were to be sung instead of signed 😉.

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Laura, well done 😊. Good rhythm on the whole, just be careful with speed. Words have to be clearly pronounced, including final consonants., for example, the final "d" in "field". One thing you have to take care of is the pronunciation of the sound /j/ ("y" at the beginning of words like in "yet"). Click here for more info about this sound.

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Eugenio, this is a fair attempt. The information is clearly presented but take into account that your main concern should be pronunciation, not only of words in isolation but in a sentence (connected speech, where to pause, rhythm, weak and strong syllables and the like).  The thing is that it sounds like a robot and that happens to be very hard for native speakers to understand. There are no important grammar errors, though. That's a great job on your part.
Keep up the hard work! 😊

MAIN THINGS TO TAKE CARE OF:
- pronunciation of e school, ret u rn, clothes, fiel d, no t e
- connected speech: "about it" sounds like "abou tit" or "give it" sounds like "gi vit"
- on in the mountain

FINAL TIP:
If you have a written version of your oral mediation or you have time to transcribe it, you can use a tool called  Natural Reader (very useful to help students practise speaking on their own)

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In order to speak in a more natural way, Spanish speakers need to learn how to connect speech and where to pause. Otherwise, it seems to be a robot speaking and, what's worse, it might be almost impossible to understand. I'll publish some material on Google Classroom under EXAM TRAINING called 'A way to practise speaking by yourself 🦜' where I provide some tips. We'll also practise the shadowing technique in class using Natural Reader so that you can learn to use it on your own.

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Well done, Esther! Just a couple of things:
❶ I know you wanted to say "slip" but you said "sleep". Check the pronunciation of both words on any dictionary and you'll realise that "slip" is pronounced with short /i/ whereas "sleep" requires long /i:/
❷ Nevertheless is way too formal (only in formal writing).
Tip: in order to listen to Esther's, I'm afraid you have to click on the download symbol (next to the zoom symbol).

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As far as content and organisation are concerned, congratulations. The information is clearly presented. The main issue you need to work on, though, is pronunciation and rhythm since it sounds like a robot. I know that you already know that but don't despair. There are some tools for students to practise speaking on their own that can help such as Natural Reader.

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DEADLINE: 16th December

Imagine you have to send a whatsapp message to your neighbour to help them understand the information about their daughter's school field trip.

Just click anywhere on this wall and write down your name on top ("título"). Then just click on the three dots on the top right and
choose "grabadora de sonidos". You can also record yourself using your mobile and then upload it by clicking on "cargar".

Bear in mind that I expect you to practise your delivery before you publish your final version here, that is, don't click on "publish" until your're satisfied.

I might write comments at the end of your post. Please, do check them.