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"Pop", Todd grandpa dies in a car accident between Ulysses and Liberal, Kansas

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Todd and Sonja Burpo got married.

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Sonja Burpo gives birth to Cassie Burpo (Colton's older sister).

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Sonja Burpo has a miscarriage.

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Sonja Burpo gives birth to Colton Burpo.

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Todd Burpo fractures his leg in a softball tournament.

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Todd Burpo is diagnosed with kidney stones.

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Todd Burpo is diagnosed with hyperplasia.

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Colton experiences stomach pain and fever and is misdiagnosed with stomach flu.

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The Burpo Family visit the Denver Butterfly Pavilion. That night Colton starts to vomit uncontrollably.

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A doctor takes a look at Colton and suggests he has appendicitis.

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Dr. Timothy O'Holleran preps Colton for surgery.

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Colton sustains his first surgery but now he has a ruptures appendix and an abscess.

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Colton undergoes a celiotomy, the doctor found a total of three abscesses.

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The congregation of Imperial gathers for a prayer meeting in honor of Colton´s recovery.

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The day after the prayer meeting Colton shows amazing signs of recovery.

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After two surgeries and seventeen days, they go back to Imperial.

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Colton tells his parents about his experience in heaven when they were parked in an Arby's.

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Very creative to do it with pictures. I understood all of them except the one with the gurney and the dog, but if I had not read the book, I would be lost. the idea is for anyone to understand the book. Furthermore, please add (from now on), a little description of what happened in each place. For instance, there is no mention about the bills coming in or anything. In addition, I do not see Velasco's nor Cepeda's contribution. Everyone has to collaborate.
Grade: 85

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Colton talks about the throne of God

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Sonja saw a beautiful rainbow, when she told Colton about it, he said that it had pray for it the night before.

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Colton tells his parents that he saw his sister.

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Colby Burpo, Colton's younger brother, is born.

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After the Burpos finished watching Narnia, Colton told them that there were swords in heaven. Also Colton told them that he saw Satan but did not describe him.

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Colton told his dad that there was going to be a war, a war between the good and the bad and that Todd had to be in it. At the end the good wins.

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Colton says that the portrait painted by Akiane of Jesus, demonstrates how Colton saw Jesus in heaven.

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Colton turns eleven years old and he is healthy.

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The summary is very general. The descriptions do not offer much information.
As for the writing part, there is only 1 conjugation mistake, the rest is well written. Congratulations!
Grades:
Rd: 80
Wr: 97