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"Future generations.. in a safe and sustainable way."

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Students are willing to take risks to overcome challenges.

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first outcome - "every PE teacher and OAE..." change to be consistent with S1 - OE Educators

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1. "place-responsive educator" to change to "outdoor educator".

2. "place-responsive programmes" to be changed to "safe outdoor education programmes"

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1. What is the difference between PD and provide guidance to warrant the different phrasing?

2. Why does the infra alignment have 2 strategies?

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1. Learning environment can also include indoor and outdoor.

2. Are we suggesting for IFSD to change in the way schools are designed?

3. Suggest to rephrase to "Provide authentic learning environments with accessible natural green (and blue) spaces in OALCs for schools.

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1. Who enacts the "spiral curriculum"? MOE HQ/MOE teachers/teachers conducting OE lessons/camps?

2. Do they not need PD/guidance?

3. S2 should include CCE.

4. Whose "core values"?

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1. Definition of OE educators too narrow, since now non-PE teachers are also involved in cohort camps, including Year Heads, FTs.

2. To propose to change to "Provide PD for outdoor educators to enhance their effectivenes..."

3. In the footnote, can define what educators do e.g., plan/conduct OE activities/programmes.

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The hierarchy of statements are not clear and make the other statements repetitive.

We can either rephrase if we still want the hierarchy there or remove the statements that is the prequel to the final statement.

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O3 is redundant as it’s covered in O5.2

Do we need to then spell out O3 if less is better. As it is understood that O3 would happened before O5.2

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All to comment

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Kim Seng

Celine

Kah Weng

Maxine

Yoke Wee

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Sherlyn

Sayadi

Elke

Cindy

Susanna

Jasmine

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