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Talent Day had finally arrived, and she was determined to shine and showcase her hard work. Prior to the red-letter day, she had plucked up her courage and devoted herself to extensive practice, burning the midnight oil to perfect her performance. Now, she was poised to make a powerful impact.

On the long-awaited day, she fidgeted with excitement as her name was announced. She walked confidently to the middle of the stage, her heart racing but her determination unshakable. Taking a deep breath, she faced the audience head-on. Though Lady Luck was not on her side at first and silence filled the room, she stood tall, refusing to tremble with fear.

An audience member suggested she take a sip of water, and she seized this opportunity to regain her composure. A wave of relief washed over her as her mellifluous voice emerged, commanding attention and reverberating throughout the hall. When the applause erupted, she fully embraced the moment, knowing that she had not only connected with the audience but also delivered a performance and made a lasting impression they would not forget. To her delight, she won first prize for her outstanding effort. She was over the moon , knowing her hard work had truly paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held its annual Talent Day. Since she was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage and took part in the singing competition. Prior to the red-letter day, she practices diligently day and night.

On the long-awaited day, before angel's turn she was fidgeting not stop. When her name was called, she walked on to the middle of the stage nervously, as she took a deep breath. But Lady Luck was not on her side as no sound came out of her mouth. Her friend, Lucy notices the situation and urged her to dip some water.

After drinking some water, a wave of relief washed over her as her mellifluous voice came back. In the end she won first runner in singing.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held its annual Talent Day. Since she was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage and took part in the singing competition. Prior to the red-letter day, she practised diligently day and night.

On the long-awaited day, before Angel's turn, she was fidgeting nonstop. When her name was called, she walked to the middle of the stage nervously, taking a deep breath. But Lady Luck was not on her side as no sound came out of her mouth. Her friend, Lucy, noticed the situation and urged her to take a sip of water.

After drinking some water, a wave of relief washed over her as her mellifluous voice came back. In the end, she won first runner-up in singing competition.

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A fortnight ago, my school organized a thrilling talent day. I was motivated to participate by the encouragement of my parents and Mrs. Lim, my music teacher. I plucked my courage and told teacher that I wanted to participate on the Talent Day. Prior to the red-letter day, I burned the midnight oil and practiced diligently with the aid of my parents.

On the long awaited day, I was fidgeted while waiting for my name to announce. When my name was announced, I walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, I had a deep breath and ready to start. Lady luck was not on my side that there is not sound from my mouth and my body was trembling with fear. My friend, Lily urged me to dip some water.

After that, I started to sing. A wave of relief washed over me. The mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, the applause from the audience resounded in the hall. To my surprise, I won the first prize for my outstanding performance. I was over the moon as my hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, my school organized a thrilling talent day. I was motivated to participate by the encouragement of my parents and Mrs. Lim, my music teacher. I plucked up my courage and told my teacher that I wanted to participate in the Talent Day. Prior to the red-letter day, I burned the midnight oil and practiced diligently with the aid of my parents.

On the long-awaited day, I was fidgeted while waiting for my name to be announced. When my name was announced, I walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning my performance, I took a deep breath and was ready to start. Lady luck was not on my side as there was no sound from my mouth and my body was trembling with fear. My friend, Lily urged me to sip some water.

After that, I started to sing. A wave of relief washed over me. The mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, the applause from the audience resounded in the hall. To my surprise, I won the first prize for my outstanding performance. I was over the moon as my hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Jenny's school organised a talent day competition. As a singing enthusiast, she decided to pluck up the courage to enter the competition. Prior to the red-letter day, she burnt the midnight oil in her bedroom.

On the red-letter day, she was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walked nervously on to middle of the stage. She took a deep breath, but Lady Luck was not on her side. No sound came out of her mouth and she was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan calmed her down and urged her to dip some water. A wave of relief washed over her and her mellifluous voice came back. After she was done singing, a thunderous applause from the audience resounded.

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A fortnight ago, Jenny's school organised a talent day competition. As a singing enthusiast, she decided to pluck up the courage to enter the competition. Prior to the red-letter day, she burned the midnight oil in her bedroom.

On the red-letter day, she was on pins and needles. When her name was announced, she walked nervously onto the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath, but Lady Luck was not on her side. No sound came out of her mouth, and she was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan, calmed her down and urged her to sip some water.

A wave of relief washed over her, and her mellifluous voice came back. After she was done singing, a thunderous applause from the audience resounded.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, Angel plucked to take participate in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel burning the midnight oil to practice my song. On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted when Angel name was announced, Angel walked nervously to middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, Angel do a deep breath. Lady luck was not on her side. Angel has no sound and Angel trembling with fear. A wave of relief washed over her. After that, Angel started singing. Suddenly a mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, to her surprise , Angel won the first prize for her outstanding performance. She was a top of the world as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up the courage to participate in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel burned the midnight oil to practice her song.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted when her name was announced. Angel walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, Angel took a deep breath. Lady luck was not on her side. Angel had no sound, and Angel was trembling with fear. A wave of relief washed over her. After that, Angel started singing.

Suddenly, a mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, to her surprise, Angel won the first prize for her outstanding performance. She was on top of the world as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school had just organised an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, her parents encourage her to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she burned the midnight oil to practice for her singing.

On the red-letter day, Angel was fidgeted while waiting for her turn. When her name was announced, she had butterflies in her stomach and walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she took a deep breath and started to sing. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side, there was no sound and she was trembling with fear. Her best friend calmed her down and urged her to drink some water.

Soon, a wave of relief washed over her and she started to sing. Her mellifluous voice came back and she sang confidently. When she finished singing, thunderous applause from the audience resounded and she was over the moon.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, her parents encouraged her to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she burned the midnight oil to practise for her singing.

On the red-letter day, Angel fidgeted while waiting for her turn. When her name was announced, she had butterflies in her stomach and walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she took a deep breath and started to sing. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side, there was no sound, and she was trembling with fear. Her best friend calmed her down and urged her to drink some water.

Soon, a wave of relief washed over her, and she started to sing. Her mellifluous voice came back, and she sang confidently. When she finished singing, the thunderous applause from the audience resounded, and she was over the moon that finally her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual talent day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up the courage to take part in the event. prior to the red-letter day, Angel was burning the midnight oil and practiced diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath while sweating buckets. Unfortunately, Lady luck was not on her side there was no sound coming from her. She was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan urged her to dip some water.

After that, Angel started singing. A wave of relief washed over her, and her mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, an applause from the audience resounded in the hall. To her surprise, she won the first prize for her outstanding performance. She was happy as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual talent day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up the courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel had been burning the midnight oil and practicing diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath while sweating buckets. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side; there was no sound coming from her. She was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan, urged her to take some water.

After that, Angel started singing. A wave of relief washed over her, and her mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, the applause from the audience resounded in the hall. To her surprise, she won the first prize for her outstanding performance. She was happy as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organised an annual talent day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red letter day, she practised diligently with the aid from her parents.

On the long awaited day, Angel was fidgeted while waiting for Angels turn. When Angel name was announced, she has butterflies in her stomach. Before Angel stand up the stage, she take a deep breath, but lady luck was not on her side, she still can't speak a word from her mouth. Thankfully, Angel's friend, Lila, gave her a bottle to get a sip of water.

After that, Angel started to build up her courage and started to sing. Everyone gave a wave of relief washed over her. Angel's mellifluous voice came back. After the performance, applause from the audience resounded. The pinnacle of the day is Angel won the first prize. She squealed with delight holding the trophy up in her hands.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organised an annual talent day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she practised diligently with the aid of her parents.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting while waiting for her turn. When Angel's name was announced, she had butterflies in her stomach. Before Angel stood up on the stage, she took a deep breath, but Lady Luck was not on her side, she still couldn't speak a word. Thankfully, Angel's friend, Lila, gave her a bottle of water to take a sip.

After that, Angel started to build up her courage and began to sing.

A wave of relief washed over her. Angel's mellifluous voice came back. After the performance, applause from the audience resounded. The pinnacle of the day was that Angel won the first prize. She squealed with delight, holding the trophy up in her hands.

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A fortnight ago, Mary 'school has organized the talent Day. She has plucked up her courage to join the talent day. Prior to the day, she burning the midnight oil to praticed the singing competition as no pain no gain. On the long awaited day, Mary fidgeted with unforcontable. When her name was announced, She walk nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath and prepare to sing her song. Lady lucky was not on her side, She suddenly has no sound. The teacher told her to dip some water. A wave of relief washed over her, She's melliflous voice is back. Following the performance, the applause from the audience responded loudly. Fro this exprience ,i learn to be brave.

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A fortnight ago, Mary’s school organized the Talent Day. She plucked up her courage to join the Talent Day. Prior to the day, she had been burning the midnight oil to practice for the singing competition, as no pain, no gain.

On the long-awaited day, Mary fidgeted uncontrollably. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath and prepared to sing her song. Lady Luck was not on her side; she suddenly had no sound. The teacher told her to take a sip of water.

A wave of relief washed over her; her mellifluous voice was back. Following the performance, the applause from the audience responded loudly. From this experience, I learned to be brave and be persistent. Eventually, hard work would pay off .

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A fortnight ago,  Jestina’s school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Jestina was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event.  Prior to the red-letter day,  she burning the midnight oil to practice the singing competition as practice make perfect.

On the long-awaited day, Jestina was fidgeted before she start singing. When her name called was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She make a deep breath and ready to start singing. Lady Luck was not on her side, she was no sound. Jestina trembling with fear, her friend urged her to dip some water.

A wave of relief washed over her, a sounds of mellifluous voice come back. Applause from the audience resounded for Jestina. When the result were released, Jestina had butterflies in her stomach. To her surprise, she won the first prize! She ran to the middle of the stage to receive the trophy. She was excited as her hard work paid offf.

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A fortnight ago, Jestina’s school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Jestina was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she had been burning the midnight oil to practice for the singing competition, as practice makes perfect.

On the long-awaited day, Jestina was fidgeting before she started singing. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath and was ready to start singing. Lady Luck was not on her side, there was no sound. Jestina trembled with fear, and her friend urged her to take a sip of water.

A wave of relief washed over her as her mellifluous voice came back. Applause from the audience resounded for Jestina. When the results were released, Jestina had butterflies in her stomach. To her surprise, she won the first prize! She ran to the middle of the stage to receive the trophy. She was excited as her hard work paid off.

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A week ago, Chloe school organised an annual Talent day.I plucked up her courage. Prior to the red letter day, she keep burn the midnight oil for practicing.On the long awaited day, she fidgeted. Whem her name was announced, she walked nervously onto the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath before starting. Ledy Luck was not on her side, she got no sound and she was trembling with fear! Clarissa urged her to dip some water. After drinking water, she a wave of relief washed over her. Her mellifluous voice came back. After finishing, applause from the audience resounded.

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A week ago, Chloe's school organized an annual Talent Day. She plucked up her courage. Prior to the red-letter day, she kept burning the midnight oil to practise.

On the long-awaited day, she fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walked nervously onto the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath before starting.

Lady Luck was not on her side, she had no sound, and she was trembling with fear! Clarissa urged her to take a sip of water. After drinking the water, a wave of relief washed over her. Her mellifluous voice came back. After finishing, applause from the audience resounded. Chloe was overjoyed as she won the first prize in the competition. Her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel’s school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel practised diligently day and night to blushed up her singing skills.

On the long awaited day, Angel was fidgeted and had butterflies in her stomach. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before the beginning of her performance, she took a deep breath. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side. She had no sound when she was singing. Angel was trembling with fear and perspiration dotted her forehead. Her friend, Susan urged her to dip some water to calm down.

A wave of relief washed over her, her mellifluous voice came back and she started to sing. At the end of the performance, a thunderous applause from the audience resounded in the hall. To her surprise, she won first prize for her outstanding performance. Angel was on cloud nine as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel’s school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel practised diligently day and night to brush up her singing skills.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting and had butterflies in her stomach. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before the beginning of her performance, she took a deep breath. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side. She had no sound when she was singing. Angel was trembling with fear and perspiration dotted her forehead. Her friend, Susan urged her to sip some water to calm down.

A wave of relief washed over her, her mellifluous voice came back and she started to sing. At the end of the performance, a thunderous applause from the audience resounded in the hall. To her surprise, she won first prize for her outstanding performance. Angel was on cloud nine as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organised an annual talent day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red- letter day, Angel's burning the midnight oil to practice the song.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. The teacher told her take a deep breath and urged her to dip some water.

A wave of relief washed over her. After that, she started singing. A mellifluous voice came back to her throut. Applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise, she won the first place for her outstanding performance. She was on cloud nine because her hard work paid of.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual talent day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel had been burning the midnight oil to practice the song.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. The teacher told her to take a deep breath and urged her to take some water.

A wave of relief washed over her. After that, she started singing. A mellifluous voice came back to her throat. Applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise, she won first place for her outstanding performance. She was on cloud nine because her hard work had paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Angle was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she burned the midnight oil to practised diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted when her name was announced.She walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she took a deep breath. Lady Luck was not on her side, there was no sound came out from her mouth. She was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan urged her to dip some water.

After that, she started singing again.A wave of relief washed over her as mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded in the hall.

To her surprise,she won the first prize for her outstanding performance. She was very happy as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she burned the midnight oil to practice diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting when her name was announced. She walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she took a deep breath. Lady Luck was not on her side, there was no sound coming from her mouth.

She was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan, urged her to take a sip of water.After that, she started singing again. A wave of relief washed over her as her mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded in the hall.To her surprise, she won the first prize for her outstanding performance. She was very happy as her hard work had paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual Talent Day, since Angel was a gifted singer, she took part. Prior to the red-letter day, she was burning the midnight oil to practiced diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walks nervously to the middle of the stage. Angel has a deep breath, but lady luck was not on her side. She had no sound and was trembling with fear her friend urged her to dip some water.

After that, she started singing. A wave of relief washed over her because her mellifluous voice came back. Applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise she won the first place. She was glad as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she took part. Prior to the red-letter day, she had been burning the midnight oil to practise diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Angel took a deep breath, but Lady Luck was not on her side. She had no sound and was trembling with fear, her friend urged her to take a sip of water.

After that, she started singing. A wave of relief washed over her because her mellifluous voice came back. Applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise, she won first place. She was glad as her hard work had paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organised an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to participate in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel was burning the midnight oil to practice her song.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted. After a few minutes, when her name was announced, Angel walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath before starting her performance. Unfortunately, lady luck was not on her side and her throat was starting to act weird and had no sound. Angel was trembling in fear. Her music teacher urged her to drink some water.

After a wave of relief washed over her, her mallifluous came back to her. After a wonderful performance, applause from the audience resounded. When the headmistress was giving out the prizes, Angel surprisingly got the first place.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to participate in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel had been burning the midnight oil to practice her song.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting. After a few minutes, when her name was announced, Angel walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath before starting her performance. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side; her throat was starting to act weird and she had no sound. Angel was trembling in fear. Her music teacher urged her to drink some water.

After a wave of relief washed over her, her mellifluous voice came back to her. After a wonderful performance, applause from the audience resounded. When the headmistress was giving out the prizes, Angel was surprised to receive first place. She was over the moon as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Amy's school organised an annual Talented Day. Since Amy was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to participate in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she burning the midnight to practised diligently. On the long-awaited day, Amy was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she take a deep breath but lady was not on her side. She has no sound while trembling with fear. Her friend , Susan, urged her to dip some water. After that, she started singing, A wave of relief washed over her. At the end, Applause from the addience resounded. To her suprise, she won the first place!

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A fortnight ago, Amy's school organized an annual Talent Day. Since Amy was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to participate in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she had been burning the midnight oil to practise diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Amy was fidgeting. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she took a deep breath, but Lady Luck was not on her side. She had no sound while trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan, urged her to take a sip of water.

After that, she started singing. A wave of relief washed over her. At the end, applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise, she won first place in the competition! Tears of joy welled up in her eyes that her hard work had finally paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer she was motivated to take participate in the event. Every night, she practised diligently.

On the long- awaited day, she was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to middle of the stage before beginning her performance. She a deep breath, but lady luck was not on her sides .She didn't have sound, so she trembling with fear, but her friend urged her to drink some water.

After she drink the water, she a wave of relief washed over her. Finally, she mellifluous voice came back. When she singing done students thunderous a applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise, she won the first prize. She very happy for her outstanding performance. She was glad as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she was motivated to take part in the event. Every night, she practiced diligently.

On the long-awaited day, she was fidgeting. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage before beginning her performance. She took a deep breath, but Lady Luck was not on her side. She didn't have any sound, so she was trembling with fear, but her friend urged her to drink some water.

After she drank the water, a wave of relief washed over her. Finally, her mellifluous voice came back. When she finished singing, students gave a thunderous applause from the audience. To her surprise, she won first prize. She was very happy for her outstanding performance. She was glad as her hard work had paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel’s school organised a Talent day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she was burning the midnight oil to practice singing.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted when her name was announced. She walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before singing her performance, she did a deep breath. Lady Luck was not on her side, she had no sound as she trembling with fear. Immediately, Mr John urged her to dip some water.

A wave of relief washed over her, she made a mellifluous voice came back. In the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded in the auditorium.

To her surprise, she won the first prize of her outstanding performance. She was feeling on cloud nine as her hard work paid of.

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A fortnight ago, Angel’s school organized a Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she had been burning the midnight oil to practice singing.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting when her name was announced. She walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she took a deep breath. Lady Luck was not on her side; she had no sound as she trembled with fear. Immediately, Mr. John urged her to take a sip of water.

A wave of relief washed over her; her mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded in the auditorium.

To her surprise, she won first prize for her outstanding performance. She was on cloud nine as her hard work paid off.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel burning the midnight oil to practised diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she was walked nervously go to the middle of the stage. Angle was a deep breath and Lady Luck was not on her side, she has not sound because she is trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan urged her to dip some water to sing it.

After that, Angel started singing. A wave of relief washed over her. The mellifluous voice come back. At the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded in the hall.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel had been burning the midnight oil to practise diligently.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Angel took a deep breath, and Lady Luck was not on her side; she had no sound because she was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan, urged her to take a sip of water to help her sing.

After that, Angel started singing. A wave of relief washed over her. The mellifluous voice came back. At the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded in the hall.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held an annual Talent day .Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event .Prior to the red -letter day, angel burning the midnight to practiced singing .

On the long -awaited day ,Angel was fidgeted and had butterflies in her stomach. When her name called was announced , she walked nervously to the middle of the stage .She took a deep breath before starting. Lady luck was not on her side, she got no sound and she was trembling with fear . The teacher urged her to dip some water .After drinking water ,she a wave of relief washed over her .Her mellifluous voice came back .After finishing, applause from the audience resounded.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school held an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, Angel had been burning the midnight oil to practise singing.

On the long-awaited day, Angel was fidgeting and had butterflies in her stomach. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. She took a deep breath before starting.

Lady Luck was not on her side that when she began singing, she had no sound, and she was trembling with fear. The teacher urged her to take a sip of water. After drinking water, a wave of relief washed over her. Her mellifluous voice came back. After finishing, applause from the audience resounded. Eventually, she won the first prize in the competition .

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A few weeks ago, Yuki's school held an annual Talent singing contest.She was very interested in the singing contest and asked the teacher for a registration form.Before the most stressful day,Yuki stay up late.

The day she 've been waiting for, she felt fidgeted when her name was announced,she had butterflies in her stomach and walked middle of the stage,she took a deep breath.Lady Luck was not on their side,she trembling with fear and no sound made.Suddenly , a boy urged her to dip some water.

Ultimate,she took a wave of relief washed over her and sang a song with mellifluous voice.Applause from the audience resounded.

When the results were released,Yuki can't believe that she had won the first place! She quickly walked to the stage to recieved a gold trophy.Yuki hope that she can participation the competition again.

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A few weeks ago, Yuki's school held an annual Talent singing contest. She was very interested in the singing contest and asked the teacher for a registration form. Before the most stressful day, Yuki stayed up late.

On the day she had been waiting for, she fidgeted when her name was announced. She had butterflies in her stomach and walked to the middle of the stage, she took a deep breath. Lady Luck was not on her side, she was trembling with fear and no sound came out. Suddenly, a boy urged her to take a sip of water.

Ultimately, she felt a wave of relief wash over her and sang a song with a mellifluous voice. Applause from the audience resounded.When the results were released, Yuki couldn't believe that she had won first place! She quickly walked to the stage to receive a gold trophy. Yuki hoped that she could participate in the competition again.

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual Talented Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer. She plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day she burning the midnight oil to practiced diligently.

On the long-awaited day, She was fidgeted. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she do a deep breath. Unfortunately the lady luck was not on their side. She had no sound because her trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan urged her to dip some water.

After that, she a wave of relief washed over her and started singing. At the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise, she won the first prize for her outstanding performance. She was luckily because she believe as hard work paid off this word

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A fortnight ago, Angel's school organized an annual Talent Day. Since Angel was a gifted singer, she plucked up her courage to take part in the event. Prior to the red-letter day, she had been burning the midnight oil to practice diligently.

On the long-awaited day, she was fidgeting. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. Before beginning her performance, she took a deep breath. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side. She had no sound because she was trembling with fear. Her friend, Susan, urged her to sip some water.

After that, a wave of relief washed over her, and she started singing. At the end of the performance, applause from the audience resounded. To her surprise, she won first prize for her outstanding performance. She was overjoyed because she believed that her hard work had paid off.

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A fortnight ago,Siti’s school organised a talent day.Siti parents encouraged her to participate in the show,Siti was motivated to take part it.Prior to the red-letter day,Siti practiced diligently and burned the midnight oil.

On the long-awaited day,Siti was fidgeted on her seat.When her name was announced,she walked nervously to the middle of the stage.When she ready to sang it,she take a deep breath.Unfortunately,Lady Luck was not on her side as she no sound and trembling with fear.Her teacher urged her to dip some water.

When she returned to the stage,a wave of relief washed over her.Her mellifluous voice came back.When she finished her show,applause from the audience resounded.On this experience,Siti loved singing.Indeed,practice make perfect.

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A fortnight ago, Siti’s school organized a talent day. Siti's parents encouraged her to participate in the show, and Siti was motivated to take part in it. Prior to the red-letter day, Siti practiced diligently and burned the midnight oil.

On the long-awaited day, Siti was fidgeting in her seat. When her name was announced, she walked nervously to the middle of the stage. When she was ready to sing, she took a deep breath. Unfortunately, Lady Luck was not on her side as she had no sound and was trembling with fear. Her teacher urged her to take a sip of water.

When Siti returned to the stage, a wave of relief washed over her. Her mellifluous voice came back. When she finished her show, applause from the audience resounded. From this experience, she had deepened her love for music .Indeed, practice makes perfect.