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i have decided to base my short on one of my all time favorite games, Team Fortress 2. There are many instances in this game where the enemy team will become unlikely friends and most of the time it is people playing the character heavy, who has an item called “sandvich” that he can use to heal himself, teammates and on special occasions (such as this short) the enemy team; as an act of kindness.

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I feel disappointed in myself because I haven't finished my work on time know I understand that animation takes time dedication and hard work which I am sorely lacking it will be great if I could learn ways that can help me focus and do as much work as possible.

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Final Animatic W/ sound

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I had increased the fps for the animatic to find a smoother transition for the turn and zoom sections

Edit: I’m redoing the blink animation since it was moving too slow

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Outcome 4 Evaluation by Ronan McVeigh - Copy

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Animatic without sound

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Well done Ryan. Your decision is probably the right one.  It is fine to do something you feel you can achieve.

Bert

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Good work Kyle.
This is really coming together well.
How you have added the close ups reallly aids the clarity of the story.
Your progress in this has been excellent.

Bert

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Good job Courtney.

You have done very well with adding sound and titles to your animation.

Bert

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Good work Megan.

Now to see some more.

Bert

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This looks very good Cameron. I'm looking forward to seeing some works in progress.

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This is very good Rachel.
My only advice is.... do more.. and be more confident!.

Bert

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Good work Kinga.
Things are taking shape well.
Bert

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Good work Kyle.
Both your studies work well. Your character's movement works well.  You seemed underconfident about your ability. Youy have no need to be.

Bert

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This looks good Bethanie. Your idea is strong - despite the the fact that your storyboard is less and less 'finished' in each panel - your idea comes across well.

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This looks good Reagan. Looking forward to seeing more. Keep it up.

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Your storyboard looks really good Reagan.

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Good work Jamie. Looking forward to seeing how things all come together. I'll discuss things with you in class too.

Bert

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Walk cycle and close up on page. feedback

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Walk cycle and close up on page. feedback

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This looks excellent, Holly. This is all coming together very well.  And your backgrounds all really work too.

Bert

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Note: The camera will zoom into the character as she’s walking across the bridge using premier

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My ipad died while doing this so i lost progress and frames so it looks really choppy :’)

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Art and Design Digital Media Outcome 1-2 - Suke

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Art and Design Digital Media Outcome 1-2 - Suke

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Art and Design Digital Media Outcome 1 - Aaron Campbell

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Art and Design Digital Media Outcome 1 - Aaron Campbell

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All I have the now trying to figure out how to make it look decent scrapped idea of the bandage and went for some generic magic healing thing

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Good work Ryan

Looking forward to more.

Bert

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Good job Aimee
Looking forward to seeing more of this .

Bert

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Good job Aimee. Let's see the latest one by the end of the day.

Bert

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Good work Kinga.

One question. Are you completely happy with the thickness of the outlines of your walking character?

Bert

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This is looking good Summer.  It is good you are doing as of these WIPs as you are.

Bert

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looks good Jamie.
Looking forward to more.

Bert

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This looks good Alex.
Does the motion at the very end as the door opens work as well as the beginning?

Bert

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These are both good Kyle.
In WIP your frame rate is a bit high, but the walk is good.
WIP 2 seems to be more in keeping with the pace your character will walk into the shot,
before looking down at the parched frog.

Bert

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Act of Kindness: Animation Working progress

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Act of Kindness: Animation Working progress

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Very good Caitlin. This is is coming on very well.  I'm very keen to see more.
Bert

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Very good job Holly.
Both work very well indeed.
It is taking shape well.

Bert

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Good job  Jamie.

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Excellent work Alex.

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Good job Kinga.

This is taking shape.

Bert

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Nice work Megan.
Let's see more.

Bert

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Frog jumping work in progress feedback. 

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Frog jumping work in progress feedback. 

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Good job Kyle
This is a well realised frog.

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Good job Ryan . Next stage is to post some animation.

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Excellent work Ronan. With this latest part things are really taking shape.

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Good job Zander, Nice to see some work in progress up.

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Good job Morgan.
Next stage is to see some animation of your robots.

Bert

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Good job Aimee. This is beginning to take shape.
Looking forward to seeing more.
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Good work Lewis.
You clearly have a good visual idea here.
You can now add the characters in the way you decide - so drawing how they might be would be useful as well as working on your background.

Bert

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Act of Kindness Treatment.

Set in a prison, a prisoner hears grunting from his cell followed by a loud bang. He runs towards his cell to find another prisoner running out, narrowly missing him. He cautiously walks into his cell to find his cellmate beaten on the floor with fresh bruises and cuts all over his face. He walks over with a solemn look drawn on his face and sits beside his bruised friend. He ruffles around his inside pockets and slowly brings out a pack of cigarettes and a box of matches. He doesn’t look at his friend but instead offers him a cigarette and a match. They sit in bittersweet silence until the screen fades to black.