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Hello, everyone. My name is Hou Suyang, and my English name is Grace. I'm from Tianjin. I am now studying in Dongbei University of Finance and Economics. I have many hobbies such as playing the piano, listening to music and doing volunteer work. In my spare time, I also joined the volunteer Association and participated in volunteer activities with my classmates. Volunteering can help others and make you feel happy at the same time. Above is my self-introduction, I will do better in this semester.

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As I did not find a group for this week's homework, I finished it by myself in my own way of thinking. I am very sorry for that, teacher.

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Week 7 - Reflection on Listening & Speaking Skills

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Week 7 - Reflection on Listening & Speaking Skills

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Week 11 - True Cost of Fast Fashion Worksheet

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Week 11 - True Cost of Fast Fashion Worksheet

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Sem 3 Listening Paper_Fast Fashion_Student version (1).pdf (1)

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Week 5 - Discussion on Sustainable Cities

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Week 5 - Discussion on Sustainable Cities

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Week 10 - Presentation about a Successful Company

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Week 10 - Presentation about a Successful Company

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Week 10 - Opinions on The True Cost Documentary

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Week 10 - Opinions on The True Cost Documentary

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Week 7 - Reflection on Reading & Writing Skills

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Week 7 - Reflection on Reading & Writing Skills

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Week 14 - Reading Paper on Making Fashion Sustainable

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Week 14 - Reading Paper on Making Fashion Sustainable

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Oxford EAP 3D Task 7 (p47) (Writing a paragraph with a definition)

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Oxford EAP - 4D Task 6 (p61) - Writing a paragraph (120-150 words)

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UTF-8''Oxford EAP 6D Task 7 and 8 (p89).

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Week 11 - Oxford EAP Unit 7D Task 7&8 - Writing an Introduction. (1)

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Week 12 - Summarise Article on Fast Fashion

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Week 12 - Summarise Article on Fast Fashion

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Vocabulary Record Sheet - Suggested Template

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Please follow this link to my comments from your seminar. If you wish to keep this document for forever, I advise you download it and upload it here as a word document/PDF. Let me know if there are any questions in our upcoming tutorial.

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Essay Feedback
Hi Grace
Here is my feedback on your essay.
1. You need to pay more attention to the essay question you are given. In this essay, you were asked to "Suggest and evaluate potential solutions", but it appears that you have answered a different question. This semester, the essay only counts for part of your grade, so you won't lose too many marks due to this. However, next semester, the essay is worth most of your grade, and this type of mistake may significantly reduce your grade. Please review the essay question and compare it with your essay.
2. Very good description of the problems and the solutions, but there is little evaluation of the solutions. You could have analysed the solutions more and said when and where they will or won’t work.
3. You haven't included any in-text citation in your essay. You need to review what we learn this semester about how to reference source material within your essay. You need to include referencing to show where your information came from, to support your ideas, and to avoid plagiarism. If you don't include references next semester, you are highly likely to fail the course.

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Portfolio of Work Feedback
Hi Grace
Here is my feedback on your Padlet.
You have demonstrated a good standard of work throughout the semester and produced a reasonable portfolio of work. You need to work on your time management as quite a few of your tasks were submitted late. Try to assign a time each week when you will focus on your English homework and revision. As for vocabulary, you have recorded a lot of useful academic vocabulary that will be beneficial for your future study. The collocations you recorded are very important as they help you to use the words correctly within your writing. As for independent study, you should try to devote more time to this endeavour. It is important for you to identify areas of English that you need to improve and then spend time working on these. This could include your grammar, vocabulary, summarising, paraphrasing or critical thinking.
Here are some points to help with your writing next semester.
1. Please read my comments regarding your essay on fast fashion very carefully and try to follow this advice. This is very important as understanding the mistakes you made and correcting them will greatly improve your grade next semester.
2. In academic writing, you should never use the second person pronouns "you" or "your" because they remove the distance between the reader and the writer. Instead, try to use third person pronouns to enhance clarity. Examples could include manufacturers, investors, managers or government officials.
Well done this semester, and I hope you have a great Chinese New Year