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I thought your tabloid doc was very funny. I personally also find it to be very relatable, and I liked your figurative language

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i liked the article it was very entertaining and well organized a wish i have for you is to expand on information a little bit but everything else was great

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hello! Your article was very interesting (and somewhat unusual), and it was written well. I like how you went into detail about lot of the things going on, and how the story flows. Good job 👍

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I really liked your story it was really good in describing how she was performing and how she was on the bed that she was performing on, but i think that you could have added a little more figurative though. Over all I really liked it.

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Hello Paul,

Your tabloid was amazing! I loved how you built up such a story. Your use of figurative language and tabloid elements are incredible! Great Job!

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i liked this article it gave good info and was entertaining but a wish i have for you is too make it a little shorter it was a bit too long

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Nice tabloid. I like all of the figurative language that you added to improve the story and the tabloid tricks that you added. I like how you added 10 foot notes instead of the required 8 to improve you story even more.

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I really liked your article! I thought it was very detailed and well written. It really pulls me in and makes me want to read more. It was interesting to read and everything was great! -nico piccininni-

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I liked how you highlighted your figurative langage and tabloid tricks, because it helped me understand it better. Your tabloid doc was entertaining to read.

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I thought your tabloid was very entertaining and the conflict was very unexpected! I found this very fun to read especially with the singers you included in your tabloid. You made great use of figurative Language and tabloid tricks which made me want to read more. Great job!

-Vanessa Parrella

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I liked your tabloid since I liked the detail and figurative language you used. I also thought it was pretty funny since the concept of it seems so absurd.

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I thought your tabloid was amazing! I thought the suspense you added to your story was great!

I really liked how you made the situation feel shocking, and very serious, and I really like the element of supernatural you added!

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this article was very funny and entertaining i have no wishes this article was very good

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I liked the dialogue you added to your tabloid. I also liked how you used figurative language a lot it made it more fun to read. I also liked how you used more than 3 tabloid tricks so the tabloid was more engaging.

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Hello! Your story was very interesting! I really like how you used a lot of comparisons and alliterations to really make it come together. As well as the main character, being completely original and creative and not resembling anyone at all!

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I liked your Tabloid especially the quotes you used to express the perspectives.Using the quotes I cause what the people think about the situation.

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I really liked your story it was really funny but interesting at the same time because of your choice of characters. I liked the part where you said that please please please was the favorite song because I think it really helped put the whole story together. Over all it was pretty good.

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Great Tabloid. I like the different kinds to tabloid tricks that you used to elevate your story. I also liked how you put more figurative than you needed. That also helped make the tabloid better.

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I thought your tabloid was very sad since Barney was always such a good person, and now he is dead and truly left in our imagination. But overall it was still very good and I liked the figurative language used in it.

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Good story! I liked how you made the topic about George Washington and had a certain from the war as a source. You added good figurative Langue to make the story more enjoyable to read, also reaching every requirement. Great Job.

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I loved your article! It was so fun and interesting to read. You met all requirements and I loved the figurative language and the tabloid tricks you had. It was also very creative and the quotes you had made it so good! Great job.

-nico piccininni-

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I thought your story was entertaining to read. I liked your figurative langage. I also liked how in the end you asked a reader two different questions. I think it was good that you added questions at the end, so the reader actually understood what the tabloid was about.

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I liked your tabloid, I liked all the tabloid tricks and figurative language you used to improve your story!

My favorite part was the fight! I wasn’t expecting it. Your details were great, this was a funny story.

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hello! I liked your take on the American revolution, with Washington defeating everyone by cooking with peanuts. I like how you used a lot of alliteration and comparisons.

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I enjoyed reading your tabloid. Great job using reporting language in your story. Using lots of figurative language enhanced your writing so much. You used a lot of tabloid tricks which make a reader want to keep reading. You did really well!

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I thought your tabloid was very entertaining to read. I love the popular music stars you included, they made me want to read more. your tabloid was very creative and good. I love how at the end of your tabloid you made readers be exited for the await of the soundtrack. Great job!

-Vanessa

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I think that out of all the tabloids that I have read (not that many) yours was the funniest out of all of them because the story just felt so random and that was the best part about it and I think that you could have added a little more figurative language but over all it was really good.

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Your story was really good it was very creative and there was a lot of good elements that you added to make it even better overall your story was a lot of fun to read and I really enjoyed it.

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I loved your article! It was so creative and fun to read. It was very organized and I really enjoyed reading it. The elements you used really put everything together. You also had a good way to close up your article. Overall it was amazing! Great job!

-nico piccininni-

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I thought your story had a lot of good figurative language and tabloid tricks to make reading more fun. The twist at the end with the element of supernatural was also cool. Awesome Job Luke.

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I love your tabloid! I liked all the tabloid tricks you used to improve your story i also really like how It was full of a ton of NBA greats!

This was a fun read, i loved all the suspense in your story! Especially towards the end of the game! Great job Tristan 👍

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I liked how you highlighted the tabloid tricks and the figurative language. I also liked how you used alliteration for the title which made it interesting. I also liked how you used more than the tabloid tricks and figurative language needed.

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I really liked your figurative langage. I also liked your hyperbole, because it was very interesting! The only thing I wish you did was put the paragraphs more together. But overall your tabloid was great!

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Your writing piece was very creative thirty the hotdog stand and i also like how you mixed up the peoples names like instead of Kanye west it was Kanye northwest and also with big Wayne.

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I loved your story (It was kind of crazy though)I loved the tabloid tricks that you had in there especially the Hyperboles.

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Wow! I loved this so much it was so entertaining and now I am wondering what if this happens! I loved how you had James Charles in it! Love it graet job! -nico-

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I liked your story with the figurative lounge and tabloid tricks that you added to enhance you tabloid. I like how you had a good eye catching topic about Ronaldo and added some absurd traits to make your story way more interesting and fun to read. Good Job

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Hi Logan,

Your tabloid was very enjoyable to read. Your story of how Kanye Northwest’s life took a turn for the worse and how he made a comeback with his music was incredible! Great job with figurative language and tabloid tricks!

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Your tabloid was really funny and interesting. The story was random and really engaging. However you could have added more figurative language to make it more engaging to the readers.

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I really liked your piece and it was really cool to read and i enjoyed it a lot and it had a lot of good figurative language and tabloid tricks in it

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I enjoyed reading your tabloid, it was very creative! There was a lot of good elements you included. Your figurative language and tabloid tricks were amazing and made the tabloid so much more fun to read. Not only that but your word choices were good and not basic. Great job.

-Vanessa

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Your story was really funny, yet also had a serious part to it with the war. The figurative language you put in the tabloid added a lot excitement to reading. The British dying from peanut allergies was also really funny. Great Job Stefan.

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I Liked your writing especially when you wrote ‘‘her huge secret“ which shows how important it is.

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I liked how creative ur idea was, and it was lwky funny and i enjoyed reading yours and how u said it was on aprils 1st which is also aprils fools day 🥀

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I really enjoyed your story! It was very informative and exciting! Keep up the great work!

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Hi Christian, I really like your story and the structure of it. One great thing I thought you did well in your story was the fact that there was no extra fluff or any thing like a story. Your tabloid got right to the point. -Patrick

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Hey grace! I really loved your tabloid! It was very informative, packed with figurative language, and full of detail. Great Job!

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Excellent job with your Tabloid! It was very exciting and you put a lot of compositional risks and tabloid trick in there! Nice job!

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I loved your story! I loved how it was packed with awesome figurative language! I also really enjoyed how creative your where. Great job Emma!

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I loved your hook it was really attention catching and you had a lot of figurative language which helped me understand more of what was going on in your story. I also liked how you put the customers in as quotes.

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Hi Patrick your story was great and seems like something that could happen in the near future. I also wrote about a sport player scoring his 1000 goal so we have that in common. I don’t no much about hockey but i know that these teams are rivals so its nice to know that they can be nice to each other once in a while.

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I liked your tabloid it was really good i liked how you made it about Patrick mahomes and the drama behind him it was really funny

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Great story Dalton! I like the creativity you used because for example of all places why would cooper Flagg who was suppose to go to the NBA and be the 1st not only hit the transfer portal but transfer to a Ivy League school.

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wow you did really good I was so surprised with some of your quotes and they way you talked about people hating on Jaxson dart this was a very good tabloid

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What an excellent job on this article! Your sources were great and your personification was excellent! You were also very informative and descriptive of your piece! You should be proud of this!

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I really liked your way of writing and trying to describe Jaxon Dart like a reporter. It was a very fun read and it was also getting to the point very well on how he’s going to be the best quarterback. Very good tabloid!

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Hi Khushi! Great tabloid! I really liked the structure, and how creative it was, i really liked how you use got straight to the point instead of adding any extra detail. Great job khushi!

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Hi Bella!!! I really enjoyed reading your tabloid, I loved all the figurative language you added, and the strong word choice you added was so creative. Also I liked all your tabloid tricks I liked how you used them! Can’t forget the amazing title, it was super creative which I loved. Overall Good Job Bella!!!

-Khushi Gaba

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Hi Dalton. I thought your story was great overall. One great thing I thought you did in your story was the fact that you showed, now that he was going through the transfer portal, was that you showed what he was going to do in the future. Great story.-Patrick

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great job grace. I love how you used a real life thing about Kayla Malec and even Jonhson and made it better. I loved hearing about this and it sounded so real great job

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I like how you made the story about Selena Gomez breaking into Justin Bieber’s house, it was really funny. I also liked your explanations because I didn’t know that much about Selena or Justin.

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I liked how you made the title really catchy and i also liked how you did it about a college person and not a pro athlete and how you did it about cooper Flagg it was really good i like how you added your figurative language to it to really make it seem like it really happened

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Your story was super great ! My personal favorite part of your tabloid was your intro I was surprisingly hooked from your title and first sentence

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Your story was sooo good! I liked a lot of the strong language you used when describing the thoughts and behind the scenes of the wedding, and how everybody involved was feeling to. Great job!

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This story was very creative because of all the finals in the pass 11 years you picked the spurs vs heat. I also like how you labeled Kawhi as “the claw” good creativity.

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The article was good very engaging but almost gave me a heart attack with the divorce thing I had to do my own research but it’s ok I’m well assured Brittany and Patrick are still together

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I like your title it suits the tabloid.

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I really liked reading your story. I really enjoyed how creative it was, and how you made the reader feel engaged. Great job!

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Hi Dalton! I really liked your tabloid! I really like the title and the evidence you provided, and i also really like the creativity and how detailed it was. You just got to the point with no extra fluff in between. Nice tabloid Dalton!

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Hi dalton i like your story. Some of the elements were great and i really liked ho you diced to transfer (what i assume) to be one of the best young athletes currently. I also didn’t know that prinston had a good basketball team.

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Very interesting and entertaining.

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Your tabloid was really detailed which helped because I knew absolutely nothing about basketball or any of the players. And I liked how real you made this sound it was very very cool.

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I love how creative you were with the plot and how you kept me engaged with the drama

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Very good job on your 5 pieces of figurative language and great 3 examples of tabloid tricks. Th tabloid was also very funny and entertaining but also proved a point which is very good. Overall good job

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good job. I liked how you showed the main parts of it and nothing else. you did really good also working between storytelling and non storytelling.

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Good story Jackson! I like how you described Mahomes’ suit and the cost of his jewelry too. I also like how you filled in with figurative language and i like the structure. Good job!

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Great job Cooper! I liked the way you put smilies in there that were perfect for example when you said people said” Jaxson Dart was as good as Tom Brady.”

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Hi Addie!! I really enjoyed reading your tabloid! I really loved the amount of figurative language you added, which made your tabloid even better. I also really loved how much detail you added which made it really engaging to read. Lastly I really loved how you closed your tabloid, the conclusion was really good! Overall Good Job Addie!

-Khushi

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good job. I love how you started with a source rather than other things. I also love how you used a real life thing great job taylorr

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wow yourtaboloid was really good I really enjoyed your topic and first 2 paragraphs and I think your topic was really creative

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Awesome story! I really like how you wrote about a sport, and I was so interested in your story. Great job Riley!

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I really love your topic.

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Great job on adding such detail in your tabloid. When Elizabeth was getting shot, you added illustrations that made you want to know more. Hope you write more,

Fifi

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I loved your story! You really showed the volleyball game so realistically, it felt like the game was seriously happening! You used very convincing and strong language while Madisens teammate was speaking, and showed what being a little disappointed is like for a teammate. Great job!

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Hi Cooper, I thought your story was great. I really enjoyed reading it. One thing I thought you did was how you described what he does on and off the field. One time was when nobody believed he was a great quarterback at all. I also like how you described what he does in his free time like playing madden. Overall, great story!

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I love the drama and the real life conserversy in it

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Great job nico, i love how you made your tabloide entertaining while also making it serious i really enjoyed reading this good job Nicoo

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I liked how your tabloid was really detailed and also how you made your title really catchy it really hooked me in and I liked how you added your figurative language to your tabloid

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Hi Pranav. Your story was great and had a lot of good elements in it. I liked that you did it about not real people. It was took but not too long.

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I really enjoyed reading your tabloid! It had a lot of detail and was well explained. Also I loved the amount of figurative language you added which helped the readers understand and just overall sounded really good. Lastly I loved your title I thought it was very creative, and was very eye- catching. Over good job!

-Khushi

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I loved your story so much! You worded everything so reporter and news like, it was hard to tell it wasn’t real! Your strong language showed very well in this peice. Great job!

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I liked how your tabloid was entertaining and funny i also liked how you added your figurative language to it