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1. Instead of GOOD/ bad/ nice --> USE other adjectives

- Exercising regularly will be beneficial/ offer several benefits to/ for elderly people.

2. Word choice

Sinh viên mới tốt nghiệp

- It’s not simple for recent graduates to achieve a high salary.

recent/ fresh Graduates

fresh graduated student

Công việc lương cao

- A high-paying/ well-paid/ lucrative job high-salary job is what several graduates wish for.

job with high salary

high-paying/ well-paid/ lucrative job

Thị tường lao đồng ngày càng cạnh tranh

Thị trường lao động ngày càng cạnh tranh khiến nhiều người không có bằng cấp khó có thể tìm được công việc tốt.

The increasingly competitive Labor market cause several difficulties for people without formal qualifications to secure a stable and fulfilling/ desirable job

Người già

- It is beneficial for the elderly to exercise frequently.

Giám sát

Children are more likely to succeed academically if their parents actively supervise their education.

devote great amount amount of time to .....

observe

Con cái

children offspring

infant

3. Lack of or Lack sth

AS The labor market is becoming competitive, people who lack qualifications tend to face severAL difficulties in searching FOR better/ satisfied employment.

COMPOUND

--> With N/Phr, SVO

the lack of qualifications

lack qualifications

access (v)

3. Quantifiers

- The competitive job market cause several difficulties for a great number people without degrees to seek stable jobs

a great amount of/ a great deal + uncountable noun

a large number of + countable noun

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The benefits of playing video games

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benefit of playing video games

Education

improve the critical thinking and analytical skills ---> game requires special skills, for example, the players have to apply their skills and knowledge to solve the problems in games. Thanks to this process, they can enhance critical thinking and analytical skills indirectly instead of only concentrating on dull papers at school.

Moreover, some games require the coordination of hand and eyes simultaneously so playing video games could sharpen hand-eye coordination.

Entertainment

Playing video games contributes to improve mental health. The primary reason is that after a long day, playing games helps de-stress and escape from the hustle and bustle. However, we should use them in moderation to avoid side effects.

bond and expand the relationships through playing and interacting via online platform. For example, we can make friends with other people from the other countries to expand your circle of friends. Additionally, spending time on playing games with loved-ones is a good way to make the relationships closer.

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provide a great source of entertainment/ enjoyment--> lift spirits up ---> --> motivated to complete daily task.....

logical games --> foster creativity, brain power ---> improve educational outcomes/ academic performance

enhance close bond/ friendship when playing with friends / expand circle of relationship / like-mind people ---> professional network

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The benefits of playing video games

->It breathes life into education: transforms learning into an enjoyable exp-> more motivation --> improve education results (EXAMPLE)

->It boosts motivation:their success is rewarded with medals, extra lives, bonuses-> motivate them try their best in life and education

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Playing game that require skill ---> increase many skill like reflex ability, thinking ability,....----> some skill can be useful in life

entertaining after a hard working day <---by playing favorite or relax game---> reduce stress---> enhance mental well-being

support communication between people---> make friend with people who have the same interest ----> find good friends ----> expand social circle

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Increased hand-to-eye coordination--> Faster and more accurate decision-making-->Improved problem-solving skills

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a chance to unwind

-> provide an immerse experience into virtual world that separate players from boring daily routines

-> such as adventure game -> bring sense of accomplishment when players complete the game's goals. (POSITIVE)

improve linguistic ability -> various games in English provide an exposure to foreign language -> expand players' vocabulary -->

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Beneficial for mental well-being => alleviate stress, anxious, pressure after stressful hours

Embrace new experiences=>Gain several valuable lessons via activities of games ( learning new languages, communicating with others, solving problems)

Boost bond among people=> For example=> get together with love-ones=> be filled with happy memories with them

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Benefits of playing games:

serve as a form of escapism from the daily grind and the academic pressure -> more energetic for studying, improve mental health (EX)

playing games in groups allows them to chat online with their like-mind friends -> forge deeper bonds, and expand theiR social circle ---> BECOME HOSPITABLE AND FRIENDLY PEOPLE THAT CAN MAKE OTHERS Appreciate AND CHERISH THEM/ spread positivity to community

improve creativity, and second language (since there are a variety of games in english version) , OR CRITICAL THINKING---> PROVIDE MORE OPPORTUNITIES FOR STUDYING ABROAD,UPGRADE ACADEMIC PERFORMANCE AND PROVIDE BETTER CAAEER PROSPECTS.

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Benefit of playing video games

Sharpen hand-eye coordination, Improve the problem-solving skills --> —-> Make work become more easier

Improve communication skills and extend social circle —> enhance academic and career prospect

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The benefits of playing video games:

• Playing video games enhances problem-solving skills. --> Studies show gamers perform better on decision - making --->

• Multiplayer games foster teamwork and communication. --> Online gaming communities allow players to build friendships and meet like - minded people -->

• Video games provide relaxation and reduce stress --> Studies show video games can support stress relief by increasing emotional + N.

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progress through levels in games, which encourages creativity, logical thinking and problem-solving skills --> valuable for daily life tasks These skills help if gamers are aware of how to apply them into their real lives.

join in community of like-minded people --> expand social circle and forge meaningful friendships

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benefit of playing video games

Education

improve the critical thinking and analytical skills ---> game requires special skills, for example, the players have to apply their skills and knowledge to solve the problems in games. Thanks to this process, they can enhance critical thinking and analytical skills (decision-making and problem-solving) indirectly instead of only concentrating on dull papers/ acadamic tasks at school.

Moreover, some games require the coordination of hand and eyes simultaneously so playing video games could sharpen hand-eye coordination.

Entertainment

Playing video games contributes to improve mental health. The primary reason is that after a long day, playing games helps players de-stress and escape from the hustle and bustle. However, we should use them in moderation to avoid side effects.

bond and expand the relationships through playing and interacting via online platform. For example, we can make friends with other people from the other countries to expand your circle of friends. Additionally, spending time on playing games with loved-ones is a good/ effective way to make the relationships closer./ Strengthen the bond

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What is your usual mode of transportation?

Why: highly efficient and convenient way

Cost-effective

avoid the hassle of dealing with traffic congestion and parking

environmental

2. Do you prefer to travel by public transport or private vehicle?

Practical and sustainable

Reduces carbon footprint

Help alleviate traffic issue that plague our city

Overcrowded --> Lead to occasional delays, discomfort for passengers

Way to move

provide

3. What kind of weather do you like

windy, mild, sunny conditions -- experience during spring/ autumn

comfortably spend time outside without having to worry about excessive heat, cold, precipitation

enjoy outdoor activities

5. How important is the weather forecast

essential tool in my life

make informed decision about how to wear.

whether to adjust any schedule outdoor activities.

anticipate and mitigate any potential disruption to my daily routine

in the morning

rain - rain