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POINT 1

-punishment like canning,fine

-army camp

-can change offender to be more discipline

-mentally strong

POINT 2

-learning lifeskills

-survival lifeskills

-self defending

POINT 3

-opportunity to change

-stil young

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Intro

crime rate increasing

mostly young offenders

Point 1

canning, fine

have to discipline, mentally strong

Point 2

survival life skill

Point 3

opportunity to change

contrubate to out our country

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Intro:

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-I think it's a good idea

Point 1:

-punishment: canning, fine

-army camp: chance to discipline, mentally strong

Point 2:

Learning life skills

-survival lifeskills

-communicating

-survival training

Point 3:

-opportunity to change

-contribute to our country

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intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offinders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment :coming ,fine

-army camp :chame to decepline , mentallty strong

point 2

learning life skills

-survival lifeskill

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point 3

opportunity to change

-

contribute to our country

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conclusion

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intro

- crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment canning,fine

-army camp;change to disipline,mentally strong

point 2

-learning the skills such as survival life skill

point3

-opportunity to change

conclusion

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point form

intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think its is a good

point 1

-punishment:canning,fine

-army camp:discipline,mentaly strong

point2

-learning lifeskill

-survival skill

point 3

-opportunity to change

-contribute to our country

# data[].attributes.body
intro:

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment: canning,fine

-army camp:chance to discipline mentally strong

point 2

Learning life skills

-survival lifeskills

-communicating

-working in a team

point 3

-opportunity to chance

-contribute to our country

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should young offenders be sent to an army camp instead of prison?

intro :

crime rate increasing

mostly young offenders

i think it is a good idea

point 1 :

punishment : canning,fine

army crime : chance to discapline,mentally strong

point 2 :

learning life skills

survival life skills

point 3 :

opportunity to change

contribute to our country

# data[].attributes.body
INTRO

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

POINT 1

-punishIment such as canning ,fine

-have to discipline

POINT 2

-learning life skills

-survival life skill

POINT 3

-opportunity to change

-contribute to our country

CONCLUSION

- this is the best way to treat the young offenders

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Should young offenders be sent to an army camp instead of prison.

Intro :

Crime rate increasing

Mostly young offenders

I think it is a good idea

Point 1 :

Punishment : canning , fine

Chance to discipline

Mentally strong

Physically strong

Point 2 :

Survival life skill

Deal with people

Sense of responsibility

Point 3 :

Opportunity to change

Repent themselves to become a better person

know what is right and wrong

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should young offenders be sent to an army camp intead for prison ?

intro :

crime rate increasing

mostly young affind

i think it is a good idea

point 1 :

chame to discapline

mentally strong

punishment like canning

point 2:

learning lifeskills

survival lifeskills

self defending

point3:

stil young

opportunity to change

know what is right and wrong

# data[].attributes.body
should young offenders be sent to an army camp instead of prison?

intro:

crime rate increasing

mostly young offenders

i think it is a good idea

point 1:

punishment: canning, fine

army camp: chance discipline, mentally strong

point 2:

learning life skills

survival skills

point 3:

opportunity to change

contribute to our country

# data[].attributes.body
should young offenders be sent to an army camp instead of prison.

intro

crime rate increasing

mostly young offenders

i think it is a good idea

point 1

punisment : canning,fine

army camp : chance to discipline, mentally strong

point 2

survival life skills

deal with people

working in team

point 3

opportunity to change

contribute to our country

conclusion

it is the best way to sent them to army camp besides to prison

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should young offenders be sent to an army camp instead of prison .

intro :

crime rate increasing

mostly young offenders

i think it is a good idea

point 1 :

punishment : canning , fine

army camp : chance offenders

to discipline

mentally strong

point 2 :

learning life skills

survival life skills

learn work skills

point 3 :

opportunity to change

to become better person

conclusion :

should be given chance to improve themselves

ensure their future is on actual way

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point form

intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly you offenders

-i think is a good

point 1

punishment like canning ,fine

-army camp: chance to discipline,,mentally strong

point 2

learning life skill

-survival lifeskills

-communicating

-survival training

point 3

opportunity to change

-contribute our country

# data[].attributes.body
Intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-I think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment: canning,fine

-army camp: chance to discipline, mentally strong

point 2

-survival life skills

-learning life skills

-self defending

point 3

-oppurtunity to change

-contribute to our country

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Should young offenders be sent to an armmy camp instead of prision.

Intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think this a good idea

Point 1

-punishment : canning,fine

-armmy camp : chance to discipline,mentally strong

Point 2

-learning life skills

-survival skills

-defends skills

Point 3

-opportunity to change

-learn rensposibility

Conclusion

-take a lesson

- will not repeat the same mistake

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intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offinders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment :coming, fine

-army camp :chame to decepline, mentallity strong

point 2

Learning life skills

-survival life skills

-cammunicating

-survival training

point 3

-oppurtunity to change

-contribute to our country

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-INTRO

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young affenders

POINT 1

-punishment : canning,fine

-army camp : chance to discipline

-mentallity strong

POINT 2

-survial life skills

defends ownself

POINT 3

oppurtunity to change

contribute to our country

# data[].attributes.body
intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

point 1

-canning,fine

-have to discipline,mentally strong

point 2

-survival life skill

point 3

oppotunity to change

-contribute to our camp

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INTRO

-A lot of crime rate is reported nowadays in Malaysia

-Mostly are from those young offenders

POINT 1

-Army camp can teach those young offenders to have a well discipline

-Army camp also can make their mentality be strong and better than before

POINT 2

-learning life skills

-Mostly army camp will focus on working in a team and dealing with other people

POINT 3

-opportunity to change theirself to be a better person

-they will feel proud on theirself because they can contribute to their own country

CONCLUSION

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