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I liked the outline of the senses involved at the beginning of the presentation; it made it easier to follow her topics.

Loved the videos documentation

Daniel Mendoza

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Nice hearing about the connections you’ve made

Poem was very well written (you ate with that one)

Very good presentation skills

Thoughtful story, great ideas in it that you mentioned

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I like how you kept both water propositions and separated your responses so well.

I like that you went out of your comfort zone to make a painting of the river

From Julia

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The project was really descriptive, I thought you used descriptive language and a lot of documentation for your audiences to really understand everything going on. Thanks for drinking water mindfully!

-Martin Yang

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Zoe: Her presentation was very confident and creative! I love the way she formatted her presentation, it was very clear and thoughtful :)

The presentation itself was very eye catching and funny, love the pics and videos!

-Daisy DeRuiter

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I really enjoyed how you formatted and shared your experience. The flow was great and made the audience feel engaged. I also appreciate your documentation being multiple forms of visual media, such as a video to accompany the poem.

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I really enjoyed how you connected to your childhood in your first proposition. Even though we weren't able to read your reflection, I saw the first bit of it and it looked very in-depth and thoughtful!

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One thing I picked up and really enjoyed about her presentation was how she talked about how this project brought out her inner child. Zoe mentioned how this project allowed her to think about everyday things like going on a walk or drinking a glass of water to think mindfully and look at these things through a different lens and mindset.

From Maya Tennant

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I really enjoyed your presentation. You spoke very well and I like how you made a twist on your propositions.

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Your poem is well-written and evokes different emotions through each stanza. I appreciated how you provided multiple videos and forms of documentation for each proposition. Your use of the iceberg concept to connect your personality to your prompt was very well executed! It seems like you genuinely enjoyed your time doing this project and I appreciate how you took your time to explain your reflections fully. Your dance was 10/10

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Great use of the videos

Vibe is great

+5 points for the duck

Art form using water was aMAZEing

Iceberg was a very creative idea. Loved the idea of the iceberg below water being the stuff about you people don’t see

W dance

A little advice for presenting: don’t try to rely on written notes too much. You have a very captivating presence and its awesome watching you present so maybe less/no notes could help with flow and some stuttering

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I like that you included three different types of wind in different places and included all those perspectives in your poem.

I like the creativity of drawing an iceberg as an analogy for the depth of water.

I like that you connected your last proposition to concepts we have talked about in class

From Julia

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I think you engage with your audience very well, it is clear you feel comfortable with the class. I liked how you took lots of videos which helped us feel like we were there. Your iceberg representation was very thoughtful, and comparing this to throwing the rock into the water was very cool. It is clear you took a lot of time to reflect on your propositions and great job connecting it back to the class themes and discussions.

THANK YOU FOR THE DANCE!!! Take took some real bravery!

From Zoe McGrath

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Daniel’s presentation was very entertaining and well done. I loved his interpretive dance. I like how he added humour to his presentation. I also like how he connected his presentation to concepts we talked about in class

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I love how you gave an in-depth explanation and reflection constantly throughout the presentation. The colourful slides really popped!

Sarah L

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I really enjoyed your proposition about water with the iceberg drawing. I feel like it's a very unique way to express personality and it shows the different depths of a person. I think this could be a good way for kids to express themselves as well. I also really liked your interpretive dance. That takes a lot of confidence to do in person instead of recording yourself, so good job!

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Overall, I thought Zoe’s presentation was well thought out and showed great artistic expression. I loved the painting that she made to show how the flow of water felt. I could clearly see how it felt to her and was able to transport myself into her shoes when she was feeling the water. Her short story was impressive. I thought it was an interesting way to document your experience and it is a form of artful documentation I hadn’t considered before.

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Daniel did a good job with his presentation. The presentation itself was done well, and you can tell he put time into it to make it look fantastic. He did seem quite nervous throughout the presentation; however, I believe that he was nervous because of the amazing interpretive dance he did at the end. My recommendation to him is to take a deep breath before presenting and to do his best to have more confidence in his own skills. Both presentation and dance skills.

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I really enjoyed this presentation, as you really showed your audiences multiple forms of documentation. The dance made the presentation really interesting, as it really put laughter and entertainment on all your audiences. I also really enjoyed your poem as it resented deeply on sound. Great job Daniel! -Martin

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It was a very entertaining and engaging presentation. I like how you brought your physical documentation to the class so we can see it. A little advice for the next time: to have more eye contact with the class and rely less on your script. Good job!

Sarah L

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I really enjoyed your presentation, it was great how you included so many videos and pictures for each proposition, felt very included in your journeys! The poem, the iceberg, and wow, the interpretive dance, all fantastic

-Daisy

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I really enjoyed how you connected your propositions to your childhood experiences and how you explain how they have evolved now. The whole presentation was articulated very well, and the poem was very good.

-Makayla Stark

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One thing I enjoyed about Daniel was his poem for his first proposition. I can tell Daniel put a lot of effort into his stanzas and evokes many emotions as he mentioned in his presentation. Daniel showed many cool videos and sounds in his presentation and did a very good job expressing his propositions

From Maya Tennant

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I like how you connected the cultural cooking to memories with your grandma, it provides a lot more context for your reasoning behind cooking the roti. Honestly, all of the connections you made with your childhood provided a lot of insightful context for your reflections. Your use of a mindmap for each proposition to gather your thoughts made it very clear for us as the audience to follow along on your journey. Also your art is insane!!

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I thought Jemma's presentation was thorough and well-done. The variety of artful documentation used was impressive. I honestly have no notes for her presentation. I thought she seemed confident and well-spoken throughout and that her documentation was beautiful, especially some of the drawings she completed.

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My favourite parts of your presentation were the mind maps and brainstorming. You did a great job making it colourful and organized!

Sarah L

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I like how you used personal stories to help us understand your reflection process

You're a very engaging presenter and I liked how you began with a question to the class

I like how visually appealing your presentation and documentations are

I like that you showed us how you started each reflection process with a mind map

From Julia

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I like how you mentioned you liked mind maps because it made it evident that you were using artistic methods that were enjoyable for you. Your drawing was AMAZING! Old Orchard Park is a personal favourite for me, I'm surprised we didn't run into each other when I was at Noons Creek! Very cool you did some research as well. Your presentation was amazing!

Zoe McGrath

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The poem "Depth of the Wind" was really good. Definitely captured the feelings you explained through the videos. I also enjoyed the depth of water drawing. I thought it was an interesting interpretation of the prompt.

-Makayla Stark

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The way you made your presentation is sooo cool!! The way everything is hand written and so colourful is so pretty, the drawings are so beautiful too.

The way you spoke was very confident and the presentation was very clear and well made

-Daisy

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I really enjoyed your entire presentation, which was very engaging, and especially how you went in-depth with your explanations. The format of the slides was wonderfully showcased, and you way you presented the documentation.

-Emily

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Jemmas presentation was packed with energy, as she presented a lot on her background, what she enjoyed and her talents in drawing. I really enjoyed how you made a video on yourself making a comfort food, something your grandma used to make. -martin

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I love the mind maps; they made it clear what steps you took. in each proposition.

Your presentation is so colourful I love it

I like how you talked about revising each creative and what went through your head

Daniel Mendoza

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All of the photos you included made the presentation very easy to follow. The drawing of the roti was really good and captured the story you told us about your grandma. Overall, presentation was very engaging.

-Makayla Stark

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One thing I enjoyed about Jemmas presentation was the presentation. Jemma was a very natural presenter and engaged with the audience. I really enjoyed how she produced the project and her slides were very intriguing. Her slides were fancy and colourful and it was enjoyable to read/watch.

From Maya Tennant

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The formatting and visual aspects of your presentation are SO GOOD. I love your use of colour, drawings, and different layouts. The way you presented was very intriguing and kept my attention.

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Great presentation

Hand gestures and loud voice added to the overall presentation making it better

Maybe slow down a bit when talking. It helps negate some stumbling

Slides are well made. They are enough for us to read but not enough to be boring. Very well done

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I enjoyed how you used the second proposition to reflect on time with your family and how you reflected on wanting to take more pictures for memories. With the third proposition, I like how you applied the breathing exercise to daily life and stressful times.

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I like how you connected the sand and rocks changing to yourself and how you have changed

I like all the photos and videos you included to show your reflection

From Julia

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I liked how you acknowledged how there is peace in being in spaces where less people are. I think thats a great way to approach rainy days, is knowing that you can enjoy the environment in different ways.

It was also nice that you got a sunny day to enjoy different emotions and reactions to the weather. I love the sounds of birds, especially in early spring when it feels like summer is coming!

Zoe McGrath

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I love how much reflection you did throughout your presentation, it was easy to follow. A little advice for the future to add more colour/photos. Overall, good job!

Sarah L

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One thing I enjoyed about Mckenzie’s presentation was the collage she put in her presentation. In her photos you could tell that she really allowed herself to enjoy her propositions and put a lot of effort into her presentation. Very engaging project, great job!

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Mckenzie had one of my prompts for her presentation, I think she did a great job documenting the sounds of water. Being next to an ocean and expressing her emotions throughout her presentation. While showing her past, hobbies and family during her reflection.-Martin

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very solid presentation! It felt a little more relatable than the other presentations which I liked. I loved the videos and pictures, and thank you for doing my prompt well with the memories, it was great seeing your old pictures!

-Daisy

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Your presentation was engaging. I enjoyed the way you calmly explained what you did and it was articulated very well. The haiku poem was really good!

-Makayla Stark

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McKenzie seemed very comfortable during her presentation. I admire how she did not use note cards as a reference for her work and spoke entirely from her own memory on what occurred. I believe this made the presentation seem more casual and more like a conversation. This made the presentation relatable and engaged the audience quite well. Overall, I enjoyed the presentation.

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I love the photos you took, but some more would be nice,

the video of the ocean made me feel like I was there

other than that I loved it

Daniel

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The presentation was visually very engaging, neat, clear, and the documentation process was excellently done! I also really enjoyed the way you spoke and how it can be picked up clearly.

-Emily

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Observing the wind proposition interpretation I loved it.

Tree metaphors can tell you a lot about time and change. And I could relate to your interpretation of always having something to fall back on.

Very clear and articulate. I love it

Daniel Mendoza

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You are a very good presenter Erin, I think you are very well spoken and a confident speaker.

Watching the trees move in the wind is such a great way to enjoy nature, especially when different trees and leaves make different noises or have different colours.

I liked how you associated the salt water smell with your childhood and the nostalgia you felt for your family.

Zoe McGrath

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Your photo collage was very nice to look at, the pictures really showed the weather and difference it can make.

I like how you used stories from your family to connect to the propositions

You're a very engaging speaker and I thought your presentation was well rehearsed

From Julia

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At the beginning of Erin's presentation, I noticed that she seemed quite nervous. I could hear a slight waver in her voice, but then she took a deep breath and relaxed a bit more, the waver disappearing and her confidence in her presentation rising. This was exactly how I'd hope someone who is nervous would handle themselves. Good job, Erin! As for her presentation, it was well done and looked beautiful. I enjoyed the writing piece for your fourth proposition.

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I really enjoyed Erin’s presentation, as she talked a lot about her childhood, family and places that gave her nostalgia. Following and documenting the prompts in her own unique ways.

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I liked the simplicity and organization of the PowerPoint. One thing that stood out to me was how good the eye contact was and how you had no script! Thats amazing.

Sarah L

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Hey Erin! Your presentation was very clean and nice to look at, great format. I noticed as you went through the presentation you felt more comfortable talking which was nice to see as well. The documentation was all nice and the collage was super pretty!

-Daisy

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Your reflections of each proposition was very interesting and allowed me to see different perspectives. The mind map of water was really easy to follow and you explained it very well. I really enjoyed the reflection of your childhood memories at the beach and your written piece to follow was well written!

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I enjoyed how smooth and clear your presentation was and how you spoke so confidently. It was very engaging and done wonderfully.

The explanations behind your documentations were so intriguing to follow!

-Emily

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Overall, I enjoyed Katrina's presentation. However, I do think it could have used some more colour or pictures as I found the consistent white background a little bland. Additionally, I recommend that she work on projecting her voice for future presentations, as I had a difficult time hearing her at certain points from the back of the room. I enjoyed the short story that she wrote about the twin trees and the poem that was written about a nature walk through the forest. I thought both were well done.

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I loved her photos. She did a very good job on her propositions and each one of her creative aspects were very detailed and fun to learn about. Erin also had a good powerpoint with lots of good information and made it very easy to follow along.

From Maya Tennant

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as a suggestion, you could speak up louder; it was hard to hear your voice at times, but projecting your voice could help for future presentations and making more eye contact with the class would the presentation more engaging

Loved the ERAs tour photo,

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I enjoyed the story you shared about your childhood and reflecting on it. One advice for the future is to add more colour in the presentation to make it pop more!

Sarah L

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The concert proposition was cool, you had great documentation for it, especially that short story, very detailed.

THE POEM WAS SO GOOD, I love it when poems rhyme.

Overall the presentation was very well formatted and all the documentation was well organized.

-Daisy

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Zoe

Interesting visuals. Serves so much purpose and evidence of your experience!

Wish you would've read your story! I had a glimpse of it and it looked interesting

Daniel

Lots of energy! The optimism helps entice the audience.

Maybe instead of going on one walk, it would've been more interesting to go on multiple? Either way, I am glad you enjoyed your time outside!

The interpretive dance was a unique way of presenting

Jemma

Makes me so happy to see your execution on the first prompt :) It's meets all my expectations + more for an activity I assigned

The way you vocalize is so charming :)

McKenzie

Wish we could've seen some of the journals and poems you've wrote! Otherwise, it was an awesome presentation!

Erin

Your reflection for each prompt was so insightful and lovely!

Your voice is very clear and articulate. Loved it!

Katrina

I love how aesthetic each slide was! It was visually pleasing despite its simplistic nature :)

Your story was very touching (The Twin Trees)! There was such a strong underlying message to take away

Lovely execution on your last prompt! I'm very glad you were able to share a meal with your family.

by Seyeon Kim

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I enjoyed how you connected the movement of the band to the movement of the trees, connecting your favourite artist's movement to the way the trees moved. Your short story was very reflective and well-written. The presentation itself was well-organized and clear, making it easy to follow along with her presentation.

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I like how relevant your story was to help us understand your reflection about shade and your childhood.

I like how you were able to connect the Taylor Swift concert to the way that trees move together, you had a unique perspective that I hadn't thought of before

From Julia

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First impression, your presentation was very aesthetically pleasing!

I loved how you included such a cute photo of you in the tree house in your childhood home and associated it with what it meant to you.

What a lovely short story about differences and strengths! Your poem was also so nice.

Zoe McGrath

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Your short story summary was really sweet and it made me want to read the whole thing! I love how you personified the trees and explained how even though they were so different, they worked together to create a beautiful forest that everyone can enjoy. I think this story is great for kids and explains the conflicts of growing up with siblings perfectly.

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I really enjoyed all the pictures you included in your presentation! It made it very engaging. I also thought your reflection of a meal time at your grandmas was really nostalgic for me and made me think about my own experiences!

-Makayla Stark

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Katrina’s documentation during her presentation included a lot of cool pictures, the shaded pictures looked really cool and unique. Showing off her experiences in her own unique way. I feel as though the language use was good too, as she used descriptive words that made me feel present in her images.- Martin

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I really enjoyed your presentation and how you presented it clearly and engagingly. Your process of documentation was explained wonderfully.

-Emily

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Zoe

i really enjoyed the visual in presentation and how you showed pictures of what you were doing.

I also like how you connected your presentation to your inner child and how your were able to engage with your similar environment in a new way

Daniel

I like how each stanza of the poem connected to the different types of wind and the video documentations

it was nice to see the connection to Wâhkôhtowin from our seminar presentation

Jemma

It was really interesting to hear about your culture and how you connected it to your grandma

I like how you used mind maps as a way to brainstorm what you wanted to do for each proposition

You are a great at drawing

McKenzie

I like how much you reflected during your presentation because it allow us to understand more how you felt

I like how this presentation as more casual as she didn't have note cards and just spoke how she felt

Erin

The testing water proposition was really interesting because it not also something that you think about

i really like your short story for preposition four because of how nostalgic it was, it even brought back memories for me

Katrina

I enjoyed your short story about the twin trees and the poem you wrote on your walk

I also like your connection between the eras tour and the twin trees

by Jordan Nicol

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One thing I really enjoyed about her presentation was the poem. It was really thoughtful and creative. I also loved how she mentioned Taylor Swift! Great presentation.

From Maya Tennant

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Zoe

• It is good as the first one to go

Daniel

• I like the dance at the end so funny

Jemma

• I love how she started everything with a mind map

McKenzie

• I like how she go without the notecard

Erin

• I love how she connecting everything

Katrina

• I like how hearing connected to the food

- Gary

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I liked how Meghan formatted her presentation. I'm definitely going to consider her presentation for my future projects. Outside of the format, the rest of her presentation was also done well. I enjoyed the short story about Amy and Erin, and also the reflection you did while at the beach. I thought your insight on a bug's perspective on the bus was quite interesting.

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I like how you acknowledged the different land that has shaped you as a person and how it is different here than in Alberta

I like your clear and concise summary of your short story, it was just enough to help us understand the plot while not being too long

I like the different angles of your photos in the photo collage to really give us a full picture

I thought your poem was very creative and insightful

From Julia

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The story about Erin was awesome, me and Erin were grinning while you were talking about it. The presentation looks really nice, it’s very easy on the eyes and nicely formatted.

Good job making 3 prompts about water so different, I got 3 about the forest and I’ve been struggling to make them different so I’ll definitely take your presentation into consideration!

-Daisy

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Meghan’s writing was unique, as she incorporated audio throughout her poem, really letting the readers get a better gist of what’s going on. She showed a lot of history and funny experiences like her date she went on. As she was able to catch the audiences attention throughout her whole presentation! -Martin

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I enjoyed how you began with acknowledging the land we live on, and how the land you connect with most is from back home in Alberta. I don't like how you made Erin the bully of your story, kind of offensive but otherwise it was really well written!!! You seem comfortable and confident speaking in front of the class, and you easily flow from one topic to the next. The bug on the window poem was very cute and thoughtful, how you connected that with rain on the window watching life pass by.

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Your format was so pretty! I loved how you started by acknowledging the differences in the land. Great job there! I also think it's nice how you got propositions about water having come from a landlocked city. Your reflective walking kind of reminded me of erasure poetry. That was a very cool photo of the beach! the last stanza of your poem was my favourite! "smiling first day; tears from a breakup" so cute. The photos from step 4 were so cool, you have great photography skills!

Zoe McGrath

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Reflective walking part was a lot of text. Probably could’ve just gave us the important parts

Amazing poem

Great voice and presentation skills

Relatable prompts

I like the photo you made at the end. Helps kind of tie the whole idea together

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Your presentation had a lot of text in your PowerPoint

I thought the rain and bus prompt was super relatable, just because, as students, transiting is something everyone does, so there is some deep meaning behind it

Could be louder, and it was hard to hear you at times.

I loved it though

Daniel Mendoza

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I loved the appreciation you did at the beginning of the presentation and how you memorized your script. One pointer for next time is to make more eye contact with the class rather than the screen!

Sarah L

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Your reflective short story was very well written and I loved how the elements in nature connected to the characters feelings. It kind of reminded me of the children's book we read a few weeks ago “a chair for baby bear”. I also really liked how you decided to make a playlist for your proposition on water. I’m curious to know what songs are on it! Overall it was a really good presentation.

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I liked how she mentioned the land acknowledgement before she started her presentation. Her short story was super detailed and I liked the concept of it as well as the meaning behind it. Meghan is very creative and I thought her presentation was very well spoken and relaxing. She did a good job reflecting on her experiences with the propositions she was given.

From Maya Tennant

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I enjoyed how visually engaging it was, and your presentation's layout. Your explanations were done great, and overall it was really simple and intriguing to follow!

-Emily

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I could tell that you put a lot of time into it, and your work definitely reflected that! I really enjoyed the photo collage and the variety of pictures that you included. Lastly, I really enjoyed the idea that rain watches ours lives go by!

-Makayla Stark

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Maegan’s presentation was really colorful, as she designed her presentation really well. Showing us stuff she wrote, while describing to us experiences she had with her brothers as a kid. I felt as though this presentation was really beautiful and personal, as she had wrote a lot of things, and used a lot of audio as representation for her audiences.-Martin

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good looking presentation

Nice, deep story

Great connections between the 3 lakes

+10 points for turtles

Amazing presenting voice and when reading the story.

Smooth presentation with no stuttering

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From the get-go, Maeghan seemed comfortable and confident speaking in front of the class. The colours chosen for the presentation were vibrant and reflective of the topic of water and playfulness. I also appreciate how you had multiple different forms of documentation, such as videos, photos, sound excerpts and journal entries. Talking about the endangered turtles shows the extra step you took when reflecting on these playful propositions. Reflecting on the emotions you felt and sharing that with us is very powerful! I, too, love making writing pieces, and I find that each of your stories evokes different emotions and provides thoughtful details.

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One thing I liked about her presentation was how she included Lost Lake. I grew up going to Lost Lake with my family so it was very cool to see how she interpreted the lake into her presentation. I like how she included all the different sounds of the water and did a very good job with her slides. Maeghan did a very good job reflecting her poem in her second proposition and I like how she allowed herself to reflect emotionally rather than just physically. Good job.

From Maya Tennant

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I like how you shared that the smaller bodies of water are actually louder than a lot of bigger bodies of water, I thought that was insightful

I liked you taking the time to share parts of your written reflections

You're a engaging speaker and your project was very organized

From Julia

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Connecting to your past and the environment was a cool way to approach this assignment. I also had a ravine in the backyard of my dads house and we loved to go down there. Very cool :) I liked how you approached your first step with 3 very different water environments- ocean, lake/creek, ravine. Recognizing your love for journaling was a great way to connect the reflections with your own way of thinking and strengths.

Zoe McGrath

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I loved how colourful your presentation was. The photos you took were beautiful! I also enjoyed how well you reflected on your propositions.

Sarah L

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The presentation was well-organized, and the transition to each slide was very smooth.

I loved the Paths Through Life prompt, the art documentation was so creative.

The variety of photos, made the presentation more engaging

Daniel Mendoza

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The way you spoke was very confident and your voice was super clear. The reflections and photos were all very nice. The sounds of the water were very interesting, I never thought about how the size of the body of water affects how loud it is! The art made from the leaves and grass was super pretty.

-Daisy

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I really enjoyed how your layout was very engaging to look at and follow on.

You spoke very clearly and naturally, and it was so wonderfully presented! Your observations were really interesting and intriguing.

-Emily

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I love the reflection on different cultures, It is interesting to see how different cultures different

maybe articulate your voice more, it was hard to hear you at times.

make your slides more colourful and make the font bigger, it was hard to read at times

Good presentation overall

Daniel Mendoza

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Great presentation, I loved your reflection pieces and poem, the rhyming was so good! One advice for the future is to add more colour to your PowerPoint. It helps with engagement!

Sarah L

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Lots of text on screen

Take your time when talking. It’s a 5 min presentation so take your most important things you want to say and take time to hammer those in.

Reflection of cultures was a nice touch

great drawings

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The amount of detail in your reflection was very useful and insightful into how you went about this project. For the second proposition I enjoyed how you used the background to show that there are multiple sources of water, the most common being at our kitchen sink. Your drawing was neat and demonstrated your experience of putting your hand in different water sources. Your poems were unique and accurately portrayed your experiences playing these games.