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Bicing is the best option to get around in Barcelona and avoid crowds. There are many bike stops where you can choose a bike.  It works with a card or with a mobile app but first you have to register in bicing.barcelona.es and it only costs 50€ and you can use the service once a year. Bicing operates 24 hours 365 days a year.

The disadvantage is that you can't rent the bikes just for a few days but it's healthy. Unluckily it also a bit danferous when it rians, so I manly ride a bike when the weather is good

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Cycle CYCLING is the best option to move in/GET AROUND Barcelona. It's the fastest option because you can go through the traffic when there are IS a terrible traffic jam and it's the healthiest option, too, because at the same time you do some exercise.

But, Bicing or your own bike? This is the question.

I prefer Bicing because you pay fifty euros once a year and you can to use one bike for 24 hours all year round. Also, you can to leave the bike where you want because you have a lot of stations.

Xavier Palomino9DT

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In my opinion, have HAVING my own bike is more conMfortable than renting a BIKE FORM bicing every time because you don't lose WASTE time.

Two of the advantageS of this means transport is THAT USUALLY YOUR BIKE BIKE IS lighter and faster than the PUBLIC ONES bicing.

The problem of having my own bike in Barcelona is that someone can steal it because there are dangerous areas inside IN the city. For this reason, it’s important to buy a good lock for the bike!

Sergio Sendra 9DT

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I use the tube to go to work, twice a day.

One of the advantages of this means of public transport is that it takes about fifteen minutes to get from my house to my work. It goes at steady speed and/SO I usually arrive on time.

On the other hand, it is difficult to get on/USE it at THE rush hour because it's really crowded.

I like the underground of Barcelona but I hate its hot temperature in summer./ THAT IT'S HOT IN SUMMER

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In my opinion, bicing is the healthiest options to GET AROUND move anywhere in BCN.

If you are in fit, you can use the bicing all the time, also you can combinate COMBINE differents DIFFERENTmeans of transport.

Usualy you can find bicing stationS next to the subway or bus, BECAUSE there are a lot of stops where you can choose a bike.

You need to pay only 50 euros a yeard, that´s means, that is SO THAT MAKES IT the cheapest public transport in the city.

Bicing it´s available 24h a day during 365 days, that is ITS the biggest advantages (between the diferents publics transports. Bcing is faster than THE car, and you don´t need to pay for parking.

Some times you can´t use bicing when IT RAINS is´t raining, ( but in BCN normaly doesn´t rain - NOT NECESSARY).

Bcn hat a terribel trafic , because there are a lot of people that travel with own car.

Bcing is faster than car, and you don´t need to pay for parking.

Lali Coll 9DT

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The most popular MEANS OF transport it's IS the tube, because it's more quickER if you need to go to the work every day. We have other POSSIBILITIES possibility, like to go GOING by bus or to drive your DRIVING YOUR car , AN D also to go by cycling. But all of then THEM have ARE more unsuitable. The tube it's further FASTER than the others MEANS OF transports because they drive underground, so doesn't matter if there are too many cars in rush THE rush hour. ALSO it's no expensive .

We can move also by bus AROUND for the city, it's very distracting ENTERTAINING because we CAN see the street for THROUGH the windows, but it's slow.

M. Esther Rodríguez

9DT

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The subway is the most popular public transport . I usually take the tube two times/TWICE a week. The advantages of the subway are THAT IT IS really MUCH faster than bus and arrives regularly on time. On the weekends IT HAS had 24 hours service and it's fantastic.

I think the worst THING ABOUT of the tube is THAT dependING of ON the hour, it could be very crowded and sweaty and it's THE hottest INCREDIBLY HOT in summer. Sometimes didn't IT DOESN'T arrive on time, but THIS rarely happenS.

The tube are IS the best option if you want to arrive faster .

Aina Bosch

B1 Dt11.30

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In my opinion, the Scooter is the best means of transport to go around the city, because it's faster and cheaper than other means of trnaport, especially when you need to get to work . With the Scooter it's easy to get around. In addition, the driving a scooter is easier than the motorbike,  because it doesn't  need to change the gears, and is ligther and more manageable than the big motorbikes.

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I am a house making women and I AM also STUDYING studing of English language class,so I usually use THE subway to go to school and DO THE groCerIES. I prefer it because it is easy to USE aprouch,and its IT' S cheaper because, I buy A travling card for A month. It is ALSO the fastest MEANS OF TRNAPORT . UNLUCKILY It is hot in the summer because of underground servise. AND It is crowded in working hours .Some time SOMETIMES I feel very coid in winter AND. I cannot see any outdoor SCENERY sceen.

I prefer to use this meanS of transport because IT'S its faster, quiker and easy to go its station. (difficult to understand) I can travel WITH my all grand LARGE family easily AND I USUALLY ARRIVE ON TIME .With seady speed I reach timely.

SHUMAILA AMANAT

CLASS 11.30dt

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In my opinion, walking is one of the healthiest ways to go anywhere, but this isn’t its main advantage among the other means of transport: It’s also the cheapest one as well.

The main disadvantage is that Barcelona isn’t a plain city, so it could be really hard to go to some high zones on foot, especially in summer.

When I have time, I always try to go everywhere on foot.I find it quite relaxing, despite the traffic and street works.

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Renfe Rodalies  offers routes around all Catalonia so you can travel everywhere

It's an ecological mean sof transport because it works with electricity, although electricity production also pollutes.

Renfe Rodalies shedule is very busy because it works every day of the year and almost the 24 hours a day.

Personally, I use Renfe Rodalies from Monday to Friday because I live in a village 25 km from Barcelona and it's a conveninet way to get to Barcelona city center

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RIDING A BIKE IS It’s a non pollution means of transport. IN FACT, IT IS the most sostenible way MEANS of transport. ALSO, you can make DO some exercise WHILE YOU ENJOY THE VIEWS. IT'S A FAST WAY TO GET AROUND BARCELONA, and avoid traffic jams BECAUSE there are a lot of bike lane and IT is small city.

If you have your own bike AND IT'S ALSO FOLDABLE, it's very convenient, because you can go with it eveywhere,

I can go to anyplace ride ANYWHERE RIDING fFor these THIS reason I love my bike, .I can ride when I went WANT to go out of home, if you have your own bicycle, if not, you need to find some bike station or rental bike. Anyway, in my opinion long terms and you .

My bike is a folding bike, then I can go with it to anyplac. I can go BY the bus, metro or even put IT below the table in a restaurant.

I recommend to use the bike; I think IT is a very good means of transport.

. The weather is nice, then in summer you can feel the air when you ride, in winter you can dress not much clothes because when you cycling your body heat up.

Roman LE

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Every day I go by bus EVERYWHERE in all parts. I prefer travelling to BY bus because for me, one advantage tho take the bus is better because you can see the street lanscape. Also IT IS less NOISY noise on the bus than on the subway.

One DISADVANTAGE inconvenient is that THE bus is slower than THE subway. When I know for sure I'm late for class I take the subway. And the bus is small and there is not much space for many people like on the train.

Aina Juan Bartroli

B1 9DT

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I REALLY LIKE RIDING A BIKE BECAUSE In two wheel’s I can go ANYWHERE to anyplace, I enjoy the view during the journey, for these reason I love my bike. IT Is very easy to ride when I go out of home, AND I don’t need to go to find a rental bike or a public bike,. in Barcelona the name of the company who lend RENTS bikes is Bicing.

Roman LE

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There are many electric scooters in Barcelona. Electric scooters are private and you have to buy one if you want to drive it. Electric scooters are as quick as scooters.

I think that electric scooters are too dangerous because the drivers usually don’t protect their body and they drive too fast. Many electric scooters skip traffic lights and exceed the speed limit.

Electric scooters are the best option if you have to drive in the rush hour.

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Coaches are the best way to go/GET to Barcelona if you don’t live there. I USUALLY travel by coach twice a week from Mataró to go to EOI-Drassanes twice a week and it’s fantastic.

The coach is the fastest public MEANS OF transport. It’s more convenient than the train because you always have a place to sit.

Unfortunately, if you catch it during rush hour, you will be always late like Alice’s white rabbit because of a traffic jam or a car crash.

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This system is not the most popular, but it is a good alternative to the buses or the underground, depending where you want to go

For me, the advantage is that it’s a quiet, comfortable, clean and fast means of transport.  The disadvantage is that unluckily  there are not many lines in other places of the city.

It doesn’t matter if there is a traffic jam because the Tram has its own lane.

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I prefer the AVE because it is very comfortable and fast, you can take so many things with you because you don't have A limit with the suitcases. ALSO Yyou don't need to stop to go to the bathroom TOILET because in the train you have one or two TOILETS PER for car On the train. And you can go to many places because in sSpain we have meny MANY options for the train.

I use the AVE very frequently to go from Barcelona to Sevilla and I prefer the aAVE rather than TO others.

Laia Gimeno 9DT

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When I travel, I prefer to go by train. It's trueTHE train many time is SOMETIMES delayed but when a coach is delayed it can be for one hour at night, THE train only takes some minutes normally.

Also, THE train is more comfortable to do many things, there you can read, and relax easily. If I go on a /BY coach is very easy to me to get dizzy.

Another reason to take the train before coach it's IS that train is faster than THE coach. THE coach always depends of ON the traffic and the journey can become very tiring.

Eulàlia Barrera B19DT

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I think that travelling by train is the best MEANS OF transport because it is more confortable and relaxing.

The are many trains in Catalunya and around of the country. When I travel by train I can read, see the landscape and also I can sleep when it is a large distances JOURNEY

Other important point is the SAFETY security.

The train is more healthier and cheaper than others MEANS transports SUCH AS THE plane.

9dt- Fina Beltran

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Bicing is the best means of transport in Barcelona. I go BY with bicing everywhere. I USE THE ELECTRICAL BIKES FROM BINCING go with bicing electric because it costs only 0,35 euros FOR 30 minutEs AND THIS IS ENOUGH TO GET TO MY ENGLISH CLASS. And with 30 minutes I have enough time for get to English classes

Bicing compared to an owned bike is better because it's cheaper, faster and more practical. .IT Is cheaper because one bike owned costs ABOUT 600 euros approximate.

It's faster because it has AN engine and you don't get tired at all. Finally, I think that IT is more practical because you can check the availability in the app and organize yourself before leaving home.

Irene 9DT

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In my opinion going on foot by the streets of Barcelona is the healthier THE HEALTHIEST way to get AROUND across, specially when you need to go centric TO THE CENTRE OF THE CITY.

I prefer going on foot when my destination is NOT FAR AWAY short distance, because IT is not the fastest way to move around. I think that IT is ALSO the cheapest way to move too, . And another advantage is that you are the most independent you can be, BECAUSE you don't depend on traffic or crowded situations.

I like to go around on foot because I can stop at shops or at the supermarket on my way home.

Maria Campañá

9DT

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The subway is the MEANS transport that I usually use to go for my eEnglish class on tTuesday and tThursday and also when I have to go to my veterinary course in Catalunya.

The advantages of the subway is THAT IT IS really fast and it takes me 30 minutes to arrive, . aAlso IT usually arriveS on the time or IT only takes 3 minutes to arrive another .(it doesn't make sense)

The disadvantges is THAT in the rush hour THE SUBWAY is so crowded and another thing is that you can't ALWAYS have a sit. SEAT.

Maria Pallicer Mercado

9dt

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In my oppinion having your own bike is the best option to go anywhere if you live in a village or in a city with bike LANES line.

Have HAVING your own bike has many advantages, for example you don-t deppend if there are bikes aviable, and you can park near the place that you want go.

The disadvantages are that if you go with your own bike at work or anywhere, and OR when you need go at home it's rainning, you have to catch LEAVE your bike OVERNIGHT, AND IT MAY GET STOLENor the next day you cannot have it. (NEW IDEA?)

I like the bike because is helthier than THE car or public transport, and isn't boring when I use it.

Alba Trigueros. DM 9h

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In my opinion walking is healthier than to get GO by bus, but when you HAVE TO go FAR AWAY to large distance this is a disadvantange, because the bus is faster than on foot. , it WALKING is also the cheapest because when you walk you don't need to pay ANYTHING

I think that if you live in Barcelona city walking is the best option, because is the most beautifull cito CITY

In my case I prefer walking O GO VERYWHERE for everYithing, but when I don't have time I get GO by bus so I try to be healthier.

Scarleth DT 9

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Usually I GO am goining on foot EVERYHERE because I live in the center of Barcelona. I think it is healthier than the bus and I like it. Sometimes I need to use the bus when the distance is long and during the winter. But the bus normally is very crowded and hot ,and WHEN THERE ARE TRAFFIC JAMS on trafic jam it comes very late. I have to wait on the bus station/STOP for a long time.

Yamam 9DT

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Every day I go walking in TO many places to the city. I go walking to work or to shopping. If you live in the town on foot is easier than take TAKING public transport.

For me, the advantatge OF WALKING is that on foot IT is a healthy, fast and relaxing. Also, you can meet the city and the differents monuments.

I think, the weather is the disadvantage, WHEN IT IS rainYing or windy.

Abel Serramona - 9DT

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In my opinion, THE motor bike is the best means of transport to get around in a city. You can avoid to the traffic jams also you can park wherever you want and it is better than cycling if you go far away around the city.

I think that the large motor bike is better than THE scooter because you can go furtHer and you don't have to USE the bus or train. With only one vehicle you can COVER large DISTANCES and also you feel free in the busy city.

Cristian Ramos 11.30 DT

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In my opinion, THE underground has more advantages than THE bus. The first advantage IS THAT THE underground is faster than THE bus. If you don’t have any/MUCH time IT is better to take an underground. Also, if you miss the bus you have to wait FOR a long time to catch another bus and if it’s a rush hour probably you will MIGHT encounter a traffic jam. But, THE underground has one disadvantages because IT usually is crowded.

So, I like to travel by underground because I need to do a lot of trips GET around the city OFTEN, and I don’t have too many MUCH time.

Isabel Muntané

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The bus is a good MEANS OF transport because it’s easy to access, you don’t need to CLIMB steps up, however, on the subway you must do it. It’s also clean, comfortable and less noisy than the subway. It's also good because you can see landscape while you travel, so you may get relax.

On the other hand, this transport is slower than the subway, so you need more time to arrive on AT your destination.

The bus is perfect to move/GET around the city.

Susi 11:30DT

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For me the best way to move AROUND / in the city is walking, because you have the time under control, never are waiting or never are late. it is cheApest and healhiest. Is possible sometime discovery new places in the city or to apPreciate the good season walking.(sorry I don't understand) Normaly if the distance is shorter i prefer walking and also is a good moment to thinking about ourself. But there are disvantage too, when the wheater in raining or is colder normaly the people don-t like walking, or if you work early for the mornig or finish late to the evening you like to sleep or if you are tired foot isn-t the right way to move in

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In my opinion the car will always be the best method MEANS of transportation for those who can afford it. Personally I am thankful to have my father's car because he does me the favor of taking me LETS ME TAKE IT to many places until I can have my own car.

I like the car because for example you are protected if it rains and despite other problems you may encounter such as traffic jams, the difficulty of finding parking and the many TRAFFIC rules

Valeria Gironella 9dt

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The company Cabify is an online cab service which is now more popular than conventional taxis. Many users have chosen to use these apps to book vehicles. Their app can be downloaded from the Play Store or the Apple store.

The main advantage the service provides being able to call a vehicle exactly where you are without providing the address, it's automatic. Besides, you can also know the cost of the service before using it

There are, however, some disadvantages:

They aren't convenient for short journeys, because the minimum price is 5'50 €. So, conventional taxis are cheaper than Cabify for short distances.

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In Catalonia we have/THERE ARE two types of trains: Rodalies Renfe or Ferrocarrils Catalans. I lived in Sabadell for 20 years, so I needed to take them always to go to Barcelona. Ferrocarrils train cars are the most comfortable trains, because they are quieter than Renfe's. And the big fact is Ferrocarrils are IS alwas more punctual than Renfe.

I prefer to take taking Ferrocarrils because, they STOP left me at in the nearest station to my parents' house. And if you need to get on time, listen to me: you must take FGC train!

Daniel Mallorquín 11.30DTb1

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I completely agree IN MY OPINION THE train is one of the best means of transport to get around in Barcelona.

If you use it, you can avoid the terrible traffic jamS, especially during the early morning hours when many people travel to work or study in city.

Also you have no worries about parking or spending energy with paying attention or concentrating on driving.

In Catalonia there are two types of trains: Rodalies by Renfe and Ferrocarrils de la Generalitat (FGC). But recently these types of train have been united and I hope that they WILL improve some aspects such as punctuality and frequency of pass and safety.

Despite all this, THE train is THE fastest, most comfortable and sustainable way TO TRAVEL

Natalia Freitas. 11.30DT