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Plan:

1. More details about the current practice that my reform  is responding to.

2. Add more support for the purpose of schooling I think is most important.

3. Strengthen the details of my philosophy of education by adding 2 more attributes.

Accomplishments:

1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 more sources about my reform.

2. I developed details on the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.

3. Made sure the theme of equity is clearly explained, and is threaded across each section of my essay

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Plan:
1. Develop a clearer message in the Philosophy of schooling section of the essay
2. Add more sources and details about my reform in section 3
3. Create a clear theme and message for the equity section and conclusion
Accomplishments:
1. I strengthened my essay by revising and including my references and in-text citations according to APA guidelines
2. Fixed grammar
3. Cut out or added details that enhanced my essay to become clear and well-developed.

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Plan:
1. To develop better skills in citing and referencing the Philosophy of Schooling section
2. Adding and taking away certain information to be sure both what I am advocating for and my reform is clear
3. Using the best sources to support my argument

Accomplishments:
1. Adding the appropriate and clear sources to my Teacher Advocate paper
2. Added more detailed content
3. Checked grammar and spelling to make sure what I am communicating is clear

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Plan:
1. Add more information about my reform to Section 2.
2. Reread other sections and add or change things from reading Dr. Harris's notes.
3. Create a well-written Section 3 on equity that successfully talks about my reform.
Accomplishments:
1. After writing my paper I was able to strengthen my writing with more information from different sites.
2. I was also able to improve my written citations and do them correctly.
3. After finishing, I was able to gain a great understanding of my reform and how it affects students in the classroom.

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Plan:
1) More sources from research need to be added to the entire paper
2) Need to explain more about how my reform will have a positive impact on both teachers and students
3) Fix paper formatting/ word count

Accomplishments:
1) Adding more and clearer details to my paper
2) More reliable sources were added
3) Grammar was checked and fixed

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Plan:
1. To develop a better clear message in the Philosophy of Schooling essay.
2. Create a clear message for my equity section and my conclusion for section 3.
3. Develop the best references to support my reform.
Accomplishment
1. Writing a clear message of explaining the Philosophy of Schooling paper.
2. Adding the best references to support my reform.
3. Writing the clear message to my equity section and completing a clear message of section 3 paper.

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Plan:
1. Include a well explained message in my Philosophy Essay. Make sure to explain both forms I am advocating for in my paragraphs. And add more information that supports my reform
2. Develop a strong introductory paragraph to set the tone for my paper. Use the new proposal I have written to do so.

3. Add and use more sources in my philosophy essay more to help support my reform.

Accomplishments:
1. Was able to create a strong and well explained introductory paragraph to set the tone of my paper.

2. Added more sources throughout my paper to strengthen my paper

3. I added more information on Essentialism in my philosophy of schooling Essay to strengthen the paper and to define a clear message in supporting my reform

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Plan:
1) Add more information to section 2 about the purpose of education and how it connects to my reform
2) Strengthen my chosen purpose of edu and why I think it's important
3) Strengthen the connection between my section 3 philosophy and my reform

Accomplishments:
1) Strengthened my Section 2 and clarified it's relation to my reform
2) Reframed my specific purpose of edu and highlighted it's importance
3) A strengthened connection between my chosen philosophy and how it directly relates to my reform

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Plan:
1. Re-read chapter 11 and 12 and solidify my knowledge of Equity in US Education

2. Find diverse sources to support my argument

3. Read comments from Dr. Harris and revise each section

Accomplishments:
1. Revising section 3

2. Organizing each section into one cohesive piece

3. Researched my reform more and found sources that were authentic

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Plan:
1. Make sure I clearly explain why my chosen reform is important.
2. Ensure I have plenty of sources that are academic and cited properly.
3. Clarify how my chosen reform is related to my chosen philosophy of education.
Accomplishments:
1. I have clearly defined what my reform is and discussed both the context and significance of my chosen reform.
2. Moved away from just "googling" information on my topic and utilized the library database and google scholar to support my arguments.
3. Reread the section of the textbook on my philosophy and also did some outside research to further support my claims.

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Plan:
1. Find a wider variety of sources of information to use in the paper.
2. Better strengthen the connection between my chosen reform and chosen philosophy of education, as it is not readily apparent.

Accomplishments:
1. What sources I have are well chosen and directly connected to my issue.
2. Very few issues with grammar and punctuations aside from citation issues.

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Plan:
1. Work on finding better sources that will prove that my reform will be better for schooling.
2. Add more examples to show my audience that there are issues with some schooling strategies, and how they can be changed.
3. Look at comments made from Dr. Harris to see what I can improve on.

Accomplishments:
1. I found other sources to further the proof of why my reclaim should be used.
2. With the sources I have, I was able to add examples of why teachers need to be paid more.
3. With the comments from Dr. Harris on my last paper, I took more time to work on citing, focus on my reform and how it will positively impact students and teachers.

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Plan:
1. Do a bit more research in order to strengthen my paper and add more citations.
2. Add better introductory and conclusion paragraphs.
3. Clarify and develop how my reform will impact student achievement in class.
4. Place word count on the correct page.

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Plan:
1. Making a clearer statement on what my reform is going to accomplish.
2. Develop a better conclusion to my paper that emphases what my reform is about and to bring it all together.
3. Give better citations to my work and better phrase it all.
Accomplishments:
1. I changed how my work cited sources looked and changed it into MLA format.
2. I gave better details to that emphasized my reform more and showed exactly what my reform is fighting for.
3. I developed a better conclusion for my paper that completely sums up everything I talked about.

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Plan:
1. Add more references from the textbook to directly compare my reform to the examples given in the book
2. Find more references that have a plan to enact a reform that is similar to mine.
3. Reading comments on previous assignments to revise the first two sections

Accomplishments:
1. Found additional sources
2. Sources that were added were more similar to reform
3. Fixed works cited and some poorly worded sentences

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Plan:
1.) Build a better introductory paragraph that displays a clear message.
2.) Use more than 3 sources to pull my information from to create a stronger paper.
3.) Work on my APA format of the paper and make sure to follow any other guidelines.

Accomplishments:
1.) Developed a strong abstract and introductory paragraph.
2.) Used more resources in finding good research for section 2 and section 3.
3.) APA guidelines and in-text-citations are in better format.

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Plan:
1. Add more sources throughout my paper and make them cohesive to the topic.
2. Make my reform more clear so that it will be easier to add on to and also easier to read all together.
3. To add more specific details instead of stating the broad idea to give it more meaning.

Accomplishments:
1. having good sources with good information to add in my paper.
2. Understanding/learning so much more about my reform from worthy sites.
3. Having decent grammar with little no errors.

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Plan:
1. Make a clear message in the paper
2. Clarify why I chose my reform
3. Properly cite my sources.
Accomplishments:
1. Added more sources to my paper
2. Learned more about my reform
3. Had better grammar and less errors

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Plan:
1. Add more references from the textbook/chapter reading that compare to my reform.
2. Going back over my previous work and learning what I can add to strengthen my writing.
3. Develop a better conclusion that will tie everything in my paper together and make it piece together better.

Accomplishments:
1. Adding more sources from the textbook/chapter reading.
2. Going over the errors and fixing them in my paper.
3. Learning more about my reform so it could strengthen my work.

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Plan:
1. Be sure to use valid information to support my points
2. Be more descriptive of the relationship between Standardidized testing and actual class grades
3. Be more descriptive of some of the pedagogy being used.

Accomplishments
1.More factual details about how standarduzed testing can be detrimental
2.Describe how curriculum can be subjective rather than objective for students,
3.Further elaborated on overall student achievement

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Plan:
1. Add more sources instead of opinionated information into my paper.
2. Write a clear and more specific idea to base off of my reform.
3. Strengthen my ideas for my reform by using better sources to support my paper and argument.

Accomplishments:
1. I strengthened my paper by being more specific and using/finding actual resources to use than being so oppionated in my paper.
2. I found more resources to use that I actually understood and were passionate about to help me be more interested in writing my paper and understand more about my reform.
3. I made sure to correctly quote/cite my resources used in my paper.

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Plan:
1. Discover more reliable sources for the information added in my paper.
2. Make sure that I do research on my topic and really understand the effect of my reform.
3. Make sure that I am not being repetitive and include research that is relative to the topic and not just sounds good.

Accomplishment:
1. I was able to find information that was very beneficial to the flow of my overall paper and was able to provide insight on the advantages and disadvantages of my reform.
2. I was able to gather data that supports my reform.
3. I was able to cut back on the amount of information I provided by being more focused on what needed to be said.