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Planning and Design- Everything is well drawn and shows a lot of symbolism.

Movement- The flowers easily guide my eyes trough the artwork.

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His details are very nice and his lines are nice and dark and vary by the area i like that

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I like the background design. I think you can overlap the drawing and have rythm to the drawing. I think the visual balance can be improved.

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They did really well with overall attention to detail. But they could work on adding more drawings, overlapping, spacing, and repetition.

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Visual balance - nice thoughtful artwork and balanced  composition

Movement - has good overlapping and arrangements .

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the symbol is storms im guessing. good job spreading things out on the paper

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You did a good job with the repetition on the symbolic background.

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His work isn't finished but his background is nice

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planning- off the bat i can tell the symbol of this art work is flowers. Art work is beautiful

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Planning & Design: I see that there is symbolism in your drawing and illustrates a very interesting design and seems to be very creative with original and new drawings
Visual Balance: the drawings look to be very creative and are distributed evenly. you have made a pattern in your design and looks very good. however you could add more elements to fill the empty space rather drawn or with the use of the paper, and color later in enhance your drawing all together

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Movement--You should overlap shapes and objects to create movement

Design-- Add more and different objects to meet expectations on planning and design

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planning and drawing - has good symbolism

visual balance thoughtful and balanced composition

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Visual balance- Their is a lot of white spots and areas that could be filled with more pattern.

Repetition- Has many repeating patterns.

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Visual Balance: There is great visual balance. I think it is perfect.
Movement: I really like the way that you repeated your face and slowly got smaller. I think you did great with movement.

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I like the overlap and the rythm. My suggestion is to add pattern to this drawing.

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Repetition- your repitition of objects is nice, and there's never really a blank space. you have a good rhythm, but you could have overlapped more.
Planning and Design- you have good symbolism, and your illustration is very interesting. your patterns look nice also.

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Visual balance - There's a lot of overlapping but you cant really see the details of the tool.
Movement - is good and have a lot of details.

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By looking at the Design I can somewhat tell the story behind it. You did  excellent on balancing out your design.

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A very good job with everything there is nothing really that is wrong

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Everything about this was good i really like how you put the words in the eyes and the writing on the forehead.

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Movement--You might want to try overlapping to create movement.

Repitition--Repeat objects to make more pattern and rhythm.

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They had really good rhythm as your follow the designs down the page. They could work on spacing as it mostly focused on the right side of the page.

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planning and design - isn't finished
movement-isn't finished

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It looks good but all you need to do in finish your work and trace

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This is a horrible drawing  need alot of improvement in this drawing. There is no rythm, overlaping and, visual balance. I think it would be better if you redo
it.

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Very nice drawing. You have many eye catching patterns. All you shapes and figures does overlap. You repeat the pattern of using the swirl design.

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Repetition: I think you have a great pattern. I like the swirls which creates movement in your art.
Movement: There isn't that much overlapping that catches and guides my eye.

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I see where the focal point is on the paper but its not completed. shows good background work

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visual balance: From your drawing I can see that your shapes and use of imagery is present and fill the entire paper nicely.
Repetition: You only used repetition twice with two different original drawings which looks nicely on the page however you could add more to create a sense of unity in your work but overall I really like your drawing and looks very nice

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Repetition- shapes have been repeat to form a pattern or rhythm .
Movement- should work on your overlapping

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I like how detailed his drawings are I can tell a lot of effort was put into his details its a strong suit

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More details could be there but overall a good job

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The art work is awesome and meet the standards on the rubric

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Repetition- your thunderstorm clouds that you repeated look great. it shows nice rhythm and it kind of gives a story/symbolism. it does enhance your overall composition and it looks nice.
Planning and Design- your artwork does create a interesting illusion, and if seems like you contain some symbolism.however you could have added more overlapping, and balance.

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More details could be there maybe point out whats the focal point and more overlaping

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planning you used old works to fill in spaces along with new things nicely
Movement there are many things that caught my eye through out the paper. still many open spaces though.

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Planning and design-- All the patterns you used in the middle are kinda distracting.

Visual Balance-- Since all the patterns are in the middle, the edges have a very light weight. You might wanna try adding more detail around the edges

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Repetition - Few shapes have been repeated but it's hard to see whats the pattern is.
Movement - is good a lot of objects is overlapping and show patterns.

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her designs are very unique and she uses an interesting way to display her facial features I'm impressed

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Movement was Exceeds Expectations because of the overlapping faces it looked very nice and it made me look around the paper

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Needs alot of more detail and balance to the art work. There is no rythm or movement to this drawing. I think what you need to improve it is to  overlap.

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Planning and Design: There is only one drawing of your own used, use more to meet expectations. The drawing is not interesting. Make it more intriguing so that it becomes interesting for people to look at.
Repetition: There is no rhythm. There is a pattern but it is not the best and it takes up half of your paper. Erase some of the shapes and try to overlap so that the viewer can be guided through.

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I feel like everything exceeds expectations

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planning and design-needs to have more symbolism.
Repetition-needs more shapes repeating and more composition

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Plan & Design: there does not appear that you used symbolism or manipulated the space but I can see that you attempted at the top and should continue to do so through the entire paper so you meet criteria.
Repetition: There are no signs of repetition in your design but I can see if you give more time you will continue to that add hence you started drawing another picture of yourself in the drawing

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You have patterns but I'm not sure what you are trying to illustrate. You have a repetition in shapes. There's nothing in the drawing that is overlapping.

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Movevent - Their really isnt many movement due to the lack of overlapping .

Repetition - I see good repetion because i see the football lining up together

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Movement- Is very well done, everything is smooth, and it makes it easy to go from one side of the artwork to another.

Planing and Design- I can't really tell where the focal point is.

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Movement- your movement is great, mostly all shapes have been overlapped and arranged nicely. your artwork does guide my eyes, and all of your shapes look intentional.
Visual Balance- everything has been distributed evenly and there's no awkward space at all. it looks really nice.

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The rythm of the drawing is good and, the visual balance is perfectly balanced and there is alot of good symbolism that tells a story.

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Planning and Design - She did a good job spreading out her drawing and symbolism.
Visual Balance - Shapes are spread out and balance to create a symbol.

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Planning and design- overall everything is placed nicely but your lines with the marker are stopped, you can see crooked line.
Visual- there are hardly any open spaces

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Planing and design: you could have used some symbolism, and interesting illustration.
Movement: The shapes could have been more overlapped, it didn't really guide my eye.

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Visual Balance- Its very evenly distributed and very thoughtful. But is a little confusing

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Javelyn.M you need to do more overlaping more patterns spread out your shapes a bit more instead of having them so close distribute your eyes nose and etc a bit more than they are needs more original drawaing because so far its only one make sure you and picture tgat means a story for your back ground 

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Javelyn.M you need to do more overlaping more patterns spread out your shapes a bit more instead of having them so close distribute your eyes nose and etc a bit more than they are needs more original drawaing because so far its only one make sure you and picture tgat means a story for your back ground 

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Plan & Design: There is a sense of symbolism in your design and from your design I can that football means a lot to you and what you do.
Repition: You repeated the shapes nicely but I do not feel as if they make a complete design, the patterns and rhyme do not flow into one another.

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The drawing exceeds the expectations I would just recommend the use of newspaper to cover up some of the lines on the hand as it dose not fit as well with the drawing.

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Visual Balance Needs Improvement because when i look at the paper i see alot of the same patterns but it does exceed expectations for repetition.

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There's no overlap, therefore I'm not sure what I'm supposed to look at first. You have alot  of dead spots. There is no visible pattern or rhythm.

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I see many pictures maybe add more details to the back ground because tgeres nothing and it just looks really plain

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Movement- The background is connected making the artwork a lot more smooth, Exceeds Expectations.

Planning and Design- I can't tell where the focal point is, but other than that every thing else is fine, Meets Expectations.

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Visual Balance- was used beautifully.
Movement- there is a lot of overlapping and the way things are set it guides my eyes through smoothly

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Visual Balance: There are very little drawings to create balance but the drawings look good. Add more drawings and try to overlap them to make a balance between everything.
Repetition: There is no pattern or rhythm. Overlap your drawings. Try to have a story in your art to create rhythm.

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There's a lot of details and uniqueness in this drawing and her use of the scissors is really nice

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Planning and Design- your artwork shows some original drawings. and i see your symbolism/ meaning because of your repetition/pattern. it looks really good.
Visual Balance- your overlapping, and shapes are spreader out nicely and evenly. however, there are some unbalanced blank spaces, but other that it looks balanced.

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Repetition-you should repeat more things to have a beter pattern or rhythm.

Movement-you should try arranging more to create more overlapping to make the drawing stand out.

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Movement - He can have some more overlapping objects in his drawing.
Visual Balance - He could put some of the same objects on both sizes.
Movement - Is very good a lot of objects is overlapping.

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Design - the concept is nice but she could've put more time into it .

Movement- It shows movement because the clouds are moving in a horizontal motion. Nice job.

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He does well with repetition as certain shapes are repeated, he could use more visual balance throughout the artwork and use more space.

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Visual Balance--Your work is really balanced, but it does look a bit heavier around the center.

Suggestion-- You should also try putting the words you have on the paper in the upper half of the page to create more balance and unity.

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Movement: A lot of overlapping was used in your drawing of the clouds and created a path for my eyes to follow nicely although nothing overlapped your face
Visual Balance: There are some shaped and imagery in your drawing but does not look distributed throughout. lacks some composition

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I see alot  of patterns. But I'm not sure of what is the focal point. You overlapped a little to much to the point were I can't see the figures.

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Movement- Your movement is very well done, it exceeds expectations. But maybe you could connect the three roses, on the top and the bottom, together.

Visual Balance- Exceeds expectations, very well done.

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Movement- Your movement was very well done. But there are some marks that you missed tracing

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You need to add more details in your face and you also need more images. You only have one image and it is not complete.

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Repetition: I see a lot of repetition with shapes instead of art work. I don't see any rhythm or pattern that enhances the artwork. You should add more drawings that are yours so that there can be rhythm.
Movement: There is a lot of movement but I think it is too much movement. Maybe take out some of the patterns in your self-portrait drawings so that it is not so cluttered.

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Movement--You should overlap more to inspire movement.

Repitition--Try repeating shapes more to build rhythm.

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Design - Nice movement with the leaves . Alot of emphasis on the face .

Balance - It shows great balance because im focusing on one part of the picture and it makes the background emphasized.

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He does repetition really well as he repeats the masks and it brings you down the page. I would recommend more overlapping.

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Visual Balance: The shapes could be more neatly drawn.
Planning & Design : You could have used a specific way on a interesting illustration .

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Visual Balance- you filled your space in an even way. no blank space looks random, or out of place. it's nicely spread out.
Movement- your shapes have been arranged in a nice way. it does guide my eyes through the artwork. however, you could overlap a little bit more.

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design- several drawings and patterns were traced but I don't see symbolism.
repetition- is use very nicely and I liked the way you used old drawings to fill in space.

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Movement - She can show more overlapping.
Repetition - She have some of the same drawing she can draw some more.
Visual Balance -  She can put some drawing overlapping to have more balance.

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Movement- you should try to fill space more on the paper but overlapping is great.

Repetition- you should try to repeat things more often to create a better pattern or rhythm.

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Repetition - You only have the hand drawn once in your design.  In order to create a rhythm, you should repeat the hand around your focal point.
Movement - Many of your shapes are overlapping which creates great movement in the piece.  My eye follows along  leaves up to the face.  The hand, however, seems to be randomly floating in the background.  I think it should be repeated and overlapped to fix the problem.

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Design - The drawings you repeated were added in a really interesting way.  I like how you added parts of the portrait into circles.  However, I do not see symbolism or a story.
Balance - There are a lot of shapes and images in the bottom left corner.  To create more balance, you could add more to the top right part of the collage.