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Hello Sam! I really liked the part where the shoes were digging him into the hole, and the ground kept changing colors. It was described really well, and it managed to seem so hard to believe that could happen in real life yet so realistic. Another thing I really liked was the man in Australia because I thought he was pretty funny and I like his name. The third thing is that I like the beginning because it isn’t simply just “I walked into the shoe store”, and it actually had some stuff before that which was really neat. Overall, this was a really good read. Good job. :)

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Hey Sam i really like your story i liked when the australIan man was talking and how we just taped rockets on a par of shews but wen you said Suddenly the ground around me started becoming a very neon and vibrant yellow color AHHHH, IT'S  SO HOT, I thought as my head started to catch on fire. Wold he be dead from the amount of heat becuse the earths core is about 9,392° Fahrenheit so I think he wold be dead.

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The thing that got me most interested was the story because parents do not understand what video games really are. Also, I liked it when you put periods so that it will sound better.Something that got me really off was the fact5 that you did not put the right color for the sum up transition word. Btw the picture up top is Edd from Eddsworld

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Hello, Sam! It’s me, Adam, and I wanted to say that I really enjoyed your memoir! My first star is that I really liked the descriptive writing right in the beginning of the memoir. It got me hooked immediately, and it got me to keep reading your memoir. In addition, I really liked how much you got into the part where you got stuck on the red light. You were saying it felt like waiting for a cake to be finished, and that it felt like a million minutes, and I Just really liked that part. However, I think you can dive a tiny bit deeper into the lesson. But other than that, I really liked your writing piece, and I look forward to more from you!

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One thing I like about your was when you said “we sped past the houses as fast as legally” which made laugh and that’s another thing you put humor in writing which’s not what I saw in the one I read. Although a wish I have is that what happened to your cat and why you need to bring him to the vet

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I liked tords the end you rowt ,as relaxed as me on a Saturday on the couch, I also like the title.

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I like how you were mentioning things that you have done with your friends (aka me) and what you do in your free time. Another star about your amazing about me is that your quote, ending, and beginning is hooking me on to read your books. However maybe you could turn your list of dislikes into sentences but other than that it was awesome!

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One thing I really loved about your writing was the very crazy title.  I think that you used very amazing word choice for that! Another thing I liked was how you listed a lot of things you like to do.  Something that I think you could add is more details to your hobbies.One thing I really loved about your writing was the very crazy title.  I think that you used very amazing word choice for that! Another thing I liked was how you listed a lot of things you like to do.  Something that I think you could add is more details to your hobbies.

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One thing I really loved about your writing was the very crazy title.  I think that you used very amazing word choice for that! Another thing I liked was how you listed a lot of things you like to do.  Something that I think you could add is more details to your hobbies.One thing I really loved about your writing was the very crazy title.  I think that you used very amazing word choice for that! Another thing I liked was how you listed a lot of things you like to do.  Something that I think you could add is more details to your hobbies.

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Hello. It’s your friend, Adam. One thing that I really liked about your writing piece was when you said you stupidly danced to the Goosebumps theme. I just thought it was funny. Another thing that I found great in your writing piece was all of the things in your writing piece that I did not know about you. I got to learn more about you as a person, and I can make a connection to rocks in your shoes. After football practice I get turf in my shoes, and I forget to dump it out. I thought it was pretty cool that I could connect to that. However, I think you can add a little bit more detail in your writing piece about a few of your things. I understand that you ran out of space, but maybe add just a little bit more detail. Other than that, it was a writing piece of greatness.

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hey I Realy liked your bob cat part i would also realy hate that.

I also realy liked how you said you and your friends dance to the ghost buster song.

I just think you pasted your quote 2 times.