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Tell them whats wrong and then explain and then fix it after you are done.

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Tell them whats wrong and then explain and then fix it after you are done.

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Comment on areas of the narrative, either if they are good written or mistakes. Be specific and respectful.

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specify the tense of the story

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help them to generate ideas of how to improve their writing

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help reword sentences when needed

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Put some advices to make it better

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Give them honest and respectful responses back to their writing.

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good punctuation, capitalize words necessary, add on ideas respectfully

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good punctuation, capitalize words necessary, add on ideas respectfully

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maybe help them with grammar but be respectful, "hey maybe a comma should go there."

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Be honest

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dont just call it bad because you dont like this type of story.

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dont just call it bad because you dont like this type of story.

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be honest but don't just tell them it was good give them some feedback

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telling someone that there's something wrong and how you think its best to fix it. and what you honestly think

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Be constructive, don't just put that you don't like it. Also be specific

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be specific on what it's wrong

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Realize that some people may have more difficulty with writing than others.

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Tell them you like their idea but adding more could be beneficial 

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Tell them you like their idea but adding more could be beneficial 

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Be creative

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be specific and respectful

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Be constructive, don't just put that you don't like it.