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My goals are to make sure everyone can understand the padlet and have a lot of content. I believe I got a 4 as provided by the rubric because I did what was needed and put goals down. I worked very hard on this project.

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This is my padlet I hope you like the padlet. Stuff for a school project I see shown here.

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How Scrooge was treated and who he became because of that. 

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How Scrooge was treated and who he became because of that. 

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Scrooges mother died in childbirth so hi she father thought he was the cause so Scrooge was sent to boarding school and was lonely.

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Figuratiave language affects the mood because imagery describes stuff in your head and can describe the theme of the book weather its dreary or happy.

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Bias: you care about something somuch that you will not accept any fact or oppion that you will be unfair and will only be one sided.
Fact: a fact is the truth of a topic.
Oppion: an oppion is a side in a arguement that you think is right.

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So really the book is about what is scrooges fate will be when he passes away. And the plot also is how Scrooge changes his life and how he lived his life.

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I'll show some images.

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http://cdn0.locable.com/uploads/resource/file/304507/ChristmasCarolPage.jpg

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https://img.clipartfest.com/12d5bb5f344cb63e54ff7a5fce8b66ed_figurative-language-grade-5-figurative-language-clipart_500-323.jpeg

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You can use figurative language in a book like imagery to describe something or a hyporble to make something feel like it's going on forever or onamonipea for a fight in a book?

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In a conversation you might be talking about something wild so you might use an hyporbole, a simale , or a metaphor. Also you might use those types of figurative language to tell a joke.

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I can see the bias because Ms. Cribby took a day off from work and not take any calls or things for work that night to watch A Christmas Carol. And every year asks Mr. Spencer for permission to show the movie in class even though Ms. Cribby knows that the answer is no.

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The bias I have is really about the election. I see that I lean towards Trump instead of Clinton. The reasons are that in the debates I hear things that I don’t like that Clinton wants to do. And I like the things Trump wants to do.  So I guess it's unfair because I haven't really done much research. And then I get a image who I think is better just from debates. That is how I portray events in my mind. From the start I gain a thought who I

think is better and then it grows and I ignore the other side. Once a other side has made a claim that I don’t like I put bias into the opposing side. The ideas and ads can shape how I think and maybe make me change sides. People can influence this to. So much I can get into an argument with people. So that would be my bias.

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So what i think is that MS.cribby's opinion does not matter it is what they do it is like my family we like the denver broncos cause we were born in denver and MS. cribby's was born in new england and so she would like to go for the new england patriots because her family go for the patriots and that i would go for the broncos.

This one has not good grammar missing a capital I. But it talks about football and her opinion on the patriots which isn't part of the question and does not answer the question.

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The bias in Ms. Cribby’s bias/opinion is towards the story, “ A Christmas Carol”. She grew up thinking that the 1951 A Christmas Carol Movie, is definitely the better proportioned than the 1984 film. She states an argument over why she thinks the 1951 film is a great film and why she prefers that film. She states why she thinks Alastair Sim took on the act of Scrooge well in the film. This makes this an excellent example bias, the way she plots out what she is against, and brings in what she favorites, in a friendly argumentative way.

I know that my coach is very bias towards the Raiders. Earlier in the day, she posted a picture on Instagram of two of my teammates w/ MAJOR dislocations, in her caption she included much of the game and how she thinks that team has wimpy players. One of their players dislocated their pinky, and he was ‘screaming in excruciating pain’, she then compared how much it probably hurt when one of my teammates has a dislocated patella, and the other a very, VERY crooked big toe. She captioned, “neither of them were ‘screaming in excruciating pain’. This, I thought was a hilarious bias towards the football player.

This one talks about football but is using the football as an answer. And explains the bias in both parts of the question. This answers the question completely.

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The sound resounded through the house like thunder. Every room above, and every cask in the wine-merchant's cellars below, appeared to have a separate peal of echoes of its own. Scrooge was not a man to be frightened by echoes. He fastened the door, and walked across the hall, and up the stairs, slowly too: trimming his candle as he went.

You may talk vaguely about driving a coach-and-six up a good old flight of stairs, or through a bad young Act of Parliament; but I mean to say you might have got a hearse up that staircase, and taken it broadwise, with the splinter-bar towards the wall and the door towards the balustrades: and done it easy. There was plenty of width for that, and room to spare; which is perhaps the reason why Scrooge thought he saw a locomotive hearse going on before him in the gloom. Half-a-dozen gas-lamps out of the street wouldn't have lighted the entry too well, so you may suppose that it was pretty dark with Scrooge's dip.

There is some Personification here because in the sentence every room above, and every Cask in the wine-merchants cellars below, appeared to have a separate peal of echoes of its own. The narator is trying to say as if the rooms could talk which is a human characteristic.
This could be a hyperbole because  hearses were not around at that time and the sentence gives us a grim feeling as if some death was there. This here can support the hearse statement with the injury from a splinter bar.  We see the same word comes over and over again as of echoes there are 2 echoes and they obvisously have the same sound. There was some repitition in this section.

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In A Christmas Carol Scrooge hates love. The reason why is he was never was loved. Later in the book when the first ghost comes you see why. (Spoiler alert) Scrooge's mother died in child birth and so his father thought that he was the cause and did not like Scrooge so he was sent to boarding school. That is what makes him be negitive against everybody. But when he looks in his future if he were to carry on to act like he did he would have had nobody except for his own workers care for him. The third ghost is the one who changes him. He does not like how the second ghost has told him that he must look out for want and greed.

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Consonance is when there is repeating sounds in the same word and the sounds are at the end of the word.

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Personification is when the author gives things that are not human human abilities.

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An Assonance is when there is the repeating vowel in words that do not rhyme.

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An allusion is when the author of a writing piece puts a historical referance that is assumed that the reader knows.

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Allirteration is the constant repeating of sounds in a writing piece.

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Imagery is when the author describes something so good that you can picture the description in your head.

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A hyperbole is when you Exaggerate the truth by adding insane numbers like a million.

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An metaphor is basicly  a simile that does not use like or as.

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A simile is when the author of a book or an article uses the words like or as to compare something that are not in common.

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An Onomatopoeia is when the writer of something like a book or an article uses words describing sound effects like buz or pop or bam.

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The fog and frost so hung about the black old gateway of the house, that it seemed as if the Genius of the Weather sat in mournful meditation on the threshold.

The figurative language here shows what is the weather like with British fog. And that the house is a very dull place that Scrooge lives in. And that scrooge is very lonely and that might explain why he is so mean.

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I am so bias to one thing… HOCKEY the reason I am so bias towards hockey is because my love for the sport. My dad grew up playing the sport a ton. But when I was two we moved away from the place were hockey was large colorado. But when we moved to Nashville North carolina there weren't any rinks close so I didn't fall in love with the sport till I was really 7 and to tell the truth that is late for a hockey player. So when we moved back here I started to play hockey at the Longmont Ice Pavilion. I was a first year might when my dad asked for me to play up and luckily i was good enough to play up. After that year my parents wanted me to play more competitive that's when I started to fully love the game and at the same time that's when people started to get opinionative. I'm sorry baseball fans but baseball is not as fun or even close to athletic to hockey. And soccer fans Iam even more sorry when a player gets flicked in a ear and falls on the ground crying that's ridiculous I mean hockey players take hits that are really hard also soccer is a sport  that is wimpy. I mean it is so athletic but still the players are so wimpy. I'm sorry but I'm unwilling to accept any other sport is better than hockey.

The grade I give this is a 4 because this piece of writing meets all requirements and this person understands what bias means. Now the grammar was off I fixed it with spell check  Also the names of states are not capitalized. And there could be more spaces in this piece some spaces are missing I fixed one but some are missing.

That is a big flaw in this article but other than that this writing shows that this person knows what the meaning of bias is I will give you an example at the end when the author says he is not open to changing sides on the best sport and says that all other athletes are wimpy. So we can see the unfairness of not willing to see and a firm no. That is what bias is. I would give this a 4 because this shows that I understand bias and it shows that I know how to find bias in an article. Now it would be harder in an article that is on a topic but I think I could do it. That would be why I give myself a 4.

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From the book I see that Scrooge wasn't cared for when he was young so that would be a reason why he did not care for others and why he is so mean. The ghosts changed how Scrooge acted. It I see so cool to see how everyone changes. Some cared when Scrooge died most people did not. His made\e took his bed curtains and all of his belongings in a dream.

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through and through, and saw it standing before him; This means that this would be an alliteration because the words are used over and over like the words and and the word through.

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The bias we see is that scrooge has a bias for money and that you must work hard for money.
His opinion is that you do not need to give
a fact is that he is really mean

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Imagery- the formation of mental images. Or pictorial images used in peices of art. Picture anything in your head that would be an example because that is imagery.

I would say that I have a 4 overall for trying the extension. I think the fire up its self is a 3 because it meets all requirements. I think more optional stuff would help me get a 4 for the firework.

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The fog and frost so hung about the black old gateway of the house, that it seemed as if the Genius of the Weather sat in mournful meditation on the threshold.

The figurative language here shows what is the weather like with British fog. And that the house is a very dull place that Scrooge lives in. And that scrooge is very lonely and that might explain why he is so mean.

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A word I learned is dogged it means stubborn. I also learned a word called genial it means to be friendly and outgoing.

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And yet that face of Marley, seven years dead, came like the ancient Prophet's rod, and swallowed up the whole. If each smooth tile had been a blank at first, with power to shape some picture on its surface from the disjointed fragments of his thoughts, there would have been a copy of old Marley's head on every one. This is a simile because it compares comparing the death of Marley to the ancient prophet's rod.

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merry christmass