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what does that even mean -chamoun

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Make th word bigger? -Chamoun

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Add a magican wand! -chamoun

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i agree with the comments about the texture! also the sizzle steam/cackling sounds pretty good and maybe move the text a little down if that's added? -ys

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Ugh. Love the period, great addition. simple is better. -chamoun

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I like how it extends, but try to make the stroke of the word higher so it pops out more

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I like how it extends, but try to make the stroke of the word higher so it pops out more

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-AC

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Quality colors and sends message. Make ore readable not a chirp.
TM

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Like the size changes in Z's. Am i watching the bee movie or something?? -Chamoun

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I like how you did the shape of the letter O, maybe you could change the style of the letters to get a better of what vroom feels like. Also maybe add some shadow. MB.

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i like how you made the word go diagonal across the page, but why are the O's grey? Also, change up the words. KM

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This is really good. you don't need to fix anything. NB

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I like how the letters are jagged. I would suggest making the circle around the word more jagged as well. MT

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I feel like a knife is hitting my skin! -chamoun

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like: font
suggestion: make more complex
JL

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Maybe add a background color
AM

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I like how the letters are scattered but maybe add lines in between the letters like tangled string? BC

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I like the pink because it reminds me of fairy dust, but If you want you can try and add some sparkles like pixie dust
-AC

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loving the way you sized the words differently to each other!! i agree with the above comments, maybe add a little more motion into them or make the second buzz a little more balanced like the first one? the fourth 'z' kinda throws me off a little... -ys

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I like how you emphasized the "ACK" of the word
I think that you should add  color to the background or lines to the background.
ER

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I like the color choices but maybe make the the word darker and bigger so it stands out more. BS

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I like the color choices but maybe make the the word darker and bigger so it stands out more. BS

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I really like your design idea overall. The colors seem to all blend in a way and there's so much to look at. Maybe you could add an effect to the word to pop out so the audience can see that it's the main idea. -MB

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Roar, this vroom is very agressive. needs work though. Ive seen better work from you. -chamoun

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I feel like the background should be a different color, so the coloring of the word would stick out more. That or add outlines of to the word.

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I like the letters and the effects. but you should add a background. NB

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i really like the oval in the back and the color scheme but maybe you could add a bit more emphasis on your words like steam or zig zags to look like its crackling.
MK

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I like how the letters where scattered! I would suggest making them a bit bigger, or some of the letters a bit bigger and, as said before, alter some of the letters to give it more of a sound. MT

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Absolutely filthy. No constructive criticism.
TM

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like: misty effect
change: maybe make Poof more opaque
JL

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If I did not know the meaning of buzz i would immediately figure it out from your drawing. Maybe add some more effects to bring out the motion of the word on the tongue NH

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If I did not know the meaning of buzz i would immediately figure it out from your drawing. Maybe add some more effects to bring out the motion of the word on the tongue NH

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I really love the texture you've created with the scribbles and I love that it reminds me of bacon. Maybe put some use of the circle in the pack, like make it a pan? Add sizzle steam coming up?
SJL

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Amazing, its as if im sitting next to a ratle snake. possibly fix the H though -chamoun

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Amazing, its as if im sitting next to a ratle snake. possibly fix the H though -chamoun

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i love the simplicity so far, and a suggestion is maybe add some horizontal motion lines maybe? -ys

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This looks like the cover of a scary movie TH

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Maybe make the letters thicker, like the B, also maybe add something around the word
AM

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I like the H and the O's, but I think you should do some more stuff with the T and add a background color. NB

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Vey well done. Be more creative!
TM

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I like how you emphasized your letters, maybe you could add a shadow effect to make the word pop out more. MB

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I like the period at the end, but I would add a circle or something around the word to bold the word a little more.
-AC

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I like how it looks like a comic book
AM

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the design is fantastic and i love the shadow/dark colors. i personally don't think you have to change anything. KM

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This is really really good the colors, shapes and everything works great together
WH

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I like the color choice to make it appear like bees but I think you could alter the letters. Maybe make them jagged? SJL

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I look the shape and the line under the word. I would change the back round color to black. BS

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I really like the font of the H and T and I like how you emphasized the two O's.
Maybe you can add a background color instead of white.
ER

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I like the color choice. maybe make the word a little bigger. KM

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I like the colors and design of the word, it really adds to the meaning of the word.

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I love your color scheme! Maybe add a stroke of dark red around the letters- Select the letter, and then click on the Stroke Box in your tool panel- Miss Palmer

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I like how the end of the word gets squished together. Maybe add arches to the bottom of the word. BC

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I really like the how the letters seem to be shaking! The color scheme is good, it gives the feeling of dirt/ground like an earthquake. I would suggest add a few more "r's or make the "r" a bit more drawn out to really show the sound of the word. MT

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I love whipser probs the best one on the sheet u should go pro 

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I love whipser probs the best one on the sheet u should go pro 

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NH

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like: colors are look good together
change: h is a little big, maybe make some of the other letters bigger
JL

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Maybe add a background color
AM

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I like the style of the letters.
Choose a more defined background color.
TWM

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I like how the word is written the way a wolf would howl
TH

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I like how you extend the howl, it really paints a picture in my mind. Its like i'm sitting next to a wolf! Though its kinda blurry, maybe just the site. -chamoun

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I like the letters, but maybe you could add an exclamation mark.
NB

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How does this represent Vroom at all. Fix it. Idk what I like yet lemme think
WH
I have since thought and came up with nothing

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I love the use of the background misty-effect. I maybe you could add sort of wisps or clouds to fill up the space? SJL

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the colours are actually very nice and i really like the way the red fades out!! a suggestion is to make the 'L' more of a continuous diagonal line bc it looks more like an 'S'. -ys

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I think the placement is good as is. I also really like your font choice. Since the word is mumble, I recommend to start the word out big, then as it repeats it gets smaller. MB

I love the repetition that you used! Maybe use a slightly darker grey- Miss Palmer

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i like the color contrast but the B could be bigger and a shape behind the word to  give the shape more emphasis.
MK

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I like the font of your word.
One thing that you can add to this is maybe repeating the word more than once and making it smaller each time.
ER

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I think your design is very good.  I would make the colors more dull , to show the boredom of the word. BS

I love the feeling of your word. Maybe make the letters a little more grey- Miss Palmer

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I like how the H drags out throughout the whole word. Maybe center the word. BC

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I like the creativity of the O's. Do more with the h and t.
TWM

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I like how it fades off at the end TH

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Insaneeeeeeeee, i think the color scheme is kinda fresh. -chamoun

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I like how the howl was drawn out; it's how I would imagine the sound! I would suggest making the "o"s a little bit bigger than the rest because often when you think of the word "howl" the O sound stands out the most. MT

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I like the concept of spreading out the letters but I think the letters could also be altered. SJL

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I like the font, but I think you should make all the letters big and ot just the ACK part.  You could also make the colors orange and black if you want.
-AC

The idea of the font you chose is great. Think of different colors to represent the font- maybe yellow and orange color scheme?- Miss Palmer

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I like the vroom it conveys the meaning of the word well. Add some shadows.

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I like the vroom it conveys the meaning of the word well. Add some shadows.

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WOW! This is really good. I love how you pull out the ssss like a snake does. I would maybe make it fade into he back ground.
WH

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I Like how it fades away at the end. i think you should make the blue in the back darker and make the howl come out of Tom Brady's mouth. KM

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is there anything i should add or take away?

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Are the colors okay?

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idk what else to add

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What else should I add

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How can I make the B look better

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can't make clouds on the o's, what else should I add

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Do I change the colors
Tom Brady is a god

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Is my design very simple? Should I add more detail? Are my colors too plain?

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is the colour choice good?/does it generally convey the message?

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Not sure about the placement, is it good to the left or should it be somewhere else?

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I do not know what else to add to my word

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what should I add to the bottom or top?

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Stuck on what else to add..

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I don't know what else to add on the bottom or anywhere

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I dont know what to do in the background, what colors should i do

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Should I make my colors brighter?

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What should I do to make it look better/what should i add

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What else should I add?