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Should university students live away from their parents?

Agree – students should live away

Disagree – students shouldn’t live away

Argument – explain opinion

Explanation – explain argument

Evidence – Provide facts / example to prove explanation

We need to acknowledge that living away from parents bring a lot of benefits.

Agree:

We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. This is because when they are all alone, students will have to deal with life’s problems all by themselves, and thus gaining more experience in how to lead a life on their own. (explain argument) As a matter of fact, many Vietnamese students studying in the US have to work part time in order to pay for their living expenses, which allows them to learn how to manage their own financial situations years before graduating from school.

Emphasis lead-in for argument:

…..we need to admit that

…..we need to acknowledge that……

…..it is worth mentioning that……

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Connective for explanation:

·             This is because…(explain argument)

·             the explanation for this could be the fact that …(explain argument)

·             the basis of this is the fact that …(explain argument)

·             The point I want to emphasize is (the fact) that …

·             what we have to realize is that …

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achieve, gifted, unreachable, have aptitude for smth, evidence, emerge, facilitate, the common public, give a boost for smth

facilitate smth

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waste away, dedication, motivation, pour the hours/ sweat / blood... into smth, exhausting / exhausted / exhaustion, lose sight of the goal / smth, rigorous, endure, professional development

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helps with providing maintenance funding

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helps with providing maintenance funding

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advocate , tremendous, utility, rental cost, renovation, expand, attract, practical, allow sb to V

advocate (v) for smth
be a strong advocate (n) for smth
pay for utility
afford  utility

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exclude the poor from these cultural experiences

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exclude the poor from these cultural experiences

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obstacle, wealth discrimination, bar sb from smth, economically disadvantaged, anti-educational, reduce, prevail, reduce/ increase the exposure of smth = make smth more / less accessible

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racial discrimination

adv + disadvantaged

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We need to admit that the entrance fee for some places such as museums or art galleries bars the poor from these cultural experiences. This is because many obstacles in there help them to get more knowledge which increases the exposure of different cultures in the world, even their culture, and thus the prevention will make them anti - educational. In particular, the poor are economically disadvantaged, which lead to the fact that they cannot study in good condition, so some places like museums are suitable for them to know the cultural values.

It is worth mention that it can takes much time to charge admission for museums or art galleries. The basis of this is the fact that people have to queue to buy tickets or check the information when they order online, and thus it is the obstacle that people hard to get in easily if there are hundreds people want to visit.

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We need to acknowledge that it is needed to have an entrance fee in the museum and art galleries. This is because museums and art galleries have to pay money for some cost. For instance, some museums and art galleries have to spend money for rental cost or when they want to expand the place and renovation, they must uses large amount of money to do so they can attract more pp come to their’s .

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We need to acknowledge that an entrance fee for museums and art galleries helps with providing maintenance funding. The basis of this is the fact those places need paying for utility such as saving all the value or paying money for rental cost. In particular, all the exhibitions in practical terms are easy to be broken, which allows people to preserve carefully due to those values and attracts the tourists that come from everywhere to visit.

There is no denying that the charging admission for museums or art galleries can be consider as a fee to study the history of all invaluable artifacts. The explanation for this is the fact that the history of a country which allow people to know more about their traditional and cultural values is essential, and thus individuals who even have not gone to school can get more knowledge. As a matter of fact, people can ask the instructors of the museum to tell you all the history of anything without paying except entrance fee, which is a tremendous advantage to learn and expand a high amount of knowledge.

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Undeniably, It is worth mention that charging a fee allowing people to enter the museums and art galleries will expand maintain funding. The basis of this is the fact that the renovation of facilities or space these days costs quite a lot of money like a tremendous high rental cost. Hence, art galleries and museums can use it to pay for utility and always be a strong advocate for art.

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We need to admit that we cannot be a success without dedication.  Many people are born with gift skills in fields such as sports or arts. However, they might not reach the goal if they don’t pour blood into practicing and developing those skills. Take Ronaldo as an example, he was such a talented footballer as a kid. Nevertheless, Ronaldo cannot be the well-known sportsman as now if he did not endure the rigorous progress, be exhausted and disappointed. Thus, although we have a natural talent, we cannot be a diamond if we do not feel the pain.

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There is no denying that charging a fee allowing people to enter the museums and art galleries will bar the poor from these cultural experiences. It is probably anti-educational and wealth discrimination when economically disadvantaged people have an obstacle to access to art genres because everybody has their right. For example, there are many famous free art spaces in the world such as London museum, Guggenheim museum, MMCA in Korea,...

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There is no denying that having aptitude for arts or sports means natural advantages of those fields for people to succeed. The basis of this is the fact that the gifted can do those much easier and faster than the other, which give a boost for the passion of them. As a matter of fact, Leonardo da Vinci, who only need a short time to learn painting with his passion, was one of the best artists in the world when his famous pictures were preserved in many museum though there is not many pictures being saved.

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There is no denying that charging admission for museums and art galleries can bar people who're economically disadvantage from these cultural experiences.The basis of this is the fact that they only use money for some important things bring benefits to their life so they can't have chance to know abt any countries's culture in the world by visiting to museums or art galleries, this will make them be anti-educational.In particular, some school in Vietnam usually take their student to museum, that way will easier to make student know abt history clearly than study in the class.

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It is worth mention that having aptitude for sports and arts means natural advantage each person have. The explanation for this could be the fact that people are gifted in different things, and when they're interested in sth, they will try their best in that thing. Take an example, many parents in Vietnam force their children to take part in many extra class such as drawing class, ballet,... but they can not be better than a child having talent in these subjects.

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We need to acknowledge that we can not come if we don't try our best. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that beside the talent each person have, we still have to pratice and go through some rigorous difficulties to develop our skills. Take Messi as an example, although he has aptitude for football, he has to put his life into practicing, until now he become one of the best footballer in the world .

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We need to acknowledge that having aptitude can help us get success in arts or sport because it means that we have natural advantages. The explanation for this could be the fact that success is still unreachable for a lot of people but when you are gifted, you emerge easily and quickly. For example, Nicholas McCarthy - a famous English pianist, who has natural talents, always try to give a boost for his artistic ability.

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We need to acknowledge that people cannot achieve success in arts or sports without their dedication. The basis of this is the fact that those people have to pour their blood into practicing the skills that need for the fields or they will lose sight of the goal. For example, most famous footballers cannot maintain their impressive form when they do not play in a long period of time due to injury or not rigorous diet, which may lead to time exhaustion and waste away.

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It can't be denied that success in arts or sport comes not only from talents but also from effort, hence, success can not come without dedication. The basis of this is the fact that we will waste away our gifted if we don't pour the sweat into practice and gradually losing sight of the goal. As a matter of fact, athletes have to endure exercises for professional development like rigorous diet or practice all day.