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I need to keep working on adding dialogue, specifically dialogue that reveals information about the speaker and the meaning in the moment.

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The activity that was most helpful for me was the "first, last, and times I realized something" activity. It helped me remember small meaningful moments I had forgotten!

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"The bus crawls to a stop, the worn down brakes screeching as the momentum slows. Grabbing my large backpack - the one that I’ll be living out of for the next month, filled to the brim with layers of clothes to protect my warm Texas skin from the harsh Scottish winter - I lumber down the aisle and step off the dusty steps of the airport transit bus."

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Adding small detail and small actions to my writing are some ways that I grew in my craft. By zooming in one the small details and movements, I'm able to help the reader picture the scene more.

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These are my plot story mountain and my emotion story mountain. I really enjoyed chunking up the events in my story and figuring out how I was feeling!

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One way I grew as a writer was using correct punctuation.

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I want to work on making sentence that you can picture in your mind.

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My favorite page is the last part of the story.

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I grew as a writer because I learned how to use better discribing words.

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The PN Story Arc helped me out, so I could
focus more on my inner thoughts instead of what what happening around me in my writing.

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I wanna keep working on using puncuation.

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My siblings were sleeping like angle, but not me at least tonight, i dont plan on sleeping i was still in shock of what just happend.

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The PN story arc because it helped me plan out what to do and what was going to happen in my story.

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I   didn't  even  realize  for  a  few  seconds  that  I  slammed  my  left  ring  finger  in  the  car  door.

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To be honest i have all ways loved writing! Especially made up stories straight out of my mind!

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The I saw a small brown kitten. Its hazel colored eyes sparkled in the light. Then I felt this sudden feeling. It was asif our heart where connected. Then I new this was the one

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I think I grew as a writer by using discribing word.

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To remember to keep putting Capitalized letters in my sentences.

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-Kelci

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My cousin hates being woken up so I was super scared to get yelled at by him for waking him up.

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mine is last Christmas i got to spend it with my grandma and dad and to little brothers. chloe webb

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The story arc because it helped me plan my story better.

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I am able to write a deeper meaning in my story now and have better grammar in it to.

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I need to work on adding more dialogue in my story's to make them more exciting or more spooky or sad etc.

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When I was walking home, I couldn't stop smiling to myself. Lanaya seemed liked a cool person to hang out with.  - Kelci

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my reading teacher helps me improve my reading. chloe webb

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reading other peoples story's helped me find what i need to do more. chloe webb

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The personal story arc really helped me. I actually had to think about what emotions I was feeling, what was going on in my head at that very moment. -Kelci

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my whiting and reading more books. chloe webb

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I think I grew as writer by adding more important things and more detail.- Kelci

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I wanna keep working on conclusions. I can tell that I struggle trying to come up with one. -Kelci

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Finally i saw my first friend again after six years

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Finally i saw my first friend again after six years

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The story arc is my favorite and the reason i didnt take a picture is because Im at home and my journal is in class.

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me and my family were on a road trip back to texas from my hometown missouri

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me and my family were on a road trip back to texas from my hometown missouri

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story arc writing and highlighting .

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I grow by putting " ' " and "," after sentences where it goes

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Writing and remembering to put capital letters in the first letter of someones name, or at the beginning of a sentence.