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The points raised in the last feedback have not been addressed Jolie.
It is not very clear what it is that you are doing and how your work is supported by research.

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It gives a feeling of sadness even through the vibrant colours

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A sense of longing/loss

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The use of Shibari and futureism in her work gives a sense of surrealism which makes it the most interesting to me

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This is also interesting to me because i like the surrealism and alien style

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Restraint // they may have chosen this subject to portray alot of things

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I was interested in the dynamic poses that shibari creates and the flow of the limbs if they rely solely on rope,

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I wanted to create a dark and satire idea to adventure rather than a fantasy setting.

I liquified the submerged body inside the water to distort it

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Fantastic start to your Final Major Project. I love your transformation mood board, it's personalised to your interests uses a variety of reference images and includes a good amount of detail. Your mindmaps are gorgeous visually however I would love to see more detail of all of your ideas maybe you could write a few sentences about what each theme means to you. Don't forget to:

1. Research for each theme-dictionary definition/synonyms/5facts/5artworks/5photographs. Make it personal to your interests.

2. Planning-write what you did in week 1 of your Final Major Project. Then what you intend to complete in week 2.

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I looked at styles that interested me and also linked to the topics. I mixed dark themes with the topics to see how they’d mesh together using the formal elements, next week I’d like to research environments and art styles and take inspiration.

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Adventure Moodboard. - Arcane Artists Research

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Adventure Moodboard. - Arcane Artists Research

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I’ve been studying the landscape and environment of the animation Arcane. It interested me because of the use of colour to set the tone for the environment as well as the vibrant LED like colours contrasting against the gritty and dark landscape, they use NPR ( non photo realistic) rendering to create the unique style.

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I researched the animation used for transformation in the show, they use colour to contrast with the characters to show this change. The colours run through the character model to shift and light up underneath the skin. They also use the veins of a character to show the transformation within. The vibrancy of the colours used to show transformation and the dullness and grittiness of the character model is what makes the art stand out. I intent to use this to inspire my final project .

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I also separately researched the way that Arcane renders face models. They use a mix of 2D and 3D rendering to shade the face in a unique way.

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I researched the game Borderlands because I liked the thick black outlines of the art style, it creates a huge depth in the shading to make the environment more dramatic

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I intent to combine my research of Arcane and Borderlands to create a thick shading to contrast with vibrant neon colours .

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Jenna Barton (Dappermouth Art) uses dull colours to contrast with light to create an ominous digital painting. And commonly places animals where the shouldn’t be. There is never any explicit gore or anything scary, but the art sets a tone of danger and fear by having the subjects eyes stare directly at the viewer. I intent to incorporate this into my work by trying to create a presence with my art.

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I used watercolour but the effect wasn’t what I wanted as the colours were too diluted.

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Their concept art for mortal combat has the same fearful tone but the colours are used to show portals or a transformation

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I included some research on Tim Burton to explore his style as I have always been interested in the way he shows expressions and created a scene, using a dark pallete and gaunt features.

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I love the digital response you have created for Arcane-do you know the name of the designers who made this character? I'm looking forward to seeing more of your responses and designs.
The corridor side by side photo and response was a great experiement- are you planning to do more of these?
Will you please do an Action Plan column and write week1,2 and 3 just a quick list-it's really important for assessment.

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Primary image drawn to incorporate styles

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Primary image drawn to incorporate styles

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A quick response to the facial structure in Arcane to inspire the style of my final project

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Week 1:
Monday: Mood board for each theme
Tuesday: Mindmaps for each theme
Thursday: My first response to the themes

Week 2:
Monday: Project Proposal
Tuesday: Second response
Thursday: Third response

Week 3:
Monday: Sketching / skill building
Tuesday: Finish responses
Thursday: Artist research and create moodboards

Week 4:
Monday: Shape, angle and size sketching session, reflection of chosen the
Tuesday: Artist response 1/5 and 2/5 complete,
complete project proposal
Thursday: Artist responses 3/5, 4/5 5/5

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- What are you going to be doing to progress your project?
Im going to experiment more and try to narrow my ideas down
- How are you going to be doing it?
i’m going to be using acrylic to try make the colours pop as they do in my artists research.

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I Tried to incorporate Jenna Bartons style into my work to practice using lighting to illuminate a dark scene and create an eerie scene. I also used Arcanes LED lights to add the lighting.

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Transformation Response using Artists Research

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Transformation Response using Artists Research

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I tried to use Arcanes transformations to inspire my own and incorporate them with my style. Also using sharp vibrant lighting to illuminate the scene.

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Timelapse of new response using an older drawing 

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Timelapse of new response using an older drawing 

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Earie everyday.  Liminal space
Dysfunctional Americana

Think about which characters would inhabit this space...find visual research to work from..

working towards indie game concept art

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Gregory Crewdson Search instead for Greg Crewdson

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Using arcanes transformation style to incorporate with my ideas that im expanding from transformation

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I used mental canvas to create an eerie scene that you could explore and interact with the environment

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I plan to make something 3D to further my ideas rather than solely experimenting with 2D Digital and 2D traditional, I will explore some 3D artists to help with this

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- 3D Sculpture of torso or head
- Cracked and chipped to reveal a large hole
- Inside of the hollow sculpture would be some form of life i.e flowers or something to represent transformation.
- I also plan to put something that represents humanity or death inside to create a grim effect rather than a surface statement.

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Form of life inside broken sculpture

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I want to create a sculpture that isn't conventionally aesthetically pleasing to look at, and to make it uncomfortable. I plan to do this by hollowing out parts of the face, to make it only vaguely human, and to add replicants or something to represent organs.

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Hyperbeast skin from csgo

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Maria Rubkine

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A promising start to this project with some competent digital pieces so far, well done Jolie.

Here are some points for you to address:

"Action Plan Diary": - Update with your activities for each week, detailed as follows:

- What are you going to be doing?

- How are you going to be doing it?

- What will you have by the end of the session?

Reflect on your responses using the following prompts:

- what is the aim of the piece?

- what went well and what did not?

- what have you learned from      completing the piece?

- how could you improve and how is this going to inform your ideas, moving forward?

Your mind maps are visually pleasing but could do with more text - use synonym generator to help you.

There seem to be a gap between Zombies, Cannibalism and 3D "sculpture that isn't conventionally aesthetically pleasing..." at this stage of your project development. To bridge this gap, could begin by exploring traditional VFX.
Ray Harryhausen would be a good start.

Looking forward to seeing the updates, taking the feedback provided above into account.

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Due to the lack of resources that I would have if I did a 3D final piece, I’m also exploring street art and the materials that I could use for that.

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Miriam Hoffman does pieces that have intense colour used in spraypaint- drippaint styles. This is useful to me because I can bring my research from Arcane into my piece.

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Banksys sculpture that uses both aspects

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- I explored 3D work and experimented with some machetes however the clay was air drying and was difficult for me to work with, the second option was using mannequin heads and torsos, but practising on them would require buying them and bringing them to college - therefore both ideas were inconvenient.  My second method would be spraypaint / paint markers and other media to create a mixed media piece that would incorporate all of the styles and artists that i’ve researched so far, as well as including the theme that I’ve researched

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You presented your work skillfully and with confidence. Your presentation was well prepared. You communicated your ideas, research, and development clearly. You shared your knowledge of your project thoroughly. Your plans for your final piece were extensively thought through and comprehensive.
Kafui and I both recommend that you upload all of your digital work-even if it's unfinished. Upload the photos of the clay experiments Well Done Jolie Fantastic Work!

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Rough sketched out ideas for fmp

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I used techniques and styles I had learned from Borderlands and Arcane concept art to create something related to the theme of transformation. I also used contrasting colours  in the style of the 3D artists I had researched.

Unfortunately I couldn’t complete it as a mixed media piece as i’d wanted to due to complications with the college wifi and being unable to print anything. Ideally i’d still like to do this by placing it on a board and bringing the transformation theme forward by having flora come out of the crevice, as well as incorporating some horror styles that are my own to show imperfections in change and how the act of changing may require some things that aren’t so appealing.

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- I created my final piece by using a variety of styles I had explored during my research and using elements of them in a final digital piece.
- My step by step process was compiling images from artists I’d researched, sketching elements of them and creating it into my own piece.
- I used the checklist to keep track of my tasks in this project.
- I’ve used these processes in previous projects and I will most likely use the same ones in future projects.
- My work habits tend to be to rush forward in my ideas so I have to pace myself out to counteract that.
- I’m proud of how abstract it came out and how I used my style combined with Arcane, Borderlands and other artists, however I think in terms of research and planning it’s one of my best, however in execution I could have done a better piece.
- I would have liked to improve it by making it the mixed media piece I intended it to be, by bringing it to life with dry flowers and adding in elements of gore art, I still intend to finish the piece like that however it will have to be after the deadline.
- My use of clay was less successful because I wasn’t enthusiastic about the air-dry clay and it was hard to work with.
- I’ve responded to Arcane concept art, Borderlands concepts, Mirriam
Hodfman and some Banksy pieces, as well as Petra  Collins.
- I enjoyed each artists/arts individual style and how unique it made the pieces they created, as well as dynamic posing in Petra
Collins work and use of colour in Arcanes designs

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Section 1:  Rationale (approx. 150 words)
Before this course I had digital skills and I was skilled with technology, now those skills hae improved to include photoshop. During the previous units I learnt different skills that would help further my future work, such as efficiently researching different artists and their work as much as I can in order to take inspiration and techniques and use them in my own work. I’ve also learnt how to use the formal elements to further my thumbnails and smaller experimental sketches. I have also learned how to develop my work further to create a more thought out final piece as to not rush into a final drawing when I get ideas. I have broadened my ideas and techniques to include paint as well as traditional pencil sketches and digital art.

Section 2: Project Concept (approx. 250 words)
For this project I am