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critique and feedback - the story of austin's butterfly - Ron Berger

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Start with the 'why' not the 'what'

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Build a 'different ethic' where redrafting is not seen as 'failure'.Quality means rethinking, reworking and polishing.Celebrate 'going back to the drawing board'.

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Golden Circle -

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Do you ALWAYS have to redraft the whole thing?

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Who is the audience? What is it for?

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Dylan Williams