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The point of view for the story  "Theo's Song" is in third person.

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This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

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The point of view in my story is going to be third person.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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What are the universal human rights? - Benedetta Berti

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The setting of the story" Theo's Song" is in the black smith shop around the 1900's -1910's maybe in Arizona.

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What do you have to do for this assignment?

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My story takes place in a planet where only blue and pink aliens live in .

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How to recognize a dystopia - Alex Gendler

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The characters in the story " Theo's Song " is Theo, The Decider, The Authorities, and Neama

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Student Model for the Writing Prompt

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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Another rule is that Blue  aliens aren't allowed to have names so they are called blue alien then with a certain number at the end of their "name ".
The blue alien that starts the protest is called " Blue alien#1

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The conflict in the story " Theo's Story" is about how unfair it is that the Authorities are giving the orphans the jobs that they don't want. For example Theo wanted to be a Singer and instead they made him work as a blacksmith.

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How will you be graded for this writing?

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Event #1: Blacksmiths are working in the smithy.
Event #2: Theo is taken from the nursery pod and is told his assignment.
Event #3: Neama explains why the government gives people miserable lives.
Event #4: Theo makes a resolution.
Event #5: Theo sings against the Authorities .
Event #6:(Climax):Theo is taken by the Authorities and gets punished .
Event #7: Neama and other blacksmiths to sing and stand up to the Authorities and the Decider.
Event #8(Resolution):  The government realize what they are doing wrong and let all the blacksmiths get the job they want .

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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The pink aliens finally notice what they are doing to the blue aliens is unfair. So, they change all the rules and the blue and pink aliens live happily together.

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The theme of the story," Theo's Song" is to never give up and you will accomplish all your dreams . I think this is the theme because in the story Theo never gave up and he accomplished his dream of becoming a singer.

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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All the blue aliens in the beginning are shy and then in the end they begin to speak up.

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The conflict in the story is how the blue aliens aren't treated fairly by the pink aliens.The blue aliens aren't treated fairly because the pink aliens are in a" higher class."  So for example blue  aliens aren't allowed to wear clothes with bright colors but pink aliens are allowed to wear bright colors. Also blue aliens don't get to chose the career they want to have (  the pink aliens get to  choose the jobs the blue aliens have). Another unjust thing about the society that the blue aliens live in is that the blue aliens aren't allowed to learn as much things as the pink aliens and there is police aliens that watch all the blue aliens to make sure that they are following all the rules.  If the blue aliens don't follow the rule they have t give the police aliens about half of there earnings of money ( since blue aliens get jobs they don't want , they barely make enough money).

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What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write.

When I researched," How does it feel to live in an unjust society ?" People explained how they were always sad or mad because they wouldn't be treated equally or fairly.

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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The climax of the story is when a group of blue aliens start to protest about how it isn't fair how the blue aliens can't be treated as equally as the pink aliens .

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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The theme is to never give up on your dreams because if u keep working hard all your dreams will come true.

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Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you.